Okay , lemme get this straight- people are judging the writing quality of a demo that features almost 0 dialog and not a single story sequence ? It's a few action cutscenes and some running with lots of shooting.
The second part of the demo was also only about half the full stage, apparently before you start the combat mission itself there's a more typical "have a chit chat" section where you can talk to everyone that you saw in that stage. Probably get some exposition on what was happening there beyond the obvious. You know, stuff that would improve the overall experience but would be unnessecary for a demo ?
Idono, I do strongly feel that anyone who would cancel a pre-order after trying this demo out never intended to buy the game in the first place and is probably among the many on neogaf who inexplicably hate bioware because they paid full price for dragon age 2 and ... wait for it - hated it in spite of spending 40 + hours with the game.
If I were a more typical internet user I'd be posting about 2 dozen "haters gonna hate" pictures right now. And really, if people want to have retarded opinions they can go right ahead. I'll just enjoy playing an awesome game in the mean time.
I'm glad I saved some DLC in ME2 so I can at least go play that for a bit while I wait until the 7th....