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[JCX]

Hi GAF! While I've been here over a decade, I have been too scared to post a clip of my comedy in a thread. It's my birthday though, so I'm feeling bold.

JCX's Stand-Up comedy

Bracing myself for your harsh judgment.

 

[Slo]

Random thoughts.

- Kudos for having the balls to do this.

- Good stage presence. Good confidence. Good body language.

- I wish you didn't start with 2 minutes of self deprecation.

- Liked the James Bond line.

- Liked the asteroid belt bit.

- The penis color bit needs work. All the uncomfortability of racial humor but without any payoff.

- Guuuuuyssss. Guuuyyyyyys. Guuuuuyssss.

Spoiler

Sorry, it's distracting.

Good job.

 

[Shadybiz]

Subbed. I have some stuff to do around the house at the moment, but I will definitely watch it and get back to you.

 

[hydrophilic attack]

I'm more of a sit-down comedian

 

[capitalCORN]

Pretty good, I liked it. I generally like some very mean stuff, but I enjoyed your material.

 

[True Savior]

I watched 1 minute and actually laughed. Kudos. Will watch the rest later.

 

[JCX]

Thanks to everyone who has watched so far.

Random thoughts.


- The penis color bit needs work. All the uncomfortability of racial humor but without any payoff.

- Guuuuuyssss. Guuuyyyyyys. Guuuuuyssss.

Spoiler

Sorry, it's distracting.

Good job.

That's the third time I've told the grindr racist bit, first time telling all the parts together. I realized afterward that I need to switch the order of the beats, so it climaxes where I want it to.

What can I say, guys are often on my mind

Spoiler

I still have issues with thinking words, especially when trying new stuff that isn't drilled into my head.