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Fall 2012 Anime |OT| Meet the new world, same as the old world

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SDBurton

World's #1 Cosmonaut Enthusiast
You're boring. :(


Both are awesome in the way they fuck with the audience. I think Cross Days is even better than School Days at that!

I'll give it another chance! >:I :lol

I definitely agree with you on the second part.

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Awwwww!

That moment was ridiculously sweet. Yuuki is definitely my favorite among the girls. Reserved, refined, and caring for those around her. What I really like about her moments with Yume is that they're so laid back and cas-

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MANIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIAC!

*dies*
 
So I caught up with my good backlog, made it through my boring backlog and now I'm stuck with #hatebacklog.

Sword Art Online 10

Action wasn't pleasing on the eyes. Or very interesting.

Romance doesn't help one bit.

Needed more ax-crazy.
 

OceanBlue

Member

I'm probably the only one here who feels this way, but I'm kinda looking forward to OniAi because of Keiichiro Kawaguchi's directing work in Mayo Chiki, Nyan Koi, and Hayate no Gotoku Season 1. Even if the subject material in those weren't the best, I feel like those were relatively notable to me for being pretty funny (at least, that was my impressions, and especially so with Hayate) and things like the comedic timing or the pacing of each are definitely similar enough for me to attribute it to Kawaguchi's directing.
 

Dead

well not really...yet
Mary Sue might not be the best term since she's not as much a perfect audience surrogate as a perfect waifu. Still, she's an annoyingly flawless character with an incredibly contrived role.
you forgot the awful, awful, awful VA
 

duckroll

Member
Mary Sue might not be the best term since she's not as much a perfect audience surrogate as a perfect waifu. Still, she's an annoyingly flawless character with an incredibly contrived role.

I think Mary Sue is a pretty good term here. GL isn't a "waifu" anime really, since the focus is on how manly and cool Simon is, and how he fights with his bros. Simon's aspects are appealing to a female audience, especially since he is initially non-threatening as a kid. Nia fits as a Mary Sue because from a female perspective she is:

- the headstrong and confident rich girl who chooses moral right over being born into wealth and power

- she suffers for being who she is, only to be rescued by the prince in shining armor, and then works her way into the group, and makes major unique contributions which only she can, because of who she is

There's a lot more if we get into spoiler territory, but basically, I can definitely see a lot of girls dreaming about being Nia, even with all the hardships she goes through, because even those things only make her a "stronger" character in terms of how noble she is and what she means to Simon.
 

Hitokage

Setec Astronomer
Mary Sue might not be the best term since she's not as much a perfect audience surrogate as a perfect waifu.
Mary Sues have little to do with the audience. They're either author surrogates or the embodiment of what the author considers ideal.
 

Jarmel

Banned
Urobuchi is a very interesting writer. I like him a lot, and I'm a huge fan of his works. But it has come to my attention that some people consider him a bad writer. Looking into these opinions and considering the facts have led me to a conclusion. Urobuchi is a writer who does not aim higher than what he deems necessary for a given topic. He is a pulp writer who is more interested in delivering a tight and coherent experience that fits nicely into the concept being sold to an audience, and he is more interested in "pandering" to the satisfaction of the audience and managing expectations very neatly, rather than having something particularly profound or meaningful to say.

And thinking about this led me to realize that the reason I like his form of writing is that for mainstream anime these days, I feel this is exactly what I want and need from it. When there is a solid production behind a concept which I find appealing, the last thing I want is for the creators to be "too smart" and try to out-think the audience, or make their characters so philosophical that they become parodies of themselves. I just want what I was promised, and if there is foreshadowing and teasing of stuff, I expect those to be deliver in the proper proportion that the show is suggesting.

Saya no Uta, Madoka, Fate/Zero, these all fall perfectly under this category. Nothing is promised but under-delivered, if you expect the story to "go there", it will, because if it hints at it, it will deliver. If it isn't going to "go there", it will not suggest it to begin with. The endings are also major game changing events, which walks the fine line between feeling conclusive, and also being bittersweet. Urobuchi also tends to specifically write in moments in the endings which show that the characters who survived or won something "earned" it in some way. This reinforces the audience's satisfaction with how "watertight" the entire story is, and it feels more conclusive and cohesive as a whole.

