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Writing-GAF: Writing, Publishing, Selling |OT|

Mike M

Nick N
Yeah, professional editors are great that way. Also what kind of places are you submitting where you're getting response in a couple days? I usually wait months to hear back.
Yeah, this is way out of the ordinary. It was for an anthology.

For anyone curious, I sort Submission Grinder's markets by acceptance ratio and work my way down the list.
 

Gaz_RB

Member
Yeah, this is way out of the ordinary. It was for an anthology.

For anyone curious, I sort Submission Grinder's markets by acceptance ratio and work my way down the list.

Great advice. Keep us updated on your submission escapades.

For anyone doing the mini-challenge, I highly recommend you read these two posts from a published author on the subject. They cover those choppy waters I mentioned earlier concerning the dreaded ADULT filter and how to avoid that and/or your book being banned.

Selena Kitt - Corporate Censorship: Keeping Your Erotic Books Off Retailer Hit Lists

Selena Kitt - Amazon Targets Dark Erotic Romance and BDSM

Basically: "If you dress up pretty on the outside, you can be as much of a whore on the inside as you like.*

(*with a few exceptions…)"
Super useful, thanks. I'm starting my first draft tonight.
 

sirap

Member
Stepbrother kink is so hot right now. Stepbrothers are even better. Billionaire stepbrothers? You've got a winner.
 

mu cephei

Member
For anyone doing the mini-challenge, I highly recommend you read these two posts from a published author on the subject. They cover those choppy waters I mentioned earlier concerning the dreaded ADULT filter and how to avoid that and/or your book being banned.

Selena Kitt - Corporate Censorship: Keeping Your Erotic Books Off Retailer Hit Lists

Selena Kitt - Amazon Targets Dark Erotic Romance and BDSM

Basically: "If you dress up pretty on the outside, you can be as much of a whore on the inside as you like.*

(*with a few exceptions…)"

I'd just like to say thanks, H. Pro, for organising all of this for us. Doing this as a group is much more fun but also feels less silly!

And my weekend, like several others here, is going to be spent immersed in .99 erotica :|

See, now I know of a glaring plot hole!

Oh wow, thanks for sharing this. For a rejection it's really nice (and useful) and not scary and offputting.
 

Jintor

Member
Finding it a real challenge to write in third person right now for some reason, lol

/edit so i got about 300 words down before I got too embarassed and put it away for now, heh. I didn't even get to the sexy times yet...
 
I know I just joined this thread but, lol, anyway, I have my concepts for the shorts done. They're only about a chapter and a half or so of words so I'll probably be able to get them done quickly. I also have another ero piece I've been working on that I'd like to see release around Avengers to see if that will give it a sales boost (it features superheroes) and a full length ero-novel I was planning to release in May, but with this challenge I feel like it'd be better in late June or July. I've been focusing on establishing my brand as "cute and steamy" for awhile now, so we'll see how this helps.

Nice. Looks like you're right on track then. I'm really curious to see if the superhero thing would get a boost from the movie. Great idea.


See, now I know of a glaring plot hole!

For a rejection letter, that's a really positive response! Cyan's right. It's a good sign.


Great advice. Keep us updated on your submission escapades.


Super useful, thanks. I'm starting my first draft tonight.

No prob. As silly and fun as it is to write these things, the selling of seems pretty complicated in all the twisting and pitfalls there are. When we do all finally publish I think it'll be a bit nerve-racking to see who makes it over that first review hurdle. *_* Good luck on your draft. After reading those I think I'm going to have to tweak my own a bit.


Stepbrother kink is so hot right now. Stepbrothers are even better. Billionaire stepbrothers? You've got a winner.

Haha. You're enjoying this, aren't you? :)


I'd just like to say thanks, H. Pro, for organising all of this for us. Doing this as a group is much more fun but also feels less silly!

And my weekend, like several others here, is going to be spent immersed in .99 erotica :|



Oh wow, thanks for sharing this. For a rejection it's really nice (and useful) and not scary and offputting.

My pleasure. It's been a fun little exercise so far, and tackling it in a group is even more hilarious. Just writing something you don't normally write is a great mental workout, so we already have benefits there. Enjoy your weekend of 'boxed wine'! Next week I'll start calling for 1st short themes/categories, so think hard about your story!


Just realized, I have NO idea how I'd be able to make covers for some of these from bought stock photos. :(

Shadows, abstract, and implied, uh, bits...? :D

These covers really are hard, though. I'm struggling to find anything I like. Miiiiight have to give Fiverr a go if this weekend is a bust there.
 

Jintor

Member
just writing 3 shorts i guess really. Don't even have a common theme, just want to feel free to write, which i haven't done for a while.
 

Mr-Joker

Banned
Nice to see that I am not the only one gets ideas to write an incest erotica, though I do fear that one of my family member will take a sneak peak in my note book and I will have some explaining to do. >_> <_< >_>

Anyway after months of messing about I have finally buckled down working on my book, I think I may need to try a different location so I don't get distracted.

Have people generally decided on their "niche" ?

Super Heroes.
 

