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Maybe I need to go back and watch both episodes (since the timeline isn't shown to completion until both had aired) but IT seemed like they were in no hurry to get there since according to Hank the Gerhardt's had left. I'm fairly certain they didn't drive over to Ed's house right away
They had to go straight to Ed's. Hank stopped Lou from chasing him saying they know where he's going. Ed's the hot lead fugitive running away who the Gerdahts are looking for to kill. There's no other choice but to get him asap. The people at the police station would have radioed-over to tell them Bear left so there shouldn't have been any reason not to drive straight to the house.
Hanzee shooting people isn't at all unusual for this show. It trades in acts of violence. Always has always will. I seriously doubt the showrunners "backed" themselves into a corner with last seasons massacre talk and are now just throwing Hanzee at people to fix the problem. They have an idea where they are going with him and every other character.
Oh, it's not unusual. My disappointment with that is that i expected the massacre to be a combination and a culmination of the Gerhardts\Milligan\Ed&Peggy\Police mix-up. What we got was mostly inconsequential to that - Hanzee seeing that 'memorial' and losing it.
I'll give you Peggy zoning out. It seemed a little easy BUT she did have a conversation with an imaginary man in Dodd's place not 24 hours before so does it really stretch credulity that much that she wouldn't notice?
Yes, but the imaginary person was taking the place of a real man, it wouldn't have happened if it was just an empty chair in my eyes. Anyhow, lets say Peggy is oblivious, there's still the part of Dodd somehow untying himself from what seemed am impossible position. They are taking shortcuts to get where they wanted. Why not just have Dodd say that he has to poop, which probably would entail getting him untied and go from there?
Dodd keeping her alive? That actually makes total sense for his character. He's a misogynist, as you yourself pointed out (which wasn't new to this episode, he's been subjecting his daughter and mother to it all season) who sees women as Satan. He clearly doesn't think they're capable of intelligent thought. No threat to him. You argued that he was already taken down by her so he should be wise now but that would be underestimating how highly he thinks of himself. The man thinks no one can take him on certainly not a woman. I'm sure he saw it as dumb luck the first time and it wouldn't happen again. Just my opinion but that seems totally on point with who his character has been all season.
Dodd expressed his fear of Peggy to Ed. He pleaded him to get her away from him. He recognized her as a threat, she stabbed him twice. He talked about he's going to mess her up when he gets free. So either kill her right away or tie her up or make sure she won't won't interrupt you and don't turn your back to her. He's a leader of a crime organization - act like. You can always dig deep enough and come up with some justification or reason he did what he did but at certain point it becomes excuses.
Hanzee didn't shoot the store owner because the store owner told him what he wanted to hear and wasn't a complete bigot. He may be brutal but he wasn't killing without compunction until the bar. He was tired of the mistreatment which was the EXACT reason why he chose to kill Dodd....and why he wanted to get the haircut and run away. I have no doubt had he had the chance and a little time he would have slipped away easily regardless of whether or not the store owner identified him. Has he given you the impression at all this season that he's worried about cops finding him or his ability to get away with violence when he needs to? No I didn't think so
Hanzee would have had that time if he made sure that the one guy that can take away that time by calling the cops wouldn't be able to. Why invite trouble? So don't kill the store owner: knock him out. Tie him up. Bust up the telephone. Doing none? That's bullshit that's only there to serve the plot because they couldn't get Hank and Lou at the cabin any other way.
As for the cops....which ones? The two who actually give a shit about finding them? Hank, who we established isn't all there and Lou. Sioux Falls don't give a shit. Christ that other cop doesn't want to have anything to do with any of the stuff going on. SO basically it's left to Lou to handle a gang war, an assassin indian on the run AND the crazy couple. Gotta prioritize homie.
That's part of the problem. These city-spawning crimes and crime-lords and there's still the sense like only Hank and Lou are on the job, that no other policemen are doing anything.
Here's what you do: Peggy told Hank she intends to leave to her Seminar - that's the first lead to where Peg and Ed may run to. Call Sioux Falls PD and make them pay a visit to the hotel to check it out.
Peg and Ed didn't leave with their car. Hank knows the Blue Lincoln was the car Dodd arrived in with his guys. Two of them are found at the house, Peggy, Edd and Dodd aren't. That car is missing. Get an APB for the description of the car. Send the pictures of Ed, Peggy and Dob for every town in the area. We see a police cars stopping near Ed on one of his phone calls. That cop should know the authorities are looking for Dodd's car and for a person matching Ed's description.
None of that sort is alluded to have taken place last episode or this episode. It's like they were trying to search leads w\o knowing where to begin.
Lets continue: Hanzee goes to the hotel and gets Peggy's friend to narrow down her hideout location. If Hanzee only kills bigots then he spares her, right? So she calls the cops, tells them all and they know where to look right? And if he does kill her, somebody at the hotel by the morning will discover it and call them and that should have been at least mentioned in the last 2 eps, even as a dead-end lead, right?
But there's none of that. We have no indication the authorities doing any of these basic stuff and they are literally gifted the location out-of-nowhere by the shop owner who very conveniently Hanzee left capable of doing so.