My point is that I don't think it matters to me that Urobuchi doesn't "aim high" because the important thing for me is that so far when he has been seriously involved with a project, he doesn't "miss the goal". And while he doesn't aim high, he also tends to write in very interesting genres which don't really exist much anywhere else these days. Even something like Blassreiter isn't common at all, and in the hands of a better studio and director, it could have been something really special. His most "generic" work to speak of would be Phantom of the Inferno, and only because Bee Train went out of their way to water the entire "girls with guns" genre down year after year from Noir onwards. When Bee Train stopped, so did that genre.

tl;dr: I dunno... if you didn't bother to read all that text I spent time typing... FUCK YOU!!! Lol. :)

I do somewhat disagree with your analysis of Urobuchi. I think specifically because of Madoka in that Madoka wasn't a typical magical girl show and instead was a subversion. It very much wasn't pandering to the audience(unless they like gore and suffering). He doesn't get lofty like Oshii does or Sato did in Ergo Proxy which is perfectly fine as the writing tends to go off the rails when writers get philosophical. You are selling him short however in that he does discuss utilitarian concepts and in general is more interested in psychology and morality. I mean look at Kirei, you have a guy who not only comes to terms with his sadistic side but is seemingly rewarded for it. Then you have Kyubey, who people still argue whether he was evil or not. He very much is interested in certain social concepts and does try to bring it up in his works. The difference is that he doesn't let those concepts overwhelm the story and always keeps the narrative at the forefront.
 

duckroll

Member
Still better than Mari Okada.

Just for all the Mari Okada fans here: http://www.fandompost.com/2012/10/02/animefest-2012-sayo-yamamoto-panel-report/

AnimeFest 2012: Sayo Yamamoto Panel Report

Sato: Much like with Cowboy Bebop, I only wrote 3 of the episodes of the series myself. It was the ever-famous Okada Mari who was responsible for the overall series composition. Can you tell us about the experience and the casting of Ms. Okada?

Yamamoto: I had several different opportunities to possibly work with Okada in past years, but for some reason or another, the staff around me always stopped it from happening. They said we were “two birds of a feather”, or “north pole plus north pole is not going to work out well, working together”. TMS entertainment is most famous for children’s series such as Anpanman, Hamtaro, and Detective Conan (Case Closed). I bet they didn’t know too much about myself or Miss Okada when they realized they were going to choose us! So surprisingly, when I decided to give the offer to Miss Okada nobody stopped me this time. It just went through.

*Translator speaking directly to the audience* You may not realize that Miss Okada is considered the topmost rated scriptwriter in Japan right now, she’s done AnoHana but also AKB0048, which is a tie-in with a very popular idol group, so she’s immensely popular.

Sato: So even though she’s so extremely busy with so many projects, was it really so easy to send a request and she said “I’ll do it”?

Yamamoto: Well…yeah.

Sato: When you worked with her, did you feel your dreams or wishes had come true having to work with her?

Yamamoto: Yes, she’s a very interesting person. It’s not always the case that an interesting scriptwriter can write interesting scripts. But I was really pleased with how amazing the script ended up being, which far exceeded how interesting Ms. Okada is, the script was even more so. She has an amazing reputation for memorable punch lines and memorable quotes that characters say. We felt that we needed to be able to execute good punchy lines, which is critical to a Lupin piece. And I think that we’ve been able to add so many of those punch lines inside the show is really just thanks to Miss Okada.
 
Leave Nia alone you arseholes...

I actually like Nia. Her pupils are awesome.

Mary Sue might not be the best term since she's not as much a perfect audience surrogate as a perfect waifu. Still, she's an annoyingly flawless character with an incredibly contrived role.

I don't know if I'd call an incredibly naive girl
that was thrown out by her father
flawless.

I think her role works very well because she's literally
a plot device given will
. I think you can either justify her personality, or give her a free pass for that reason.
 

Branduil

Member
I think Mary Sue is a pretty good term here. GL isn't a "waifu" anime really, since the focus is on how manly and cool Simon is, and how he fights with his bros. Simon's aspects are appealing to a female audience, especially since he is initially non-threatening as a kid. Nia fits as a Mary Sue because from a female perspective she is:

- the headstrong and confident rich girl who chooses moral right over being born into wealth and power

- she suffers for being who she is, only to be rescued by the prince in shining armor, and then works her way into the group, and makes major unique contributions which only she can, because of who she is

There's a lot more if we get into spoiler territory, but basically, I can definitely see a lot of girls dreaming about being Nia, even with all the hardships she goes through, because even those things only make her a "stronger" character in terms of how noble she is and what she means to Simon.

Yeah, I neglected to think about the perspective of female fans of GL just because it's just so over-the-top shounen, but girls like shounen too.
 

