Once more with feeling
Repost.
This is my closure. I hope you guys like it.
Firstly, I feel like there isn't a proper structure. So here's how we play it.
Breaking Bad.
Bear with me now. Breaking Bad is the storyline of a "good" man who embraces a monster inside him so that he may feel powerful. He becomes a rising crime lord and he eventually falls, hard.
MGSV isn't Breaking Bad, but it should follow a similar structure, a good man who is essentially becoming the villain to everyone around despite not seeing it initially. But for MGSV, I see it more like... Catalyst (destruction of Mother Base), Rise (Afghanistan/Africa), Fall (Confrontation/The Truth).
Prologue - Ground Zeroes - 1974
Left as is.
Chapter 1 - Cypress/Whaler - Early 1984
The opening is pretty phenomenal. I'd leave it as-is, however I'd greatly extend it by including a Whaler section that allows Venom to explore the ship and get used to his new arm and such. Something short, but I want something a bit more impactful than the montage we get. Actually make us work with Venom to bulk him up a bit. I'd make the hospital scenes a bit more surreal, and see if we can work in some hallucinatory segment in the Whaler. Maybe visions of The Boss or having Venom imagine he's in a field of blood red flowers while standing on the deck of the Whaler. It's basically his programming bleeding through and influencing him.
Oh, and we should have gotten a wicked Kyle Cooper Bond-esque intro sequence with the 1980s inspired 'A Phantom Pain' track like how we had one in Snake Eater. Fill it with psychological imagery, broken mirrors, fire, blood, broken limbs, mechanical limbs, etc.
Chapter 2 - Afghanistan - Early/Mid 1984
For one thing, let's strip out some of those filler missions and have those be side-ops and bulk up the narrative in Afghanistan. The first missions is obviously rescuing Kaz, but let's have Venom encounter Quiet early on first before the next few missions mention her via the Russian troop dialogue. It's strange to utilize the Side Ops to turn it into a standard Episode to take Huey and meet Quiet.
Honestly, we also should have gotten a motorcycle here.
It would have made the vast expanse quicker and more fun to cross, it would have given another great option when engaging in open world stealth/traversal, and we could have gotten some wicked chases and shit.
Also, we're in Soviet controlled Afghanistan... why don't we have a bow?
Anyways, this chapter you get DD, Huey, and Quiet, while encountering Eli.
We're also lacking thorougly in boss battles and the fact that the Soviets... aren't fighting anyone!
Like MGS4, this really should be Snake wading into a pre-existing war. Why not be able to help the Mujahdeen? Save villages? Avoid them or make a choice? What kind of man is Venom, and by extension, you?
We have no bosses here either, so a longer, multi-stage battle with Quiet would be good. How about a battle against a legendary Afghan warrior that ends with you convincing him to join your crusade? An insane Soviet tank commander? There's very cool missions and gameplay, but there aren't enough of these dramatic punch moments.
And also, throughout this, let's get some interludes at Mother Base where Snake is suffering hallucinatory symptoms. Maybe you're walking along the medical base and you hear Eva's voice off in the distance, or The Boss telling you something, or Kiefer Sutherland as Naked Snake saying things, but Venom is not saying them. Doubt your sense of reality, but find grounding in the mission of revenge.
But one thing we really, really need, is a proper drive to solve the mystery. No meandering missions that just exist... End Afghanistan with the confrontation between Sehelanthropus, Mantis, and The Man on Fire, who continues to pursue Snake as he escapes.
Another idea is that Skullface has no crew similar to the Cobra Unit, FOXHOUND, and Dead Cell. That's weird. XOF should be a psychotic nightmare unit that uses gifted children like Eli and Mantis and turns them into weapons. Maybe Venom can save some, others he can't. Skull Face breaks these kids down and brainwashes them to do his bidding. That would have originally been his plan with Chico before Chico died.
Chapter 3 - Angola - Mid/Late 1984
So now we go to Africa, where Skull Face has set up operations as he continues to put together his plot.
The battle here is far nastier than in Afghanistan. I think just having the PFs isn't enough. This is during the Angolan Civil War.
The 27-year war can be divided roughly into three periods of major fighting – from 1975 to 1991, 1992 to 1994, and from 1998 to 2002 – broken up by fragile periods of peace. By the time the MPLA finally achieved victory in 2002, more than 500,000 people had died and over one million had been internally displaced. The war devastated Angola's infrastructure, and severely damaged the nation's public administration, economic enterprises, and religious institutions.
The Angolan Civil War was notable due to the combination of Angola's violent internal dynamics and massive foreign intervention. The war became a Cold War struggle, as both the Soviet Union and the United States, along with their respective allies, provided significant military assistance to parties in the conflict. Moreover, the Angolan conflict became entangled with the Second Congo War in the neighbouring Democratic Republic of the Congo, as well as with the Namibian War of Independence.
Why on earth isn't this basically Hell on Earth? That's what it
should be. This is where the legend of Big Boss needs to take on fiery, epic proportions. Why not have Skull Face playing both sides of the conflict, while fucking with the PFs, creating this nasty hornet's nest that Venom needs to wade through to get to Skull Face and Zero and kill them?
This is a situation that is
fraught with wicked problems. Child Soldiers, Cold War Proxy war, Cipher civil war, ethnic cleansing. This is where the myth of Bis Boss is
born.
During this chapter, the bonds between Quiet and Venom grow. DD grows up. Ocelot becomes more important to the running of Mother Base while Miller grows more marginalized. Huey's return causes tension but he tries to ingratiate himself to the crew. This is where Eli's presence comes about. This entire chapter is the build up and disintegration of relationships. Now, Quiet can't speak, so we need to go via sign language, facial expressions, etc. Ocelot and Miller are constantly at odds.
