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[Mr. Spinnington]

Oh shit, I made this film for a festival... film festival. anyway I want to hear what you have to say, GAF

http://s51.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0LRQHDHZXPSYR1U4UR5HQLTG8D

Tell me if you like it or not, or even to post in this awesome thread (not really!)

 

[Blackace]

It looks fun... but if I may...all your "badasses" look a little bitchmade...

 

[Mr. Spinnington]

Badasses? I can't tell. I put together everything I thought you should for an action movie trailer... that's all there is to it in my book

 

[Blackace]

Badasses? I can't tell. I put together everything I thought you should for an action movie trailer... that's all there is to it in my book

All I am saying is the actors who are suppose to be "badasses" look a little soft... if it is just about how the trailer is put together, then I don't see much wrong with it

 

[AniHawk]

It felt kinda like 3 or 4 trailers in one. I think I know what was going on, but it was hard to tell. Good editing otherwise, though.

 

[Mr. Spinnington]

Thanks to both of you, and yes... I couldn't actually find guys who are supposed to be tough. I'm the main guy in the trailah, so you see there was no way to go to a gym without being laughed back out.

 

[Fuzzy]

I liked it but the sound needs a lot of work in that scene on the couch.

 

[AniHawk]

Oh, and just one question, when everyone was drawing the guns on each other, was it supposed to be done with slow movements like that? It looked kinda silly if it wasn't.

 

[Blackace]

Thanks to both of you, and yes... I couldn't actually find guys who are supposed to be tough. I'm the main guy in the trailah, so you see there was no way to go to a gym without being laughed back out.

Like Anihawk said it seems a little long... maybe you could streamline it.. make two trailers out of it.. and show them back to back... just a suggestion

 

[Mr. Spinnington]

I liked it but the sound needs a lot of work in that scene on the couch.

Yeah. The thing is done and I've had it for a while. I had to recently bring it out for family to watch, but that guy wouldn't speak the fuck up. We upped the volume for that as high as we could while editing (which is why you canhear a buzzing when the one guy is talking), but we couldn't do anything else.

Oh, and just one question, when everyone was drawing the guns on each other, was it supposed to be done with slow movements like that? It looked kinda silly if it wasn't.

It was spposed to be really fast, actually. That part was goign to be at the end and bring it out of a depressing note, but whatever. In my mind's eye it was at a different main angle and went a lot faster... there was also some funny dialogue. C'est la vie!