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[chronic_archaic]

I checked the assignment, which more than filled the criteria and used the word fuck and shit twice to make my feelings clear and add extra concern to the topic (abuse of elderly people by whoever) and I had a lot to say about that honestly.

She commented this "name here--Cursing and swearing in your written work is not acceptable. Learn to use regular written language."

My problems with this are both words are proper English and in the course syllabus it is never stated curse words are grounds for lower grades. In my English 104 course I've used swears multiple times without penalty. Is this bias on her part or am I really supposed to censor my writing?

 

[carlsojo]

I checked the assignment, which more than filled the criteria and used the word fuck and shit twice to make my feelings clear and add extra concern to the topic (abuse of elderly people by whoever)

She commented this "name here--Cursing and swearing in your written work is not acceptable. Learn to use regular written language."

My problems with this are both words are proper English and in the course syllabus it is never stated curse words are grounds for lower grades. In my English 104 course I've used swears multiple times without penalty. Is this bias on her part or am I really supposed to censor my writing?

You should definitely upload your essay on here. Copy and paste that shit

 

[Randolph Freelander]

Good grief, man. Yes, censor that. Get a thesaurus if you need one.

 

[Yoshimitsu126]

Fuck, that sucks man.

 

[RockTurtle]

if you can't find the words to properly express yourself, get a thesaurus

 

[Count Dookkake]

You effed up.

 

[Earthbound64]

in the course syllabus it is never stated curse words are grounds for lower grades.

Check your university's behavioral guidelines.

 

[Resilient]

write back

"what the fuck is this shit! give me a B god fucking damnit!"

 

[HariKari]

Your essay shouldn't read like a GAF post.

 

[Master Of Illusion]

How old's the professor?

 

[A Fish Aficionado]

You are supposed to be professional. You are writing a paper for college not a neogaf post.

 

[NoblesseOblige]

Apologize and ask if you can resubmit it after some editing. It's not worth your time getting into it with a teacher who can just grade you down for pissing them off in the future. You're gonna run into other professors like this, as well as people in employment who won't tolerate certain language use. It's just part of life.

 

[Kusagari]

I would think not using curse words in a college essay was common sense.

I've never gone further than using damn.

 

[Syf]

Please god post it for us to see.

 

[RoodyPooUS]

Wow, I have never cursed in any academic or professional written material or even know of anyone who has.

Where did you learn that was accepted and regular practice?

 

[SkyOdin]

Not all language is appropriate for all circumstances. Most college papers tend to require a more formal and academic tone, which precludes informal and casual language such as swear words.

Using swear words casually in a paper will likely cause problems with any number of professors and instructors.

 

[Phrynobatrachus]

You gotta know your audience. Take your lumps and don't do it again in the course.

 

[Tookay]

It should be fucking obvious that swear words are not typically acceptable for academic writing.

 

[True Underdog]

Refraining from using swears is probably the safest bet in most courses. Probably an alright look in a creative writing class but not much else.

Varies from instructor to instructor; clearly this one doesn't appreciate/approve of it.

 

[sakipon]

Have to admit I never even thought to use curse words in my school work. Is this a millennial thing?

 

[brianmcdoogle]

Unless you are doing some sort of creative writing, swearing isn't something you do when writing in college. What kind of essay was this supposed to be?

Edit: "Censor my writing". Oh good grief.

 

[Atomic Playboy]

In general, you want to treat college essays as professional writing. Would you swear in a report that you would hand in to your CEO? Do you see the New York Times writing about "this fucking bullshit" that Trump did? Yes, you should learn how to properly censor yourself, because unless you go into certain very specific fields (most of which don't require a degree), you're not going to be able to do that in your professional life.

 

[nhlducks35]

You should never swear in a professional essay unless you are quoting someone

 

[kirblar]

How on earth are you just now learning this life lesson?

 

[GamerJM]

I've sworn in college papers before, but only for creative writing classes.

 

[HariKari]

It should be fucking obvious that swear words are not typically acceptable for academic writing.

Yep.

in the course syllabus it is never stated curse words are grounds for lower grades.

Probably because it doesn't need to be said.

 

[bobbychalkers]

Gotta know your audience/context. I've quoted the hook of Wonton Soup by Lil B verbatim and got an A.

 

[Forerunner]

No shit. You don't use that kind of language in an academic setting. There are other words you could have chosen.

 

[LegalEagleMike]

I mean no fucking shit.

 

[wandering]

lmao sometimes I forget how bad some people can be at writing

 

[Earthbound64]

Also, OP:

I just finished an essay due with 2 minutes remaining which I wrote in 25 minutes. I resubmitted it because I had the date wrong. So 1 minute before it was a F.

Put more time into your coursework.

 

[Hypron]

I mean using swear words in a uni assignment is something that never even crossed my mind. I suppose it might fly in some very specific circumstances (e.g. creative writing, or specific quotes from a work you're analysing), but the mast majority of the time it's the opposite of academic writing.

 

[carlsojo]

Welcome to college son!

 

[excelsiorlef]

I checked the assignment, which more than filled the criteria and used the word fuck and shit twice to make my feelings clear and add extra concern to the topic (abuse of elderly people by whoever) and I had a lot to say about that honestly.

She commented this "name here--Cursing and swearing in your written work is not acceptable. Learn to use regular written language."

My problems with this are both words are proper English and in the course syllabus it is never stated curse words are grounds for lower grades. In my English 104 course I've used swears multiple times without penalty. Is this bias on her part or am I really supposed to censor my writing?

LOl censor your writing... That's not censoring your writing, it's knowing your audience.

 

[NoMoreTrolls]

Shit, man. That's fucking shit.

Spoiler

lol how have you made it this far

 

[God Dayumm]

make my feelings clear

You deserve the F, unless this was an artistic essay or a script for a persuasive speech.

 

[Imperfected]

College writing is about putting what the person reading it wants to see on the paper.

If you learn this right now you'll save yourself a ridiculous number of rough patches going forward.

 

[Unicorn]

Please show us so we can red ink the fuck out of it.

 

[NH Apache]

You don't need swears to make your 5 paragraph essay edgy. Make a goddamn point and show three major pieces of evidence for.

EZPZ

It isn't a creative writing piece.

Edit: Talk to the prof. They'll most likely let you resubmit.

 

[Phu]

This is academic shit meant to be on par with professional work.

 

[nekkid]

The only time this would be acceptable would be during creating writing assignments.

Conveying your personal opinion on a subject matter on an academic paper, though? What the shitting fuck were you thinking?

 

[DeployThatPizza]

Know your audience. Papers in college should generally be written in an academic and professional tone.

 

[LookAtMeGo]

School fucking sucks

 

[Hattori]

Here’s something to help you

 

[Keri]

You obviously shouldn't swear in a college essay. The point of essays is to teach you to formulate your thoughts and convey important ideas in a professional manner. Adding curse words doesn't make you seem more serious about the topic, it does the exact opposite.

 

[Rosstimus]

OP, Would you mind posting the offending excerpt from your essay? I'm curious, I have to say. And while, imo, an F is too strong a reaction from your professor, you absolutely should not be cursing in academic writing unless you're quoting a primary source. I'm honestly a little surprised that you thought it was a good idea.

 

[DizzyCaffeine]

I think I need to see some examples.

Please.

 

[Reverend Funk]

I got marked for using the word piss in an essay

 

[Grakl]

Lmao you cursed in an essay

 

[1upsuper]

99% of the time, swearing in a college essay is poor form. I do think failing the essay for swearing is a bit extreme, however.