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Banned
Obviously I don't expect him to be a speechwriter too but I do think he could have addressed the points he brought up in a more positive and inclusive way (even with the real context of the question now understood by me). Most of these problems require government based interventions and solutions (mental health strikes out as the most obvious example), not merely community or familial engagement, although that's important too. Rather than pointing to citizens as the primary people who need to act, he could say the police and citizens are in the same boat, we're both being forced to tackle problems we're not equipped to handle as a result of government inaction. I think this was a good opportunity to have a real call to arms in terms of calling out the government as the underlying problem that we need to rally against.
I also think he could lay out a stronger indictment against his own contemporaries across the country while emphasizing that all the good work he's done so far will be tenuous until the state/federal governments enforce new legal standards. Otherwise nothing stops the next police chief or the neighboring jurisdiction from reversing course (or remaining awful) and staining everyone else's reputations and causing further damage and loss of life.
I also think he could lay out a stronger indictment against his own contemporaries across the country while emphasizing that all the good work he's done so far will be tenuous until the state/federal governments enforce new legal standards. Otherwise nothing stops the next police chief or the neighboring jurisdiction from reversing course (or remaining awful) and staining everyone else's reputations and causing further damage and loss of life.