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Depravity: Cocky and Funny Debunked/ The Shaggy Dog

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White Man

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After getting kicked out of our friend’s dorm room, we decided we’d hit up one of our usual drinkin’ spots: an abandoned train station up in the mountains. It was dark and cold, the middle of February; Friday night, the night all interesting things happen.

Walking along the old train tracks with my two friends, I surveyed our current situation. It had been a rough week at school; my lip piercing seemed to be migrating out of my lip; my boots were worn flat – we had every excuse for some fun ol’ binge drinking. Zach rolled an old worn tire, which would be our source of light and heat. Isaac carried a case of beer. I had my current cheap liquor of choice, brutal Banker’s Club vodka. Bare, wintered trees flanked both sides of the train tracks, and a light layer of muddy snow covered the ground. It was cold, but soon we’d be drunk and oblivious.

Nobody was at the station, which was sort of weird for a Friday night. I didn’t mind because this meant I could talk shit about anyone not there. Zach tapped my shoulder and pointed at a silhouette near the station: a dog. A shaggy, filthy dog. It looked like it was chilling out, moseying about like the dumb animal it was.

“I hate dogs,” I muttered.

Several years previously, while walking back from our ice skating pond, I had been bitten by a stray dog without provocation. Had to get rabies shots. Wasn’t too happy about that. Ever since I’d been nervous around all dogs, and they always seemed to react negatively to this.

I bit a cuticle, took a swig of vodka, and told Isaac to chase it away or something. Isaac walked up to the dog, maybe twenty feet away. He made a sudden move at the dog and it bolted straight for me. Freaking, I kicked the dog as it got close to me, and it responded by biting my shin. Zach managed to scare it off, and it ran down the tracks, away from us. My leg was cut, but at that point, I’d be damned if I wasn’t going to get completely wasted. I used a shirt in my backpack to tie up the cut, which I’d later find out was pretty substantial. The hospital would still be there in the morning.

We set up the fire by the tracks and started drinking. I teetered back and forth on the side rail of the train tracks, my leg numb from pain-relieving alcohol and Xanax. Every once and a while, a bottle tossed by one of my buds would crash behind me into a ten foot ravine a couple feet behind me, which served as our universal bottle dump. Maybe an hour into our session, we saw some figures walking down the tracks towards us. Probably more kids like us.

“White man!” I heard someone call out. I looked to see who was yelling my name. Ah, it was Jill, trailed by her current boyfriend. Why did she sound so angry, and why did he look so pissed.

“I hear you’ve been talking about me,” she said. Her boyfriend struck a tough guy pose and looked at me with a caveman’s thick brow and a none-too-pleasant grimace drooping on his meaty head.

I though for a moment. What had I been saying about this particular gal. I went through the rolodex of shit I had recently started with people and pulled out her card. Oh, yes. I had started a rumor about her having Chlamydia. I don’t remember the exact reasons why I did this. Maybe she did something to me, or maybe I just thought it would be amusing. Who doesn't love a good, potentially reputation-staining VD rumor?

This delicate situation would take diplomacy to get out of without a severe ass-beating. I took a swig of vodka and carefully assessed my arsenal. Zach and Isaac watched nervously, and the seconds ticked. They wouldn’t be much good in a fight. I looked at Jill as she awaited a response. I noticed a big, shiny ring on her finger. I looked at her meatbag boyfriend itching to kick my spiky-haired ass. I responded the only way I knew how.

I looked at her boyfriend, pointed at the ring on Jill’s hand. In a move as calculated and amazing as Bobby Fischer’s emergence from a draw to humiliate Boris Spassky, I played my gambit: “Chlamydia or not, why don’t you just fuck her. She’s already paid for, apparently.”

The chain of events after my attack is foggy. The least I could say for certain is that this is not the sort of cocky and funny that Cubsfan uses to win over the ladies. Zach did a spit take. Isaac’s mouth dropped open. Meatbag caveman boyfriend probably made some sort of grunting noise. Some people there say that Jill rushed up and pushed me, or punched me. She claims to this day that she just ran at me and I spazzed out.

Either way, I ended up falling backwards, my bald boots causing me to slip off my metal perch, tumbling down into our garbage pit. My decidedly non-feline-like dexterity kicked immediately into effect, and I took the fall like I’ve taken every fall in my life: by bouncing on my head. I don’t remember the actual fall, but I imagine it wasn’t very fun to Iggy Pop-dive into a pit filled with the broken glass of many years past.

Well, one of my friends drove me to the ER. It was like 2 in the morning, and it looked like I’d just played chicken with a windshield (which I wouldn’t actually do until some years later). My lip ring had been torn out in the fall, and it had smashed a bit of one of my teeth. I think I may have actually swallowed the ring. Cuts covered my body, and my clothes were torn in several places. I was drunk, confused, and buzzed off the potent cocktail of booze, Buspar, and Xanax.

The ER doctor looked at me. I’d been holding that vodka bottle when I fell. I probably smelled like Boris Yeltsin.

“What happened?” he asked.

What to say? ‘Oh, I was just eating lots of pills, drinking, and then I suffered the wrath of an acquaintance whom I spread VD rumors about.’ Yeah, that would’ve been a great answer. I once again went back into my brain, which had already served me well enough on that night. I needed something to say; a story that would make this doctor think I wasn’t a total degenerate. My mouth was filled with blood, gravel, and dirt. My fingers tapped the examination table I sat on, nervously. Playing with the chess pieces in my head seemed to do no good; I needed a response, and fast. I opened my mouth and spat out the convenient non-fiction that would hopefully save me:

“A, uh, dog bit me?”