The missions in Africa are essentially about trying to erode Skull Face's support while increasing support for Diamond Dogs, and Venom and Skull Face mimic the Cold War by using proxies for their battles (the side ops/combat ops missions). Now these are sustained narrative missions that lead to...
Chapter 4 - Final Confrontation - Late 1984.
Okay, everything in Chapter 2 of the original game, we slice out and put here.
So this is a series of missions spread across Afghanistan, Angola, and Guantanamo that leads to a final confrontation between Skull Face and Venom.
None of this bullshit:
No, here's what I'd do:
Man, I wanted some good conversations between Snake and Skull Face.
imagine if before the final confrontation, Skull Face and Snake converse over a radio in some distant, burned land...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_V_86OQViQE
Huey unleashes the parasites on Mother Base early in this chapter, forcing Snake to kill many of his own men, essentially decimating the ranks of Diamond Dogs and throwing everyone into despair after their victories in Chapters 2 and 3. After dealing with Huey, the Diamond Dogs have no choice but to take one final stand against Skull Face and Cipher. Low on resources and manpower, the surviving Diamond Dog members take the retro-fitted Whaler and go after Skull Face, at his last holdout...
Camp Omega. In the decade since Snake's coma, the camp has expanded to the size of a small village, with loyal XOF agents everywhere. It's a goddamn fortress.
Of course... the retrofitted Whaler... has goddamn cannons and the Diamond Dogs shell the coast, setting everything on fire. How could Ahab have killed the White Whale? By setting the entire world on fire.
Venom, Quiet, Ocelot, DD, and the surviving Diamond Dogs invade the Island, and it turns into a nightmarish hell on earth. This is where BB gets the rep for child soldiers, as all the orphans he rescued volunteer to help because they want to protect their new home. They load the cannons on the ship.
Venom comes face-to-face with the Man on Fire for the third and final time, where you realize that The Man on Fire
is not real. He's another figment of Venom's broken mind pushed by Mantis's powers, a mutated phantom memory relentlessly haunting him.
Quiet is killed saving Big Boss from Skull Face, while Ocelot and Miller command the Diamond Dogs into dealing with surviving XOF psychos. Ocelot and Miller are able to take down Mantis and co, forcing him to retreat. Venom cracks.
Standing on the edge of the crater
Like the prophets once said
And the ashes are all cold now
No more bullets, and the embers are dead
That leaves Big Boss and Skull Face alone. Here, Skull Face reveals his master plan as the island burns around them. He asks if Snake understands, cause he's at the end, desperate to have someone else understand.
Snake's response is "I don't care."
They should have had Sins of the Father play over the final confrontation between Skullface and Snake. I mean, imagine it playing over this:
"One must die and one must live. No victory, no defeat."
The battle they do is a shadowy mirror of the battle between Naked Snake and The Boss in Metal Gear Solid 3, however, instead of a field of white lillies, it's in a burning field with ash raining around them. They fight messily, bloodily, it's nearly inhuman. Without Mantis, Skull Face can't puppet Sehelanthropus. Snake bests Skull Face, and before finally killing him, Skull Face tells him the truth:
"Say 'what' again. Say 'what' again, I dare you, I double dare you motherfucker, say what one more Goddamn time! "
Both Skull Face and Venom Snake are simply shadows of the real Big Boss. Skull Face, the faceless man in the shadows behind his missions, and Venom, the faceless decoy with false memories and a false life.
Chapter 5 - The Truth - Late 1984
"This story, this legend? It's ours. We can change the world, and with it, the future. I am you, and you are me. Carry that with you, wherever you go."
This is where it gets fucking
surreal. Venom's real memories begin to break through the dam, mixing with Naked Snake's memories. The real world turns transitory while Venom is losing his goddamn mind. Here, Kojima could just go insane. This is Fight Club level crazy. Echoes of Silent Hill, why not.
I was actually thinking some of Hannibal's crazy moments. Anyway, you play through some crazy trippy levels where you can redo the Sorrow walk from MGS3, something from Peace Walker, and a bloody rendition of when the Medic got into a coma. A vision of Quiet leads him back to sanity... a vision that can talk. We can have a great long conversation here, like between Naked Snake and The Boss. Eventually, Venom gets his shit together and escapes, only to find out Eli has taken Sehelanthropus. We've already had the climax at this point though, so...
well, whatever, this is the final mission. Eli takes Sehelanthropus, however without Mantis at full strength, his Kingdom of the Flies stands no chance against Big Boss. That amazing scene at the end of Kingdom plays in its entirety, showing Eli's hatred of Big Boss, and Venom finally assuming the mantle of Big Boss, fully.
"That's right. Don't blame yourself. Blame me."
Epilogue - Outer Heaven - Sometime between 1985 and 1995.
lol, no.
Well, maybe.
Here's my ideal final scene. We intercut between two scenes. One, an older man with a horn in his head looking at his scarred visage in the mirror. He knows he is gonna die today. Win or lose. This is the end. The final tape, the one from 46 that was cut, plays.
The other scene? A young man HALO jumps towards a remote location in Africa.
He has some dialogue with a voice over the radio the concludes with his commanding officer telling him... "I have faith in you, son."
As the young man begins his infiltration, Venom punches the mirror. Credits roll.
The scene after the credits is the real Big Boss and Ocelot speaking to one another in 1984, where Big Boss and Ocelot talk about Venom and their faith in him. Twenty minute long emotional cutscene about them questioning their tactics and wondering if they'll ever be forgiven for what they'll do. Talk about the Boss. Closure.
I feel like this GIF sums up HIdeo's writing in the last year of this game's development.