Branduil

Member
I do somewhat disagree with your analysis of Urobuchi. I think specifically because of Madoka in that Madoka wasn't a typical magical girl show and instead was a subversion. It very much wasn't pandering to the audience(unless they like gore and suffering). He doesn't get lofty like Oshii does or Sato did in Ergo Proxy which is perfectly fine as the writing tends to go off the rails when writers get philosophical. You are selling him short however in that he does discuss utilitarian concepts and in general is more interested in psychology and morality. I mean look at Kirei, you have a guy who not only comes to terms with his sadistic side but is seemingly rewarded for it. Then you have Kyubey, who people still argue whether he was evil or not. He very much is interested in certain social concepts and does try to bring it up in his works. The difference is that he doesn't let those concepts overwhelm the story and always keeps the narrative at the forefront.

It's naive to think that Madoka subverting certain tropes means it isn't pandering. Urobuchi gave people exactly what they wanted.
 

Jarmel

Banned
It's naive to think that Madoka subverting certain tropes means it isn't pandering. Urobuchi gave people exactly what they wanted.

Who? And what did they want? I mean if people were interested in the magical girl component, it wasn't that big of a deal in the show and Madoka
doesn't sign a contract till the final episode
.
 

Branduil

Member
I actually like Nia. Her pupils are awesome.

I don't know if I'd call an incredibly naive girl
that was thrown out by her father
flawless.

I think her role works very well because she's literally
a plot device given will
. I think you can either justify her personality, or give her a free pass for that reason.

None of the bad things that happened to her were her fault, though. That's part of being a Mary Sue, just like with Kirito, her life sucks because of the cruelty of fate and we're supposed to be attracted by her effortless nobility when face-to-face with despair.
 

sleepykyo

Member
think specifically because of Madoka in that Madoka wasn't a typical magical girl show and instead was a subversion. It very much wasn't pandering to the audience(unless they like gore and suffering).

Exactly there is a segment of people who like seeing the subversive take on superheroes/magical girls (Mark Millar builds his career on it). Pandering to that group is pandering nonetheless.
 

Branduil

Member
Who? And what did they want? I mean if people were interested in the magical girl component, it wasn't that big of a deal in the show and Madoka
doesn't sign a contract till the final episode
.

They wanted to see Urobuchi subvert magical girl tropes. Enjoying subversions is pretty common for fans of a genre because it stimulates the box-checking part of their brains.
 

Jarmel

Banned
Exactly there is a segment of people who like seeing the subversive take on superheroes/magical girls (Mark Millar builds his career on it). Pandering to that group is pandering nonetheless.

Then you could make an argument of pandering for any major work then.
 

duckroll

Member
Who? And what did they want? I mean if people were interested in the magical girl component, it wasn't that big of a deal in the show and Madoka
doesn't sign a contract till the final episode
.

Madoka Magica is an action thriller which starts with an apocalyptic event. Then it introduces a mystery female character who knows the main character, even though she does not know her. There is a connection hinted at, and the premises promises that something sinister is about to happen to everyone who is living a "normal life".

Don't think of it as a magical girl show or a that people who go into a genre are looking for certain particular things. I am talking about what the show establishes from the onset, and what it delivers. The entire narrative is completely transparent, and hence it is incredibly effective in drawing people in and then meeting their expectations by giving them what they want.

Episode 10 of Madoka Magica is exactly what I am talking about. The show foreshadows and teases "who is Homura?!" for 9 episodes, and then spends an entire episode detailing the entire mystery and revealing it in a satisfying but orthodox way. Viewers are literally being given what they want. This is not a bad thing. But it is a staple of pulp writing.
 
Exactly there is a segment of people who like seeing the subversive take on superheroes/magical girls (Mark Millar builds his career on it). Pandering to that group is pandering nonetheless.

Well, how can you make a magical girl anime (or something else) without some kind of "pandering"?
 

Uchip

Banned
None of the bad things that happened to her were her fault, though. That's part of being a Mary Sue, just like with Kirito, her life sucks because of the cruelty of fate and we're supposed to be attracted by her effortless nobility when face-to-face with despair.

any character doing anything effortlessly is uninteresting, as are static characters that never change
I hated her as a character because she had no character
 

Uchip

Banned
Urobuchi is one of my favorite writers recently.
Madoka and Fate Zero were both strokes of genius.

from those two shows it seems they don't like to slot characters into good or evil (apart from the character madoka I guess)
there is a lot of grey area which is awesome
 

Branduil

Member
No, I read the whole thing and I pretty much agree with you. Urobuchi seems to have a very solid grasp of the fundamentals of screenwriting, such as the three-act structure, a clear protagonist, and a climactic dramatic question which revolves around the protagonist's own character. He's also good at establishing the motivations of major characters. These all seem like relatively simple things but the terrible writing in so many anime shows that it's not. And he's much better at writing convincing melodrama than certain people.

