Okay, that took longer than I expected it to (and I have a feeling that will be a running theme among the arcs as they get longer), but I finally did....
Land of Waves (Chapter 9-34)
Again, there is a certain sweet bitterness in reading this arc, moreso than the introduction arcs before it, knowing where this manga will end up. Because this arc? This is everything Naruto should have been. It's not perfect. Inari is, if not utterly superfluous, then way more hokey than the seriousness of this arc demands. And some other continuity stuff (like how Sasuke somehow doesn't know that Kakashi is one of the last remaining Sharingan wielders) rears it's ugly head, showing again how little Kishimoto planned this manga out. Lastly, there's some small plot stuff that could be done better (what the hell was Tazuna doing in the Land of Leafs in the first place anyway? And why is Naruto not educated on how chakra works even though he graduated? Or did Naruto never notice that his wounds healed instantly before?) But this arc does
so much right.
Plot recap:
Naruto and Team 7 have completed yet another frivilrous D-level missions and, utterly tired of the stupid shit they are being tasked to do, Naruto demands that he recieve a higher level mission. Amused, the Hokage decides to give him a C-rank mission to placate him, which involves gaurding a bridgebuilder named Tazuna on his way to the Land of Waves. However, an evil corporate guy wants to keep his monopoly on the place, so a bridge would be bad for him, so he hires assassins to kill him. One of them happens to be Zabuza and his sidekick Haku, who are both badass enough to make it an A mission in disguise. Zabuza attacks them the first time, but they manage to fight him off with some clever tactical help from Naruto and Sasuke working together to give Kakashi an edge while Sakura heroically stood there doing nothing. They made it to Tazuna's village, where they recovered and the group was trained further in ninja arts by a treeclimbing exercise (over which Naruto and Sasuke kinda bonded). At one point, Naruto met Haku without recognizing him as Zabuza's ally and they had a short conversation about the nature of being a shinobi.
Eventually though, Zabuza and Haku came back for a second assassination attempt. This time, Zabuza fought Kakashi alone and Haku fought Sasuke (after a while Naruto joined him). Sakura just stood there. Naruto and Sasuke both reached new heights of their powers by fighting alongside each other. Sasuke awakened his Sharingan when Haku attacked Naruto while Naruto's seal was weakened and he used the Fox Chakra for the first time when Haku seemingly killed Naruto (Sakura awakened her Helpless Crying ability upon seeing a seemingly dead Sasuke). However, when Naruto recognized Haku as the guy who he talked to earlier, he stopped in his tracks, since he could no longer see Haku as purely an enemy, even though he seemed to have just killed his friend. Haku begged Naruto to kill him as he felt he had no worth after his defeat, but he sensed that Kakashi was about to kill Zabuza, so he took the killing blow. Zabuza tried to take advantage of this opening, but to no avail. However, this was when the evil corperate guy stepped in and tried to just kill everyone, since he wasn't happy with how Zabuza failed him, using an army of thugs. He started this by kicking Haku's dead body. Zabuza acted like he didn't care about Haku, at which point Naruto straight up attacked him for his coldness, only to reveal that Zabuza was indeed human enough to care for Haku aftera ll. Zabuza's last act, having had his arms destroyed in his fight with Kakashi, was to charge in with a kunai knife between his teeth and kill the evil corperate guy, before falling to his death. Naruto and the rest cleaned up the thugs after that, and Naruto resolved to find his own ninja way, one that didn't involve being as heartless and abusive as the philosophy he witnessed in Zabuza and Haku.
Honestly, in a way, I was terrified that this wouldn't hold up to my memories of it. But while it's not perfect, it's still kinda amazing how much this arc manages to accomplish.
First, on a character level, it develops Naruto in how he conceptualizes his ideals as a ninja. In a lot of ways, Naruto just wants to be a superhero, and up until now, he's wanted to do it for reasons of self validation. However, as forgettable as Inari (the little kid that lost his dad to evil corperate guy) is as a character, it helps show that there is more to Naruto than just being an attention whore. He sees the kind of pain he's suffered in others and wants to help. Inari came into the story as a broken boy who just embraced cynicism, but left it as someone who wants to fight for his home (I wish his mom was actually the one who took his place in this story, since it's a bit silly for a kid to be leading the fight against the thugs in his town, but whatever). This served as a good thematic contrast to Zabuza's coldness and brutality, showing that both these elements co-existed in this world.
