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Katawa Shoujo |OT| (VN, Free, Waifus, etc)

There is going to be some huge Emi spoilers in the links I'm about to post, so don't say I didn't warn you, the last link especially...
Well her art was rushed since they had to redesign her. I couldn't tell anything out of the ordinary outside of the terrible running "cutscene".
Well, even given that, she goes from this, to this, to this, to this. They're all drawn well, just Emi doesn't stay consistent between them. But whatever, not a huge deal, I'll live with it.
 

Soma

Member
yeah this thread is dying. so sad.

i mean we probably had to accept it sooner or later with the lack of new content and the decline of feels stories

i still love you Katawa-GAF <3
 

Soma

Member
Anyone play the Cradle Song preview? I just started it, seems so sleek compared to KS's GUI.

Yeah I tried it out a few weeks ago. I really like Doomfest's artwork, the presentation and the UI of it. The music is pretty cool too.

Definitely keeping an eye on this.
 
Haven't even considered that...

I wonder how long until the final product drops. If it's anything like KS, we could be waiting ages :l
If it's a commercial release, I think we'll be seeing it a lot sooner.

Edit: It is. From the company's website:
Will Cradle Song be a commercial game?
Yes. However, we would rather people play it than make a lot of money, so it will not be expensive by any means. Definitely under $10 USD.
 
That sounds like a good price to me. I DLed the demo for Analogue but never got around to playing it, this seems more appealing to me though. Post apocalyptic trappings with musically inclined leads sounds like something up my alley.
 
i finally started shizune route ...

Well it's not as bad as everyone said before reading everyone impression i was expecting a lackluster but so far i'm pretty much happy and impressed

I learned that the "Future refused to change" thanks to kenji and the "why are you replying to my questions with questions ? " part was just glorious.

I'm happy right now.

Now you'd realize that i take "long pauses " between routes ..that is because i feel it's better to enjoy them that way ...
 
i finally started shizune route ...

Well it's not as bad as everyone said before reading everyone impression i was expecting a lackluster but so far i'm pretty much happy and impressed

I learned that the "Future refused to change" thanks to kenji and the "why are you replying to my questions with questions ? " part was just glorious.

I'm happy right now.

Now you'd realize that i take "long pauses " between routes ..that is because i feel it's better to enjoy them that way ...
Shizune's route has, hands down, the best Kenji moments.
 
Man... the presentation for Cradle Song is so sleek. I'm impressed by the variety of expressions on hand for the girls, and artwork in general is definitely a step up from KS. Writing is okay, I prefer KS' Hisao, so far.

The scene with Rell in a towel as MC gorges on ice cream is just... WTF

Also, KS GAF should make a VN to end all VNs
 

Soma

Member
The first two acts of Shizune's route are arguably really damn good. The rest kinda falters a bit and could be a bit disappointing depending on your expectations but it's not a bad story though. Just probably not as good as the rest. There's some really good moments that are pretty subtle.

Man I sound like such a Shizune apologist but whatevs.


Also, KS GAF should make a VN to end all VNs

haha i'd be down for that but i don't know what i'd contribute.
 
yeah this thread is dying. so sad.

i mean we probably had to accept it sooner or later with the lack of new content and the decline of feels stories

i still love you Katawa-GAF <3

Well, I still have Lilly's story to go through, but I was waiting until after my school quarter is over before I start it, which would be after this week. Katawa tends to distract me too much from what I should be doing...
Actually, pretty much everything is for me...
Also, KS GAF should make a VN to end all VNs
Oh, that would be cool!
But what would it be about?
 
Alright, let's do this! The question is, will we be able to finish before Dudebro II finally comes out?

Oh, that would be cool!
But what would it be about?

Well it'd be a tale set in a high school of some sort where a protagonist pursues prospective partners based upon tried and true archetypes. We just need a hook, an angle of some sort to differentiate it from the scads of VNs out there. I actually wouldn't be surprised if KS has ushered in an interest in dabbling in VN creation.

Waitaminute, Dudebro II? Was Dudebro even finished, or is the joke that there never was a Dudebro 1 to begin with?
 
Hmmmh....a hook eh. Does it have to be controversial? or would any hook suffice?