I think it's sad that you would actually be disheartened by other people enjoying this show. I for one certainly watch it (and all Cohen bros films) thinking of them as taking place in a parallel universe to our with just a smidge of Looney Tunes in it but to say that the plot or characters are poorly written is just not knowing how to find the subtlety underneath the bombast
I didn't say its sad people enjoy the show, i myself listed the reasons you would so. But i do think it's sad that what Fargo is doing in terms of plotting and characters is enough to award her 'best tv show on air\ever' accolades. I've enjoyed quite a lot stuff that i wouldn't dare to call as even being 'good' so it's frustrating seeing faults and criticism downplayed or ignored as if recognizing them will make you enjoy it less.
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He was smashed in the head with the butt of a rifle and was clearly concussed. Hence, why he was taken away in an ambulance. Plus, he awoke and went to the station first because of the distress call about the ambush. Stupid, not really. Sloppy, perhaps.
You're mixing up the timeline. Hank was smashed in the head, then drove the car and picked up Lou and then they returned to the empty house and then Lou called the ambulance. If the concussion was that bad he couldn't check the basement when woke up then he shouldn't be driving a car and i doubt he could help at the police station in that situation. Anyhow, he had a situation with Peggy and 3 criminals inside the house - that's the immediate concern he should have addressed when he came back to consciousness.
Ed and Lou were not running away from the police station. They were shown twice quietly walking through the woods so as not to attract any attention to themselves. The only time Ed runs is after Hank pulls up in the car. Granted, it's still a bit of a stretch that he gets to the house before them. If I were writing it, I'd have Lou take Hank to hospital first. After all, he's not just a coworker but his father in law as well. That would better explain Ed and Peg having time to get away.
Hanks' driving a car, he's fine enough. You chase the lead (Ed going to his house) as far as you can or call an ambulance to Edd's house location while driving there in case you need to continue the chase and leave Hank at Peggy's house. If i were writing i would do in completely different way that actually holds water and isn't ridiculous.
A fat man winning a race against a car + moving a hefty body from the basement and still gets it done before Hank and Lou and arrive is probably the most outrageous piece of writing i saw this TV season - and there's plenty of competition.
Well, he shoots two dudes in the knees and lets one run away. Kills the bartender, two cops and kills Dodd. So he shot 6 people and killed 4. Excessive, but not exactly a massacre and certainly not "everybody on sight."
Peggy being whacked has been well established both prior to this episode and at the very beginning of this one. Her zoning out is not a shock.
Dodd doesn't recognize any woman as a threat. And it has been well established that he is misogynistic.
Already noted that Hanzee did not "shoot everybody."
Not sure what this is supposed to even mean. Cops work on phone tips all the time, even more so back in '79.
Check the first section of the post for my comments on these.
I don't look at it as the best show ever. But I do think it's really good. I'd probably rate Breaking Bad higher, but horror of horrors, that had even more suspension of disbelief than this. (The melting bath tub, the plane that crashes right over Walter's house, Death by ATM etc. etc.) Again, your general complaints can be leveled at just about any show or creative medium ever. "How convenient that X happened because of something person Y did!" Yep, there's fun to be had at watching Fargo. I'd say you're not having it. But I suppose your fun comes in getting on the internet and being the contrarian.
I'm not the biggest BB fan, but it is much better than Fargo. Yes, it had its bad moments (although 2 of your examples aren't really issues of suspending belief). My criticism can be leveled against most shows because it's at the basic level of writing and plotting. It's common for negatively-received shows to have their characters serve the plot. It's common for them to handwave, bend and break characterization or simple logic or whatever needs be in order to bring forward what they decided to do .It's built on it. (this season of Homeland is a great example).
Most of the better shows don't do that or try to minimize or aren't as painfully obvious in doing so. Fargo doesn't, and it actually intensifies this kind of writing as the season goes along. Coupled with mostly paper-thin and skin-deep characters and characterization i can't agree with overly-positive accolades it's receiving.
No, the Walking Dead is a perfect example of that. Characters constantly do stupid things that don't make sense because the plot necessitates they do them. All character actions in Fargo make logical sense in the context of the story and those characters, and those character actions drive the plot forward. The characters are imperfect people that make mistakes, the show addresses that. It's practically one of the core themes of what a Fargo story is. It is literally the opposite of what you complain about.
How can you be saying this with a straight face? Let me get it straight: TWD acting stupidly and doing stupid stuff = bad. Fargo characters acting stupidly and doing stupid stuff = not bad? Both shows are an example for characters serving the plot. The veneer might be better in 'Fargo' but the bottom line is the same. No, most of the character actions i criticized in Fargo don't make sense in the context of the story. You can try to excuse them, maybe some more easily than others, but you can do so with TWD as well. You don't think TWD depicts its characters as imperfect people who make mistakes? Why is this defense OK and applicable for Fargo but not for TWD? And what about none character action stuff like Ed outrunning a car? How is that not a blatant preposterous writing that overrides everything else just for the sake of enabling the plot to proceed in a certain way?