my name is ed said:I guess I read too many comic books but I read that pretty easily
it does get a bit murky on which way youre supposed to look at in the 4th and 5th page
I think if you dont have years of experience drawing comics its probably best to keep the panels and progression pretty simple.
I love the striking of the match, but it doesnt go with the rest of the comic since its very clean.
Thanks, I forgot to mention that it obviously isn't finished yet. And I'm aware that the biggest "flaw" in this is the weird composition of the images, but I really don't want to make things too simple. Using as few words as possible also brings many problems, but I think it's the right way to practise comics. When you know how to tell a story without words, it's easy to practise wording afterwards.
Oh and that's just a little true story my friend told me. And the opening doesn't have a "match" in it, it's a russian firework thingy