Hey GAF, tell me what you think of my stand-up comedy!

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JCX

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Hi GAF! While I've been here over a decade, I have been too scared to post a clip of my comedy in a thread. It's my birthday though, so I'm feeling bold.

JCX's Stand-Up comedy

Bracing myself for your harsh judgment.
 
Random thoughts.

- Kudos for having the balls to do this.

- Good stage presence. Good confidence. Good body language.

- I wish you didn't start with 2 minutes of self deprecation.

- Liked the James Bond line.

- Liked the asteroid belt bit.

- The penis color bit needs work. All the uncomfortability of racial humor but without any payoff.

- Guuuuuyssss. Guuuyyyyyys. Guuuuuyssss.
Sorry, it's distracting.

Good job.
 
Subbed. I have some stuff to do around the house at the moment, but I will definitely watch it and get back to you.
 
Thanks to everyone who has watched so far.

Random thoughts.


- The penis color bit needs work. All the uncomfortability of racial humor but without any payoff.

- Guuuuuyssss. Guuuyyyyyys. Guuuuuyssss.
Sorry, it's distracting.

Good job.

That's the third time I've told the grindr racist bit, first time telling all the parts together. I realized afterward that I need to switch the order of the beats, so it climaxes where I want it to.

What can I say, guys are often on my mind
I still have issues with thinking words, especially when trying new stuff that isn't drilled into my head.
 
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