Yeah, so I hear Bobby Fischer’s had a few off days, too.
 

duderon

rollin' in the gutter
Jesus. You seem to have an amazing amount of stories. Have you ever thought of making an autobiographical short story book?
 

border

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He made a sudden move at the dog and it bolted straight for me.
I doubt that you really intended this line to get a laugh, but I had to stop reading and laughed out loud for a minute straight after reading it. Maybe something's wrong with me....I guess I just liked the idea that you are hopelessly fated to have bad experiences with dogs. Even when someone else angers the animal, you end up bearing the brunt :lol
“White man!” I heard someone call out.
I was disappointed by the stuff that followed this, because I thought you were about to go on a spirit journey with a mysterious Indian that you met in the forest.

This was a pretty good Tale, though I never figured that you would be the gossip-y maven type.

For fans of this Tales of Depravity genre, I'm re-posting Pimpwerx's "I had sex with a down syndrome girl" story, since it didn't get its own thread:

She's actually some 30-something fashion designer...she designs handbags. My sister was talking to her, and I was bored b/c I was THE black guy at a party where I knew like 3 people...and not even that well.

So I go over to talk with my sis, and she introduces me to this chick, and she just starts feeling up all over me. This chick was busted though. She was short and crack skinny, like I could feel nothing but bone on her arms and legs, and she didn't much to spare on her cooch either. I picked her up and carried her to the car easily and I'm not that strong. So she had to weigh like 80lbs.

She wasn't stupid or anything, but if you saw her, you'd think like down syndrome or severe scoliosis or something. Her back was kinda jacked up. And I'd made about 5 trips to the bathroom in 15 minutes, so I was coked to the eyeballs and totally threw judgement out the fucking park. So my sis and friend come out with us to her car to toke up, and this girl's still all over me.

So I jumped on the grenade and started making out with her. My sis and friend probably got grossed out b/c they start to leave, and so I ask her friend for a condom...and the rest is history. I'm over it now, and it's not exactly the worst thing I've done. But it was a bunch of people from the Coconut Grove club scene at that party, and now they'll just know me as the dude who fucked the gimp.
 
Yay! I had missed my fix of Tales of Depravity! The writing isn't your best, but has some good spots and is interesting and mostly individual overall.
I though for a moment. What had I been saying about this particular gal. I went through the rolodex of shit I had recently started with people and pulled out her card. Oh, yes. I had started a rumor about her having Chlamydia.
:lol
 

nitewulf

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White Man said:
I looked at her boyfriend, pointed at the ring on Jill’s hand. In a move as calculated and amazing as Bobby Fischer’s emergence from a draw to humiliate Boris Spassky, I played my gambit: “Chlamydia or not, why don’t you just fuck her. She’s already paid for, apparently.”
:lol :lol :lol
gutsy man.
 

White Man

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Yeah, I know the writing isn't the best. I kind of just through this together quickly because I've kind of been mopey lately, and I needed some cheering up. Kind of got a slight mental block thing going.

This was a pretty good Tale, though I never figured that you would be the gossip-y maven type.

I used to be all sorts of awful.
 

Nerevar

they call me "Man Gravy".
duderon said:
Jesus. You seem to have an amazing amount of stories. Have you ever thought of making an autobiographical short story book?


anyone who can honestly say:

White Man said:
we decided we’d hit up one of our usual drinkin’ spots: an abandoned train station up in the mountains.

is going to have a lot of adventures. :lol

I mean, seriously, do they not have bars where you live?
 

AntoneM

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Nerevar said:
is going to have a lot of adventures. :lol

I mean, seriously, do they not have bars where you live?

bah! even after my buddies and I turned 21 we would go out to our old drinkin spot, make a fire and party the night away, often sleeping in our cars.

Maybe there's something about people who have drinkin spots and interesting tales, I have a few of my own. I'm not nearly the yarn spinner white man is and it's nothing like bagging a handicapped chick. As far as I can tell from white man's stories I didn't tread to far off the path that he followed it's just I was always too frightened/inhibited to ever truly get on it.
 

Chipopo

Banned
I though for a moment. What had I been saying about this particular gal. I went through the rolodex of shit I had recently started with people and pulled out her card. Oh, yes. I had started a rumor about her having Chlamydia.

:lol:lol:lol
 
“Chlamydia or not, why don’t you just fuck her. She’s already paid for, apparently.”

:lol :lol :lol

As shitty a day as that sounds, that's still a pretty funny chop.

Why did you spread rumors about her?
 

White Man

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She was a socially prominent person, but in something of a rival clique. I believe I may have started it because one of my other friends was having some sort of problem with her boyfriend. In publicly humiliating someone, nothing's more ffective than trashing the girlfriend.

Again, that's what I think happened. That may be the reasoning behind one of the many, many other VD rumors I started.

I mean, seriously, do they not have bars where you live?

This was when I was 17.
 
nice nice,

it's still a good cocky and funny comment, Cubsfan may not have said it, but I would have. Although I try to be nicer to my fellow man, especially about his girlfriend. Nice or not though, when I have something in my mouth as good as that crack you made, it's coming out, one way or another.
 

Eminem

goddamit, Griese!
What to say? ‘Oh, I was just eating lots of pills, drinking, and then I suffered the wrath of an acquaintance whom I spread VD rumors about.’ Yeah, that would’ve been a great answer.

:lol :lol :lol :lol
 
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