These stories bother me because, as discussed, there is no actual evidence of any wrongdoing or any favors done for donors in any of this stuff. The article literally only gives examples of people who asked for favors and did not apparently receive them!
So basically the the issue is that the Clintons built a huge charity before she became Secretary and ran for President, and so she knows a bunch of dignitaries and rich people because that's what you do when you build a charity, you talk to dignitaries and rich people and get them to give you stuff for free so that you can do charitable stuff with them.
I would like to clearly understand what people find problematic here.
Would they rather Hillary had planned ahead better, not founded the Clinton Foundation, and just let thousands of people die or suffer? Does that sound like a significantly better world?
Would they rather Hillary not have done illegal or unethical stuff that there is no evidence she did but they are confident she did anyway? That seems like an impossible bar to clear.
Would they rather Hillary have snubbed all of her former relationships, networks, and friends when she became Secretary of State and refused to meet with them? Wouldn't that be pretty unfair towards them? They didn't know she was going to be Secretary of State! They might have genuine business with the American government, since they are dignitaries and rich people. Also, I am genuinely confused by this position when people advance it. Do other people not network and build relationships as they move from job to job and continue leveraging those relationships? I thought that was pretty normal behavior.
If there is not a clear and actually sensible thing you wish Hillary had done better, then I kind of feel like you're just mad to be mad at her.