To expand on this, let's compare it to something that fails: Darker than Black s2.

Who is the protagonist? Suou I guess, but Hei is important too. What is their motivation? Suou just follows Hei along mindlessly even though he
"killed" her father.
Hei is trying to find Yin and do... what?
Kill her? Why?
The villain's goal is to do something something prophecy something. Not a single important character in the entire fricking show has a clear motivation, nor do we have any idea what is at stake. What is the dramatic question the show answers? Well we'd have to know the question first and that requires knowing both the protagonist and their motivation.

In fact, I can only think of two characters in the whole show who have a somewhat clear motivation: Misaki, and that abominable teenage skateboarder dude, and they both have the same shallow motivation, which is sexual attraction to someone who doesn't want them.

Dat Mari Okada top-rated screenwriting.
 

Jex

Member
I do somewhat disagree with your analysis of Urobuchi. I think specifically because of Madoka in that Madoka wasn't a typical magical girl show and instead was a subversion. It very much wasn't pandering to the audience(unless they like gore and suffering).

But that's exactly the kind of thing people like watching, isn't it? I mean, not only are there a fair number of otaku who enjoy those things directly there's a much wider audience that's thoroughly entertained by the shock value. Why are horror movies so consistently and universally popular if people don't enjoy gore and suffering on some level? Either because they actually enjoy gore and suffering or because of the cathartic effect of such 'horror' works.

More over, 'tragedy porn' is a very popular genre in light novels/anime/whatever. It's very "in". A number of extremely popular works have it as a key theme.
 

Instro

Member

Q. How did you come up with idea for Oscar? He appears to have been influenced by Rose of Versailles or Song of Wind and Trees.

Yamamoto: We thought of Oscar on the fly and not something that we put a lot of deep thought into...

You don't say.

Q. Do you feel that being able to gather this team has increased your stature as a director? Elevated your status in the industry?

Yamamoto: Absolutely not.

LOL
 

duckroll

Member
Since Jarmel seems to have misunderstood my general point, I'll further clarify it: I am not saying that Urobuchi is a writer to panders to an particular audience. My wording specifically said that he is pandering to audience expectations. As in, the audience already reading/playing/watching whatever he got them into in the first place. Another way to put it is, he gives people what they expect and want from his stories. Every single time.

I think if we're talking about something that has not aired yet, Psycho-Pass is also a good example of this. I would say most of us are excited for it because it promises to be another Urobuchi "ride" where the characters are set up in a fragile scenario where things will start falling apart, and the system and their weapons will eventually turn against them. Someone will be betrayed, many people will die. This is what we expect out of the premise because it is traditionally what is entertaining about such a premise, and based on Urobuchi's past work, we have a relative high level of confidence that he will "deliver" on that.

Yet if viewed from a creative and artistic point of view, that is incredibly artificial and unoriginal. If we already know what to expect, that means there's a level of predictability in the entire narrative and premise to begin with. But since it is just entertainment and we would rather have something we enjoy than something that is bad, it's not a bad thing. That's why pulp writing is not a negative point by itself.
 

Jarmel

Banned
Madoka Magica is an action thriller which starts with an apocalyptic event. Then it introduces a mystery female character who knows the main character, even though she does not know her. There is a connection hinted at, and the premises promises that something sinister is about to happen to everyone who is living a "normal life".

Don't think of it as a magical girl show or a that people who go into a genre are looking for certain particular things. I am talking about what the show establishes from the onset, and what it delivers. The entire narrative is completely transparent, and hence it is incredibly effective in drawing people in and then meeting their expectations by giving them what they want.

Episode 10 of Madoka Magica is exactly what I am talking about. The show foreshadows and teases "who is Homura?!" for 9 episodes, and then spends an entire episode detailing the entire mystery and revealing it in a satisfying but orthodox way. Viewers are literally being given what they want. This is not a bad thing. But it is a staple of pulp writing.

Well I think that's just proper foreshadowing. George R.R. Martin makes a point of not going on forums or fansites as he doesn't want to try and outsmart the reader, and I doubt anyone would accuse him of pulp writing. I think it's about being natural in that the story is built a certain way and instead of trying to pull Lindelof shit that doesn't make sense, you let the story go its natural course.

But that's exactly the kind of thing people like watching, isn't it? I mean, not only are there a fair number of otaku who enjoy those things directly there's a much wider audience that's thoroughly entertained by the shock value. Why are horror movies so consistently and universally popular if people don't enjoy gore and suffering on some level? Either because they actually enjoy gore and suffering or because of the cathartic effect of such 'horror' works.

More over, 'tragedy porn' is a very popular genre in light novels/anime/whatever. It's very "in". A number of extremely popular works have it as a key theme.

