Emphyrio (Jack Vance)
This was an interesting story but I'm not so sure about the quality actual narrative. There's something very unorthodox about the way Vance formats his stories, which I suspect has much to do with being a forerunner in a new subgenre of sorts. From what I had previously read in
Dying Earth, I think it works better as short stories than a longer novella form.
In terms of the the scenario and setting, it's an intriguing tale about a world indoctrinated in a unique form of socialism, creating the environment needed for the production of crafts of the highest quality for export. There are elements of a great science fiction story here - a boy growing into a man, people questioning their place in society, the mystery behind a cultural myth, and so on. The main issue which made this an odd read is that the pacing of the story feels very inconsistent. It can spend a lot of time on certain events, while totally glossing over others, even though the latter feels more significant or important. It almost feels like Vance lost interest in writing the story with the same amount of detail at some point, and just wanted to get it over with and complete the story.
There are clear signs that Vance wanted the structure of the story to be somewhat dramatic - it opens in media res with the protagonist in a bad situation, the bulk of the story is a flashback leading up to the moments of the opening, and at the very end there is a big reveal moment where the central mystery of the story is solved and explained while referencing various clues throughout the book. The structure is certainly there, but the dramatic flair just fails to come together in an elegant way. That's probably the most disappointing aspect of the narrative. I like passive laid back writing, but when the material clearly wants to be dramatic but fails at it, it's just feels disconnected instead.
Overall though, I definitely enjoyed reading it. It's a pretty unique story and I just wish it was more polished. The editing on the edition I read was also abysmal. There were typos and errors all over the text. By the end of it, I still have no idea if the name of the trading guild in the book is supposed to be Biomarc or Boimarc. Both terms were used with frequency, sometimes even in the same paragraph. For something that's 50 years old, and considered a "classic" it's odd that it hasn't been cleaned up. :/