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[KiNeSiS]

What up!
It's been a while folks.
Anyway i just uploaded some shit this is from actually last winter.
It's called who wanna battle opinions and all that appreciated
-One

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/kinesismusic.htm

I'm aware some people hate hip hop if thats the case spare your negative remarks.

the bottom two tracks are just random battle tracks which are old as dirt.
The second down is vocals stripped off of the beat for a collab that was to far away.

 

[bishoptl]

downloading now

 

[Boogie]

wtf, Kinesis is back?

SELL YOUR MAGAZINE RACK, IT'S ALL OVER

 

[Ninja Scooter]

URL LET ME LINK YOU!

 

[bishoptl]

Hmm....cut the first 4 bars, for starters - or stick some samples/yapping/whatever in there. It's too sparse right now. The 2nd rapper's flow (Damien) is kinda lazy, which I like, but you can spit lazy without sounding half asleep...which is exactly this guy's problem.

Lyrical content? Meh. Same shit (I'MMA KILL U FAGOT) I've heard a million times before, and from better sources.
Musical execution? Not that bad. Rearrange and properly space out your verses and choruses, chop down the track by a good 40 seconds, and put some beef in the lower end.

 

[Vennt]

Impressed! (Who Wanna...) - Although Cypress Hill may be hunting you down to steal back their melody (Just joshing, but it did instantly remind me of that track.)

One small critique on the mix, the drums seem to 'sit on top' a little too cleanly for me, I'd have considered using heavier compression on the drum tracks via a 'bounce down.' - But even that is personal preference.

(Reverb won't work in this instance to 'bed down' the drums as the underlying melodies are too sparse.)

Kudos, I'll be taking notice in future

 

[Justin Bailey]

I dunno it kinda grew on me as I was listening to it. It sounded a bit on the repetitive side, like something I could listen to in the background but nothing I could really devote my full attention to. I like the old school feeling of it - I'd rather listen to that than anything 50 cent puts out.

BTW I'm not a huge hip-hop fan, but I listen to my fair share of it.

 

[KiNeSiS]

Thanks.. And Thanks again
Yeah that was a rough cut rough draft i am gonna put the shit talking and all that in but i want opinons when its finished i'll do that. I'll take the drums into consideration but that was intended

 

[Dilbert]

Word to all of your mothers and your peoples!

 

[Willco]

Your music is scary and frightening. I had to put my hands over my dear mother's ears.

... I think I need to go pray now.

 

[KiNeSiS]

BOO!

 

[KiNeSiS]

Damn! This fell off the charts of GAF faster than a lead weight come on those who listen drop some crit.