Well, ideally, it should have some sort of hook, which helps to anchor things. Kind of like pitching a film, something enticing serves as a motivator and as a means of unification; would help us focus on a vision

An average Joe attending a furry boarding school for instance (I'm not serious)

I don't think we need controversial. Perhaps something revolving around a message board?
I kinda like that idea. Sounds sorta Densha Otoko-ish
 

XeroSauce

Member
Well it'd be a tale set in a high school of some sort where a protagonist pursues prospective partners based upon tried and true archetypes. We just need a hook, an angle of some sort to differentiate it from the scads of VNs out there. I actually wouldn't be surprised if KS has ushered in an interest in dabbling in VN creation.

Waitaminute, Dudebro II? Was Dudebro even finished, or is the joke that there never was a Dudebro 1 to begin with?

All the girls are pigeons
 

Soma

Member
All the girls are pigeons

Pigeons with mental disabilities whom attend a furry boarding school?



But yeah something regarding a message board could be interesting. I dunno something like a hidden society, an anonymous group that dabbles in conspiracies, or a community that's kinda centered around not knowing what the other person looks like which could hold some sort of underlying message there, or visual novel based on a forum community working together on a visual novel.


I dunno I'm just spouting whatever pops up in my head :lol
 
Pigeons with mental disabilities whom attend a furry boarding school?



But yeah something regarding a message board could be interesting. I dunno something like a hidden society, an anonymous group that dabbles in conspiracies, or a community that's kinda centered around not knowing what the other person looks like which could hold some sort of underlying message there, or visual novel based on a forum community working together on a visual novel.


I dunno I'm just spouting whatever pops up in my head :lol


That is some meta fuckin' shit right there man. Anyway, I'm actually kinda serious about this. I was just sitting there the other day, thinking about how cool it could be, but also pondering how something like this could possibly come together. Out of the thread's contributors, I know Chet and Jintor have some good artistic talent, since they chose to showcase it... and I'm sure some of us could cook up some tales of intrigue, but aside from that, I don't know if anyone here has any programming or music composing skill, or whether anyone would even consider dedicating time to a project like this, which would pretty much be the only way this could get off the ground.

Playing a bit into Cradle Song... and... FRIENDZONE FRIENDZONE FRIENDZONE FRIENDZONE FRIENDZONE FRIENDZONE FRIENDZONE FRIENDZONE FRIENDZONE... Nathan Finch, you're not a real person, but god damn do I want to punch you in the face you spaz
 

XeroSauce

Member
That is some meta fuckin' shit right there man. Anyway, I'm actually kinda serious about this. I was just sitting there the other day, thinking about how cool it could be, but also pondering how something like this could possibly come together. Out of the thread's contributors, I know Chet and Jintor have some good artistic talent, since they chose to showcase it... and I'm sure some of us could cook up some tales of intrigue, but aside from that, I don't know if anyone here has any programming or music composing skill, or whether anyone would even consider dedicating time to a project like this, which would pretty much be the only way this could get off the ground.

Playing a bit into Cradle Song... and... FRIENDZONE FRIENDZONE FRIENDZONE FRIENDZONE FRIENDZONE FRIENDZONE FRIENDZONE FRIENDZONE FRIENDZONE... Nathan Finch, you're not a real person, but god damn do I want to punch you in the face you spaz

I could totally write. I've written enough fanfic and originals before.

Are we doing the typical "boy meets bunch of girls and chooses a path" or are we going to do some crazy Bioshock-esque dream world of a man spiraling down toe the inevitable pit of despair
called marriage
 

Soma

Member
Well I'd like to think I'm pretty knowledgeable with graphic design, i do some concept art here and there but not as much as i used to and I used to do some writing. So I'm not sure exactly how much I could help out but I'd love to contribute if there's enough interest in this to get it going.
 
That is some meta fuckin' shit right there man. Anyway, I'm actually kinda serious about this. I was just sitting there the other day, thinking about how cool it could be, but also pondering how something like this could possibly come together. Out of the thread's contributors, I know Chet and Jintor have some good artistic talent, since they chose to showcase it... and I'm sure some of us could cook up some tales of intrigue, but aside from that, I don't know if anyone here has any programming or music composing skill, or whether anyone would even consider dedicating time to a project like this, which would pretty much be the only way this could get off the ground.
I have some programming experience and knowledge, though I would definitely want to be in on the creative side of things too. :3 Then again, I'm a very flaky person.
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I could totally write. I've written enough fanfic and originals before.

