Scum's Wish 5
I'm not really sure how I feel about the adaptation now, particularly after talking about it a few days ago here and letting it breathe a bit. In many ways, cuts like this makes the show feel like Monogatari, but it doesn't quite work for me. Perhaps the biggest difference is that Monogatari's scenes are almost always dialogues, while these scenes are all monologues. So in Monogatari I'm learning new information about both the plot and the various characters' state of mind, where in Scum's Wish, I'm supposed to be enveloped in whatever misery the current character is feeling at the moment.
But while I think it worked in the first couple of episodes since you're essentially stuck in Hana's head and the oppressiveness of her thoughts worked well, when you have the focus split between three or four characters, it begins to feel like free indirect discourse. Which is interesting to watch in a TV show, I suppose, but it also makes me wonder if this wouldn't be a better experience if I was reading it rather than passively watching it. The scenes with Mugi and the teacher from this episode in particular feel like I'm "watching a book", for lack of a better way to describe it.
I've got a few points to make in response to your comments above, but for the sake of clarity I'm just going to roughly summarise what I believe your main point to be. You're saying that the series features a lot of internal monologues, these monologues aren't being depicted in a visually interesting manner and therefore you're questioning why experiencing this story through the medium of anime as composed to some other format. My thoughts on your points are as follows:
- I think the earlier episodes, especially the 1st episode, were better directed and as a result of this better direction all these aforementioned internal monologues were more interesting. There was not only more going on visually, but aurally as well, to suture the audience into these characters and give us the same experiences they were having. I think that's the show is at its best when you're uncomfortably close to these people.
- There are lots of other visual techniques I feel like the series could be using to tackle this material such as: symbolic imagery, colour/lighting choices, expressionistic mise-en-scene, extremely subjective cinematography, fanciful visions imaged inside the minds of characters – the possibilities are endless. But the direction seems to want to remain fairly grounded in the ‘real world' and so instead you have stuff like ”plain text on the screen" as in your above screenshot, which isn't really very interesting. I think that you can only really get away with stuff like that if your name is Hideki Anno.
- Even with the somewhat restrained nature of the direction I still find myself interested in these scenes and therefore there is some merit in having them depicted in this fashion, even if it's clear the show could do more.
I was talking about this earlier in the IRC, but it's kind of odd that the "sex" is reduced to extreme close ups of faces and "graphic" French kissing. Perhaps it comes down them being teenagers and even trying to be more explicitly erotic with them would cross some kind of child pornography line... although I suppose in the context of emotionally empty sex, watching people experience "petite mort" through people crying makes sense. I am somewhat curious to see if the live action version is more explicit, but I'd imagine not (based on nothing more than assumptions about Japanese attitudes toward sex I suppose lol).
I just find the dichotomy interesting, because they seem to lovingly animate tongues penetrating orifices in great detail, but the direction obscures anything else that resembles sex.
I think there's probably a number of factors that go into the show's depiction of sex, but I would have to guess that the key ones are:
- Avoiding any imagery that objectifies the characters through revealing imagery of camerawork. The show never feels like its exploiting the characters, even though we're experiencing very intimate moments with them.
- You probably don't want to get very explicit when you're depicting characters of this age engaging in sexual activity.
- If a scene causes the intended response in a viewer, then is it really necessary to me more explicit anyway? Do you understand what the characters were feeling in that moment and what it meant for them? If so, then arguably the scene has done its job.
- Cultural norms regarding the depiction of sex.