Hey Servbot24, I quite like your linework and flat-shaded stuff more than the fully shaded stuff. It overall feels a bit blurry and the colors too desaturated and mainly cold. But what bothers me the most is the blurriness of them, anyway.
The designs are looking cool though. For your latest I would try to at least differentiate the background and the legs, right now they share the same colors. Even if the legs are supposed to be metallic, I would still maybe make the background a bit lighter and also add some fresnel around many of the metallic outlines.
Edit: I see her right leg has some. Still the metal doesn't read like total metal, maybe try to add more stuff reflecting on it?
Thanks for the feedback!Yeah the line work tends to get a better response I've noticed, the main reason I do a lot of shaded work is because as a consumer I'm just more familiar with industries where realism is in demand, so I try to get better at that. Tryna move on from my day job
Not sure about the blurriness, that may be because I use a texture brush on a paper texture canvas. I'll try a different technique next time. The colors are indeed desaturated, I did that because I'm a bit insecure with my colors and wanted to just let the focus be on the lines. I gotta get over that though.
If I do end up finding a stronger direction with the flat design, I definitely need to figure out how to make them look like "showpieces" rather than just random designs on a page.
I don't know how this might work for characters, but you can try looking around the internet for art you like because of the color, and then try to use those colors in your art directly? I know it's not the best way to get used to colors probably, but for me it worked (I mean, besides learning the basics about colors and all that, obviously).
I don't know if this is too low level for you or not, but I got this book and while I knew some stuff already, I learnt quite a bit as well:
http://www.amazon.com/dp/1933492961/?tag=neogaf0e-20
It's $30 but I found the Scott Robertson "how to" books to be quite insightful!
Bartering with an Orc.
Using one color.
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I had no idea what I was doing here. More of a reintroduction to watercolor painting after a hiatus.
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Started this but don't really know where I'm going with it, might put it aside
Nah man don't do that! I love the lighting in this and the colour scheme!
thanks! I think once I get some photo reference going I'll feel less frustrated. Also having a hard time nailing the composition. I actually put quite a bit of effort into it but still doesn't feel right.
and your work is looking beautiful as always! the drop shadows make me so happy, haha
Aha thank man. And I know that feeling all too well. Sometimes its the colours, sometimes its the shape, sometimes it's hard to tell what the problem is. Either way good luck!
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Finished today , 4 to 5 hours. Really just trying to get these commissions over with. So I felt a bit lazy but at the same time I suppose I'm not supposed to over work a sketch if what they want is a sketch. So much dragon age stuff.
Today's environment sketches. This time I tried mixing parts of something resembling the Colorado River with Hawa Mahal, from India.
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That's pretty cool. I love your line work and shading!
It's all just pencil on paper, right?
Here's a WIP I started tonight, about 3 hours in
What I did since I last posted here:
DEATH;165602081 said:^ yeah I used a reference, it's more like a quick study...
http://i.imgur.com/KXSIqBt.jpg (NSFW)
The left forearm was forshortened (need to practice for the upcoming gaf art challenge), but I do thank you for the calves and neck. I need to work it out too as well as proportions. Thanks!
Thanks!! seeing the stuff you do, adding some scifi bits would probably be easy stuff for youGreat designs man. I always envied people who can do sci-fi vehicles. Or sci-fi anything really...
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A few hours. Decided to paint over a really old picture while testing out new brushes. Started using one and now I can't even be bothered to try the others...I'll try and finish it eventually.