Unless someone ruined them on the hook of the show(mainly stuff after post-episode 3) then I doubt people would go in expecting gore/suffering. Certain people made guesses because Urobuchi did Saya no Uta prior but based on the show itself, it's not something that someone interested in horror movies would be initially interested in. They even made the OP light-hearted as fuck to trick people. I rewatched the first four episodes and it's ridiculous that the extent that they went to, to trick people.
 

duckroll

Member
Well I think that's just proper foreshadowing. George R.R. Martin makes a point of not going on forums or fansites as he doesn't want to try and outsmart the reader, and I doubt anyone would accuse him of pulp writing. I think it's about being natural in that the story is built a certain way and instead of trying to pull Lindelof shit that doesn't make sense, you let the story go its natural course.

But GRRM was a pulp scifi writer for most of his career...

Heck, one of his short stories was even turned into an Outer Limits episode. :p
 

Narag

Member
from those two shows it seems they don't like to slot characters into good or evil (apart from the character madoka I guess)
there is a lot of grey area which is awesome

Regarding that notion, there's also a misleading element I enjoyed too.
I didn't know what I was getting into with Madoka aside from the weird Kyubey meme stuff and found myself thinking him not so bad and probably who the girls should listen to. Conversely, I thought Kiritsugu was going to be the most evil motherfucker around based on his introduction and the talk of his past. Not to say he wasn't ruthless in his methods but the truth of some his past deeds, namely destroying an airliner to get at one target, created a false first impression that was pretty far removed from the truth.
 

Dresden

Member
Well I think that's just proper foreshadowing. George R.R. Martin makes a point of not going on forums or fansites as he doesn't want to try and outsmart the reader, and I doubt anyone would accuse him of pulp writing. I think it's about being natural in that the story is built a certain way and instead of trying to pull Lindelof shit that doesn't make sense, you let the story go its natural course.

Well, Martin spent his whole career writing pulp, pretty much. It's hard to go through his bibliography and the catalog of short stories he's written without coming to that conclusion. By no means is it a slight on the man himself, just a statement of his intent, rather than the quality of his works.

I think some of the disagreement here comes from (what I assume) is your misconception that the label 'pulp' denotes inferiority in terms of structure or coherence.
 

Branduil

Member
Since Jarmel seems to have misunderstood my general point, I'll further clarify it: I am not saying that Urobuchi is a writer to panders to an particular audience. My wording specifically said that he is pandering to audience expectations. As in, the audience already reading/playing/watching whatever he got them into in the first place. Another way to put it is, he gives people what they expect and want from his stories. Every single time.

I think if we're talking about something that has not aired yet, Psycho-Pass is also a good example of this. I would say most of us are excited for it because it promises to be another Urobuchi "ride" where the characters are set up in a fragile scenario where things will start falling apart, and the system and their weapons will eventually turn against them. Someone will be betrayed, many people will die. This is what we expect out of the premise because it is traditionally what is entertaining about such a premise, and based on Urobuchi's past work, we have a relative high level of confidence that he will "deliver" on that.

Yet if viewed from a creative and artistic point of view, that is incredibly artificial and unoriginal. If we already know what to expect, that means there's a level of predictability in the entire narrative and premise to begin with. But since it is just entertainment and we would rather have something we enjoy than something that is bad, it's not a bad thing. That's why pulp writing is not a negative point by itself.

I would say predictability is inherent to all of narrative writing. It is extremely hard to write something that is both completely unpredictable and good. In most cases you only have one big surprise in a story; after that surprises either suffer from diminishing returns, or the writing falls apart attempting to serve bigger and better surprises.
 

jman2050

Member
re: Madoka/Urobuchi, I'll just say that I appreciate works that don't attempt to obfuscate their message or intent behind layers of abstraction. The audience should not have to work too hard for their entertainment. Leave the task of deeply analyzing a work to the academics.
 

Stoof

Member
I'm guessing it's probably a bad thing I haven't watched Madoka Magica yet, given how much I've seen it talked about in here... I should rectify this tomorrow.
 

Uchip

Banned
Yet if viewed from a creative and artistic point of view, that is incredibly artificial and unoriginal. If we already know what to expect, that means there's a level of predictability in the entire narrative and premise to begin with. But since it is just entertainment and we would rather have something we enjoy than something that is bad, it's not a bad thing. That's why pulp writing is not a negative point by itself.

The possibility of characters dying and shit getting real is more unpredictable than predictable. Its the same kind of appeal that Quentin Tarentino's films have and its an extra layer of possibility in which you know certain shows will not ever touch.
 
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