Are we doing the typical "boy meets bunch of girls and chooses a path" or are we going to do some crazy Bioshock-esque dream world of a man spiraling down toe the inevitable pit of despair
called marriage

You sound like you speak from experience :/ (heh) The typical harem anime-esque formula is a tried and true method of introducing a stable of prospective partners, but has been done to death. It's nice to consider the alternative concept, - boy meets girl amidst a larger plot (Though it'd be interesting to have a choice as to be a guy or girl, for Femmeworth's sake :p ), something like 999 or Steins;Gate has a very interesting overarching plot but that's a pretty high level of ambition to work towards, involving what I can only imagine to be copious amounts of imagination, research and multiple rewrites in order to get the pieces to sync up. I think even within KS' seemingly ordinary trappings, there is a high level of research involved.

Well I'd like to think I'm pretty knowledgeable with graphic design, i do some concept art here and there but not as much as i used to and I used to do some writing. So I'm not sure exactly how much I could help out but I'd love to contribute if there's enough interest in this to get it going.
I dunno, Femmeworth and Chet expressed interest too, don't know how much of it was a genuine vested interest or whether it was just a kneejerk "me too" statement, but there you go
 
I dunno, Femmeworth and Chet expressed interest too, don't know how much of it was a genuine vested interest or whether it was just a kneejerk "me too" statement, but there you go

I'm in as long as I get to draw big tits the concept is good. That and if I have the time to help, but I don't think that will be a problem.
 

Soma

Member
Well. Speaking on my behalf, it'd be a good experience for me. I'm still learning a lot when it comes to design and art and this would give me a good motivation for me to step up my game. Shoot even if this... whatever this turns out to be ends up flopping I would still be stoked just to help out in a project like this. Doesn't hurt that I've got plenty of free time as well at the moment (hell yeah unemployment :/).
 
You sound like you speak from experience :/ (heh) The typical harem anime-esque formula is a tried and true method of introducing a stable of prospective partners, but has been done to death. It's nice to consider the alternative concept, - boy meets girl amidst a larger plot (Though it'd be interesting to have a choice as to be a guy or girl, for Femmeworth's sake :p ), something like 999 or Steins;Gate has a very interesting overarching plot but that's a pretty high level of ambition to work towards, involving what I can only imagine to be copious amounts of imagination, research and multiple rewrites in order to get the pieces to sync up. I think even within KS' seemingly ordinary trappings, there is a high level of research involved.
Damn straight! If I'm involved, there is going to be some shoujo-ai action.
 

Soma

Member
Jintor is probably reading this thread right now thinking "You bastards decided to consider starting something after I get banned?!"
 
Femmeworth - but of course. Maybe one of the characters can be bisexual and the MC loses the girl to her in an alt ending lol

Moonspeak - Jintor can write up an article publicizing it. Therefore, we must make it as outlandish as possible so that his readership will think he's gone off the deep end :D

And imagine if we actually finished this, released it, and a thread gets created here on GAF? It'd be GAF->Internet->GAF for realsies
 
Femmeworth - but of course. Maybe one of the characters can be bisexual and the MC loses the girl to her in an alt ending lol
:\ Perhaps there could be side stories that could be unlocked? I'd be okay with a lesbian side story if the MC's gender is not an option. I'll admit that would be the most realistic option.
Jintor is probably reading this thread right now thinking "You bastards decided to consider starting something after I get banned?!"
*shouts in general direction of Australia* Hey Jintor, this is what you get for being banned!
 

Danj

Member
visual novel based on a forum community working together on a visual novel.

You can definitely make something out of this, there's a pattern that this idea would slot right into. You just need to add a target, like for example suppose it was going to be an entry for some fictional (or real, if there is one) visual novel competition, and then there are any amount of movies or anime you can take inspiration from.
 

Soma

Member
yeah i think we'd have to round up a bunch of us and brainstorm some ideas and concepts together in a skype group chat or something if we're gonna be serious about this whole thing.
 
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