vainglorious
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Lol. That's just sidestepping.
If that's how you want to put it, it's not a good character trailer either. Yes, we get that he's a loving father. But the scene overstayed. You do not spend over 100 seconds of your 193 second (that's just over 50%) trailer on showing an loving father, because by 60 seconds the audience, even the densest members, would have gotten the idea. And 60 seconds is generous.
If in the scene with the little girl and the looming man started off with the girl saying, "Daddy!" and then he mistreated her like that, bam, 10 seconds and you've already established the guy is a terrible father. As it is right now, no lines of dialogue but 10 seconds were enough to establish that character as a bad man, possibly a villain and apparently important to the development of the little girl. It's an economy: concise and clear presentation with nothing wasted.
You don't get to call this a character trailer when the beginning of the trailer put up scenes that don't have Regis in them and the scenes don't do anything to flesh out his character. It's a story trailer. And it's a bad story trailer.
Nail. Head.
Thank you.