I have been keeping everyone updated on this thing for awhile...anyways, we finally shot the rest of it this morning and I threw the new footage in there.
Technically, it's still a work in progress although I wish it wasn't (I'm sick of this thing).
Give me some feedback, some CONSTRUCTIVE feedback. I want to fix the narrative near the end, I don't feel that it flows that well and the sign language bit kills it. I was against it, but the lead singer (who came to me with the idea) is in love with it. Ugh...
Anyways...feedback, please.
http://www.murphman-studios.com/movies/dearjane/final.mov
And the outtakes reel is:
http://www.murphman-studios.com/movies/dearjane/outtakes.mov
Technically, it's still a work in progress although I wish it wasn't (I'm sick of this thing).
Give me some feedback, some CONSTRUCTIVE feedback. I want to fix the narrative near the end, I don't feel that it flows that well and the sign language bit kills it. I was against it, but the lead singer (who came to me with the idea) is in love with it. Ugh...
Anyways...feedback, please.
http://www.murphman-studios.com/movies/dearjane/final.mov
And the outtakes reel is:
http://www.murphman-studios.com/movies/dearjane/outtakes.mov