Sasuke also continues to be kinda awesome. First off, despite his introduction as King Negative Edgelord, his character is one with genuine vulnerabilities. He bashfully asks for help from Naruto (who asked help from Sakura) for the tree climbing exercise, he and Naruto are shown to be more alike than either wants to admit, and he genuinely seems enjoy Naruto's company as a rival. This makes his shock at defending Naruto against Haku's attack, even though it felt like it cost him his life, as well as Naruto's rage at losing his comrade, feel really genuine. They're both surprised at how much they connected with each other.
*sigh*, if only things could have continued this way
The combat really sells me on the series as well. It's very tactical. It shows front up that power levels don't matter that much. Zabuza is way, WAY above either Naruto or Sasuke's paygrade, but they force him to make a mistake and lose his fight to Kakashi through clever trickery. Zabuza's fight with Kakashi is this too. Rather than use his Sharingan to straight up 'beat' him, what he actually does is psych him out by making him think that the Sharingan allows him to see the future, when in reality, Kakashi is just fucking with his mind. Zabuza, in their second fight, wises up to this and employs different techniques, which then Kakashi has to counter him in return. In contrast to this, Haku v Naruto and Sasuke is a bit more of a power struggle, since Haku's technique is far above anything either of them could counter. But that's not as disappointing as it sounds, since the arc already gave us plenty of tactical fights, I don't mind so much that they pull back and let Naruto and Sasuke level up and just beat Haku through muscle. I remember the first time I saw Naruto with fox chakra and having him just be able to punch out the guy who has up until now not only been tactically beating them but through sheer power as well was pretty intense.
And the art. Not all the panels are gold. In fact, a lot of them are pretty blank. Not as much as Bleach would become, but Kishimoto was taking advantage of the fact that they were in a white fog pretty strongly. But the panels he wanted to hit hardest with, he definitely nailed them. Look at the expressiveness of them. Again, this is a major constrast to what his future work will become, and it's sad, but it's nice to see him in his prime right here.
That said, the Viz translation is really starting to get on my nerves with these sound effects. Most of the time, they don't make sense, which is bad enough, but then they start crowding the frame and obstructing the art. At one point, they literally damage it.
Original, the fist is a a bunch of blur lines to help give it a sense of a kinetic 'pow' effect.
What the
FUCK is this, Viz?!
As the antagonists, Zabuza and Haku shine both with their personalities and with their abilities. You get a sense of how powerful and varied the abilities of the top combatants of this world must be with how they both employ so many different styles with a basic water theme. Zabuza in particularly is genuinely terrifying, despite being pretty outmatched, just because of his delighted brutality. But the real clincher for their characters is naturally the end, where it's revealed that while the world might have turned them into monsters, they still have a human core. Haku finds the life of a ninja to be distasteful and hates the idea of killing, but will do so just because Zabuza asks for it, because Zabuza is the only one who ever showed him kindness (and even that was under the pretense that Zabuza just wanted an attack dog). Zabuza meanwhile has to have his inhumanity shoved in his face, the idea of not caring about Haku's corpse being kicked around, before he finally cracks. This turn around is surprisingly effective. You have Zabuza established as a vicious murderer who takes pride in how many lives he's taken, only seeing Haku's death as yet another advantage to exploit, just start crying when Naruto spells out just how fucked up of a human being he is.
If nothing else, you gotta give Kishimoto credit for making a psycho murderer's tears feel authentic
I think this, more than anything, is what drew me to the series in the first place. This beautiful contrast of a kid trying to be a hero to compensate for his personal hangups about being left alone in the world confronted with the ugly brutality of the shinobi that he can't even comprehend, but still finds a shred of decency in even someone as vile Zabuza. It's a world of the broken. It's a story of a damaged kid trying to help other damaged people. It's hard to describe how relatable I find this even today. If you ever felt like that, like a damaged person in a fucked up world...idk, it resonates with me atleast.
As it is, if Naruto had continued on the standard that this arc set with some refinement of quality, I genuinely think we'd have one of the greatest manga on our hands. Even though I like the Chunin arcs and most of Part 1 from here on out, they immediately took a different tone and turn, leaving behind the outside ninja world for more Konoha centric conflicts. I think if Kishimoto had done just one more arc with Naruto going outside Konoha to explore the ninja world and then did his whole Chunin exam thing, maybe that'd have given Kishimoto more encouragement to just do this instead.
Ah, well. Next time, the Chunin arc. I might split this up into different segments though. Like, first the lead up and the written exam, then forest of death, then the tournament thing, since this next arc is going to be twice the chapter length we have now.