Lupin the Third
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Everybody's Golf sounds worse. It sounds like a bargain bin $5 Chinese knockoff title. Maybe it sounds better in Japan, but the word here is just too damn generic and bland.
It's not exactly ready for prime time IMO. At least maybe rephrase it or something, "Golf for Everyone" or some variant. "Everybody's Golf" sounds like a witch came from the 4th dimension and turned everyone on Earth into a putting green, a club, and a ball, and the only way to return to normal is to have a bunch of Wacky Characters from yet another dimension come and play on us.