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[imastalker co.]

my new online portfolio

looking for feedback on the layout. im trying to make it as simple and streamlined as possible.

anyways, no homepage yet. the current homepage isn't really a homepage, but just the photo viewer i guess. you just click the picture to move on the the next one. the thumbnails have a bit of an over load, i still need to work on that.

but yeah, like i said, feedback on the overall layout of the site would be greatly appreciated.

 

[imastalker co.]

no good?

 

[Drozmight]

I think I'd probably do it in flash instead to help wow people who'll be looking at it.

 

[ToxicAdam]

I didn't find it very intuitive (meaning I wasn't compelled to exlpore it). But, I still grabbed one of your pics and made it a desktop background, thanks.

 

[imastalker co.]

I didn't find it very intuitive (meaning I wasn't compelled to exlpore it). But, I still grabbed one of your pics and made it a desktop background, thanks.

really? which one?

 

[imastalker co.]

i just updated with a cheap homepage, and the other final touches.

www.phantomile.biz

 

[aoi tsuki]

Quick suggestions:

1. Categorize your shots into more recoginizable sections like model, scenes, b&w. Use links instead of a dropdown box for each section and make them accessible on each page. Feel free to visit another photographer's site for suggestions.
2. Pick out 10-15 of your best shots for each section. Get rid of blurry shots, successive shots (shots with a small changes between shots), etc. Your portfolio should represent your absolute best work.

Out of curiousity, are you taking these with the same Canon A80 (IIRC) as you did with the last few shots you posted on your LJ page? Regardless, those are some great shots.

 

[ToxicAdam]

really? which one?

http://www.phantomile.biz/pixelpost_1.4.1/index.php?showimage=21

That one. Nice shot.

 

[Dagless M.D.]

I'd change the 'door to phantomile' with a image of the text. The plain text looks a little cheap

 

[imastalker co.]

Out of curiousity, are you taking these with the same Canon A80 (IIRC) as you did with the last few shots you posted on your LJ page? Regardless, those are some great shots.

with the exception of the pictures that i took of the asian guy, and the guy dressed up like link, i took shot everything on a canon A75.

last 2 sets i did on a rebel xt.

I'd change the 'door to phantomile' with a image of the text. The plain text looks a little cheap

tell me about it. just looking for someone that can make something nice.

 

[UtadaBarkley]

I like that chick with the big breasts. I like it as a whole... Very sleek looking, nice layout, etc. Screw flash stick to this I say Did you take the pics? Interesting composition. I like "quake" for various reasons.

 

[imastalker co.]

Did you take the pics?.

yep.

I like "quake" for various reasons.

hmm...now i wish i had given the pics meaningful names, cause i have no idea what picture you're talking about. i just named them all to get it over with and move on to uploading the next pic.

 

[Jdw40223]

I like that chick with the big breasts. I like it as a whole... Very sleek looking, nice layout, etc. Screw flash stick to this I say Did you take the pics? Interesting composition. I like "quake" for various reasons.

wow i have to agree. THe chic in the dirty bathroom: great concept. I love the pics. I took two myself. smoke and quake. Very nice photos.


edit: smoke: http://www.phantomile.biz/pixelpost_1.4.1/thumbnails/thumb_20050601170736_img_4406.jpg

quake: http://www.phantomile.biz/pixelpost_1.4.1/thumbnails/thumb_20050601170659_img_4395.jpg

 

[imastalker co.]

ba ba ba bump.

i need more feedback please.