I just did a diff between the original (PDF) and current article and identified the differences. Please note they do not indicate that it was ever modified. (The second change is really minor):
Deleted text isstuck through and red
New text is underlined
Change 1:
Old Title:In Chicago, wishing for a Hurricane Katrina
New Title: Chicago, New Orleans, and rebirth
Change 2:
Old: And after careful study of the levees, it turns out the devastation was not born of natural disaster. It was manmade.
New: And after careful study of the levees, it turns out the devastation was not born of natural disaster. It was man-made.
Change 3:
Old: That's why I find myself praying for arealstorm.It's whyI can relate, metaphorically, to the residents of New Orleans climbing onto their rooftops and begging for help and waving their arms and lurching toward rescue helicopters.
New: That's why I find myself praying for a storm. OK, a figurative storm, something that will prompt a rebirth in Chicago. I can relate, metaphorically, to the residents of New Orleans climbing onto their rooftops and begging for help and waving their arms and lurching toward rescue helicopters.
Holy shit, lady. "Okay. Okay fine a figurative storm, you got me." Do you think she walked it back of her own accord, or is she one of those people who call upon the wrath of her god to punish those she hates (like teachers' unions) and her board had to mitigate her insanity?For the new page:
Sounds like the political version of Rorschach
Link pretty much mentioned it above. I mean, I disagree with her sentiment of course, but she could've totally done without the dumb shock and awe analogy.
For example, I believe that the Holocaust can teach us a lesson of what the worst of humanity can bring and made us realize what we should avoid or take action before something similar occurs again.
That doesn't mean I want another Holocaust though.
Someone desiring this for Chicago's school system honestly pisses me off more than the Katrina shit.An underperforming public school system saw a complete makeover. A new schools chief, Paul Vallas, designed a school system with the flexibility of an entrepreneur. No restrictive mandates from the city or the state. No demands from teacher unions to abide. Instead, he created the nation's first free-market education system.
Same.Someone desiring this for Chicago's school system honestly pisses me off more than the Katrina shit.
I get what he means. Growing up I and around Chicago, the place practically oozes sitb corruption. You wanna know why some social Democrats could end up voting conservative and hating unions? They're probably from Chicago. So many in my family going Republican slowly over time because democrat = corrupt shitbag more often than not.
OK, a figurative storm, something that will prompt a rebirth in Chicago.
But the general sentiment has some truth to it. Chicago/Illinois has been festering for generations and the amount of change required is unprecedented.
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key word being "figurative"
Nah, she said she wanted a real storm before everyone was like "you're a psychopath, what the fuck is wrong with you." and then she stealth edited the article.
That's because people are dumb and generally can't handle parsing a metaphor.
That's because people are dumb and generally can't handle parsing a metaphor.
That doesn't absolve you from exercising some tact.
I think the author is trying to say that Chicago needs to rebuilt from the ground up for any real change to occur. From the Author's perspective it took a massive natural disaster to dislodge entrenched political establishments so that meaningful change could be made. I think this comes off as romanticizing the chaos wrought by Hurricane Katrina, but I don't think they were doing it out of malice, just a poor judgment on their part.
That's because people are dumb and generally can't handle parsing a metaphor.
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