That chart is fine;D
So I don't want to clog up this thread with more text analysis requests, but my Japanese buddy is currently not available and so I only have GAF right now to ask...
I just want to say in a short few sentences, that I think the Internet will be more important in regards to elections in the future. People will vote online and talk about politics, once more people use the internet.
I know there are mistakes, so any help would be appreciated:
ネット世論は大切
個人的な意見ですが、ネット世論はもっと大切になる都思います。たぶん、将来政府がネットで選挙を実施してできると、ネットでディスカッションをできることのは必要です。人々が自分の意見を書いたり、他人のを読んだりできる方法です。今まで、ネットでいろいろ極端な意見がありますけど、この意見は大数ではありません。体多数はネットを使うと、極端な意見は小部分になると思います。
There are a lot of small, yet persistent problems with your text.
I'm not sure where to start, nor can I really post everything without rewriting it for you.
Just some suggestions but...
・ 個人的な意見ですが、
I don't know the context of your text, whether it's academic or meant to be part of a speech, but I don't think you need this. It should be obvious that you're stating this as part of your opinion and not fact. This construction makes sense to me as a native speaker of English, but may come off as unnatural in a conversation among Japanese.
・。たぶん、将来政府がネットで選挙を実施してできると、ネットでディスカッションをできることのは必要です。
No need to make your statement weaker here. If the government institutes elections via the internet in the future, then a means of discussion will be necessary. Also, repeating ネット in the same sentence, again, makes sense in English but not necessarily in Japanese, or can come off as being heavy handed. I imagine you're struggling to find a pronoun in the second sentence, but you don't always need one since we know you're talking about the internet already.
Also, after できる you don't need こと and のは in this situation (or even most situations.) のは/のが typically comes after the dictionary form of the verb, as does こと. You may want to look for words that strengthen your argument like, 必ず、に違いない、or rhetorical questions using ではないでしょうか。 If that's beyond your current level, then something like, ネットでのディスカッションが絶対に必要になると思います or you can reverse the order of your next sentence (if I'm reading it correctly) and say something like できると、人が自分の意見を交換できる方法が必要となります。 and then tie in your sentence about how the net will fill that need or whatnot.
・人々が自分の意見を書いたり、他人のを読んだりできる方法です。
I don't understand what you're trying to say here. If I translate it into English, I'm guessing that you're trying to say something like "If it becomes possible to hold government elections on the net in the future, then people will need the ability to discuss (those elections) on the internet - a place (way in your sentence) where they can post their own opinions and be exposed to the opinions of others.
Is that right?
・今まで、ネットでいろいろ極端な意見がありますけど、この意見は大数ではありません。体多数はネットを使うと、極端な意見は小部分になると思います。[
I think I get the gist of what you're saying. Basically that sure, there may be a number of wackos out there with some rather extreme beliefs, but as the number of people participating in discussions on the internet increases - you believe that these minute few will quickly become the minority?
I think the connection between the previous sentence and this line of thinking will probably throw most Japanese speakers. You may want to throw a sentence between the two something like 確かにインタネットが完璧な集会所ではありません。Then go into the wackos like ネットでいろいろ極端な意見があります then follow with "however"....
・I could be wrong, but I think you're shooting yourself in the foot with この意見は大数ではありません
・体多数はネットを使うと. I don't understand what you mean here. I've guessed at it but could be wrong.
So.....
I've been thinking about things lately, including possibly wanting to back to college to a different career path. Problem is, last graduated over 10 years ago, so don't even know if I have the capability of learning/retaining really. BUT I am a massive fan of anime stuffs and games in general, so figure a good way to figure out if I can as I get things together over the next year is to learn a language I don't know but have always been interested in.
Then I stumble upon this thread, and my mind has exploded. What is the best way for someone *totally* new to start this whole thing? I've seen the Rosetta Stone thing, but don't know what's the best method of just starting. Like, materials I should be on the lookout for, etc. Back in college, a few of my professors were kind of crap so I kind of taught myself out of textbooks, so self-teaching isn't a foreign concept, but this doesn't strike me as a "Here's a texbook, go to town!" kind of thing.
I have nothing but free time, and only positives can come from doing this, so really willing to give this as much time/effort as possible, and I highly doubt the college I was looking at has any classes, and I know there's nothing in the area in terms of classes that I can do.
Any advice?
I'm just going to throw this out there, but you should keep in mind that the journey of learning a new language can vary wildly from person to person.
First, throw out the notion that you don't have the capability of learning / retaining. You do. Thinking like that is probably the easiest way to keep yourself from doing anything, let alone learn a new language.
In my experience, learning a language boils down to a few essential points.
1) Set reasonable goals
First, identify what you want to do in the target language. What level of fluency are you aiming for? You should know that becoming a native-level bilingual is near impossible if you haven't had the exposure from an early age. Getting that out of the way, it is completely possible to get to the point where you can communicate with Japanese natives with minimal difficulty, enjoy manga, or movies / anime in the native language. It will not happen overnight. Assuming that you were raised as an English native, Japanese is one of the more time-intensive languages to become proficient in. The FSI (Foreign Service Institute) lists Japanese as a category III language, meaning that the total amount of time required is usually a lot more than other similar languages like Spanish, French, or German; and fairly more than other languages like Irish or Vietnamese. Japanese is not so much difficult as it is different, and is influenced strongly by Japanese culture.
So I would start small. Like, really small. Find what you like about the language and stick with it. If you like reading manga, then find some seriously low level stuff, grab a dictionary, and read through it. Just set the bar low. One of the most common reasons people quit learning a language is they get discouraged easily because they've chosen something too hard. Learn a new katakana / hiragana character a day. Learn how to write / say your name. Once you get an idea of where you are progress-wise, start setting mid and long-term goals. This can range from taking the Japanese Language Proficiency Test or spending a week in Japan or whatever.
2) Find something you like and stick with it (Persistence)
If you're into manga then find some something that looks interesting, grab a dictionary and a pencil and get to work. One of the more famous, non-native celebrities in Japan (David Specter) got his start this way and he's god-tier in Japanese. If you want to start reading the language "as-is", without the romanji, then start working on learning hiragana and katakana. It's all repetition. Then you can read more manga and start working your way up to kanji.
Learning a language is not a race, it's journey. As long as you're taking steps, you're progressing. You'll have to be the judge of how fast you want to go. The key is to have fun while you're doing it and TO KEEP DOING IT.
The elephant in the room...
3) Self Learning
It is possible for you to learn a language on your own. There are a ton of resources out there. I will tell you though that most people will benefit from actual contact with native speakers. There's just no getting around it. You'll only get so far before you hit a wall, unless you want to concentrate solely on reading / writing. Eventually, you will have to find a way to resolve this problem. Trips abroad, tutoring, friends, whatever. Chances are though, that if you've reached a point where you're seriously looking to deal with this problem - then you'll probably be dedicated enough to find a way. Where there is a will, there is a way. Also, learning a language costs time and money, mostly time, but you can find a lot of great, fun stuff on Amazon if you look.
1) Identify your goals. What do you want to do?
2) Find ways to have fun while accomplishing your goals.
3) Persistence.
Everything else will fall into place.
Good luck!