You should read the actual article
I took a few minutes and did,...I still stand by most of my original statement.
Definitely, I can understand where she's coming from (altho I'm not a girl). When she says she's thinking about all the women of sexual violence feeling alienated by that moment, I can understand that. They might feel singled out. But to be frank, that's hypothetical speak. She can't
really say how each and every one of those people will feel (altho it's natural to assume they will feel disgusted), her implication makes it seem they will feel alienated enough to disown and stop playing the game. Not every woman is the same, and not even every rape victim is the same.
Also, I'm sure there are men who will feel similar when playing this, but the closest she gets to that area is in questioning why there was no male who suffered the same as that girl. I don't know if she's in the state of mind to feel that if a man were also raped, it would justify the girl's implied rape in that scene, but realistically that wouldn't justify it any.
More than that, I still think her reaction is based only on a part of the game and not the whole. Maybe there's a moment later in the game that references that scene, or maybe where it occurs again but the roles are reversed. We don't know that yet. Even if there is, it doesn't make it "okay" that the scene with the Pig Butcher occurs, but I doubt the devs put it there thinking it would be accepted as okay by the player to begin with. It was meant to make them feel uncomfortable, and it does that....maybe a little too well for the writer.
I do take back my saying her implying it should be removed or banned or whatnot; she never actually says that. But the way she frames her reaction, genuine as it is, can't help but be construed into that thought. No one sitting there reading it is going to say "Well that's sad. Let's move on". No; developers especially, if they're reading that, they're going to try reading between the lines and figure it won't be a good gamble to touch on the topic anymore. They don't want to potentially alienate a customer, much less a large chunk of their potential base.
It's a risk all true developers take in creating stuff off the beaten path; you're going to offend some people along the way. That's part of the purpose of artistic creation. But the person offended needs to ask themselves if the creator meant to intentionally hurt them, or if their reaction is a gut one due to certain stances they have or personal events they've gone through sharing similarities to it. The instance provoking the reaction can make them question or reaffirm their position on an issue. It may also lead to losing that person as a consumer, but that's part of the risk.