Indeed, this entire book suffers from a poor sense of proportion. Garrow adds nothing to our understanding of Obamas intellectual evolution during his years at Columbia, or the role that the civil rights movement played in shaping his political consciousness and ideals. (Curious, given that Garrow, a professor at the University of Pittsburgh School of Law, won a Pulitzer Prize in 1987 for his book on the Rev. Dr. Martin Luther King Jr., Bearing the Cross.) And yet Garrow prattles on for pages about legislation Obama worked on in the Illinois State Senate, and about discussions in law school classes he attended or taught. The entire first chapter of the book is devoted to examining the social and political landscape of Chicagos South Side in the early 1980s before Obama arrived to work there, but Obamas 2008 campaign and two terms in the White House are compressed into a 50-odd-page epilogue.
Perhaps, as the title Rising Star indicates, this book is meant to focus only on Obamas early years, but in that case, the epilogue with the snarky title of The President Did Not Attend, as He Was Golfing seems even more inexplicable.
Whereas the rest of the book is written in dry, largely uninflected prose, the epilogue which almost reads like a Republican attack ad devolves into a condescending diatribe unworthy of a serious historian. It consists mainly of a string of negative quotations about Obamas presidency and temperament, many plucked out of context from articles and books by journalists and commentators, or extracted from disillusioned former friends or supporters. There is no considered weighing of the record, no real recognition of the achievements of Obamas two terms in office (including his handling of the financial crisis that he inherited and passing Obamacare). Nor is there any useful explication of the policy decisions (like flip-flopping on Syria, and failing to close a deal enabling a sizable number of American forces to remain in Iraq beyond 2011) that have elicited sustained criticism from both government insiders and outside experts.