Soulfire

Member
I've had a lot of luck using Canva.com for covers, a lot of the images are free and those that aren't are $1. I don't have any experience with GIMP or Photoshop but their tools are easy to use.
I write under the pen name Cassandra Logan if anyone wants to see the covers. Three of them I paid a professional for and while they are nice it was wasted money, thankfully not too much. Definitely wouldn't advise paying more than a couple dollars for covers.
I've written and published nine ERROMs so far, sadly I have not had the luck that others have, but I don't think it was because of my covers.
My last trilogy was Billionaires and it pretty much bombed, so far my witches series has been the best, with the lesbian one being the highest seller. I wouldn't advise plain old contemporary, you need some kind of gimmick.
I write under the pen name Cassandra Logan if anyone wants to see the covers. Three of them I paid a professional for and while they are nice it was wasted money, thankfully not too much. Definitely wouldn't advise paying more than a couple dollars for covers.
 
Is everyone pretty much just using Word to write their stuff? I want to make sure if I just start going that I'm not going to have formatting issues later. I figure Word is a safe enough bet, though.
 
Relegated to Community... :/

We've had a number of new people who never knew the thread existed pop in because the thread's been bumping the last few days, but tucked in here I fear that's going to end. Bummer.


Have people generally decided on their "niche" ?

I'm going medieval for my three. All standalones, but in the same vein.

And, using word to write now, but you'll have to reformat for Kindle. I listed some free options in my challenge post.


Nice to see that I am not the only one gets ideas to write an incest erotica, though I do fear that one of my family member will take a sneak peak in my note book and I will have some explaining to do. >_> <_< >_>

Anyway after months of messing about I have finally buckled down working on my book, I think I may need to try a different location so I don't get distracted.


Super Heroes.

Oh, are you joining in too, Joker, or just writing in general?


I've had a lot of luck using Canva.com for covers, a lot of the images are free and those that aren't are $1. I don't have any experience with GIMP or Photoshop but their tools are easy to use.
I write under the pen name Cassandra Logan if anyone wants to see the covers. Three of them I paid a professional for and while they are nice it was wasted money, thankfully not too much. Definitely wouldn't advise paying more than a couple dollars for covers.
I've written and published nine ERROMs so far, sadly I have not had the luck that others have, but I don't think it was because of my covers.
My last trilogy was Billionaires and it pretty much bombed, so far my witches series has been the best, with the lesbian one being the highest seller. I wouldn't advise plain old contemporary, you need some kind of gimmick.
I write under the pen name Cassandra Logan if anyone wants to see the covers. Three of them I paid a professional for and while they are nice it was wasted money, thankfully not too much. Definitely wouldn't advise paying more than a couple dollars for covers.

Looks like a nice resource. Thanks, Soulfire. I'll add it to the next update. Also nice to hear from another author who's tried this. Feel free to share any tips or tricks you've come across. Did you feel like joining the challenge?
 

Delio

Member
Have people generally decided on their "niche" ?

First story is college gay themed. I dont know what the rest will be. College tho might be a bit boring.

Relegated to Community... :/

We've had a number of new people who never knew the thread existed pop in because the thread's been bumping the last few days, but tucked in here I fear that's going to end. Bummer.

Tossed into the dens of Community, great.
 
Go abstract, that's my plan.

Orbit Books' art director, Lauren Panepinto, released a time lapse video demonstrating the creation process for a novel cover using stock/original photography? It's worth watching.

Shadows, abstract, and implied, uh, bits...? :D

These covers really are hard, though. I'm struggling to find anything I like. Miiiiight have to give Fiverr a go if this weekend is a bust there.


I mean in the sense I have no clue how to do one based on the premises. They don't exactly lend themselves to eye-catching covers that scream "SEXY" (or at least 2 of them don't).
 
Working on the blurb for the first short. I'm opening with:


Jake was in a tight spot.


Gauntlets are being thrown down.

I mean in the sense I have no clue how to do one based on the premises. They don't exactly lend themselves to eye-catching covers that scream "SEXY" (or at least 2 of them don't).

If you can't find a great cover image from http://thestocks.im/ then you are not trying.

capture2dyumo.png


Also my new NSFW favourite photo of all time https://www.flickr.com/photos/ajay_g/188099684. If that doesn't sum up life, I don't know what does.
 

Mike M

Nick N
I'm subscribed to the thread like a civilized person, so I don't mind the move to community. It's a shame that it won't get the visibility to entice new people to join, but it really is a community thread...

EDIT: Man, Submission Grinder is a godsend, but it really is temperamental sometimes...
 
I've had a lot of luck using Canva.com for covers, a lot of the images are free and those that aren't are $1. I don't have any experience with GIMP or Photoshop but their tools are easy to use.
I write under the pen name Cassandra Logan if anyone wants to see the covers. Three of them I paid a professional for and while they are nice it was wasted money, thankfully not too much. Definitely wouldn't advise paying more than a couple dollars for covers.
I've written and published nine ERROMs so far, sadly I have not had the luck that others have, but I don't think it was because of my covers.
My last trilogy was Billionaires and it pretty much bombed, so far my witches series has been the best, with the lesbian one being the highest seller. I wouldn't advise plain old contemporary, you need some kind of gimmick.
I write under the pen name Cassandra Logan if anyone wants to see the covers. Three of them I paid a professional for and while they are nice it was wasted money, thankfully not too much. Definitely wouldn't advise paying more than a couple dollars for covers.

That's interesting. Could you share some more information with us? How much you made/sold (if you're willing to share), what your keywords were like, release frequency (lol), stuff like that.

I see you haven't done any bundling, so maybe consider that?
 
I'm subscribed to the thread like a civilized person, so I don't mind the move to community. It's a shame that it won't get the visibility to entice new people to join, but it really is a community thread...

We just need to be creative. We can make a "does anybody else think the writing in bioshock is better than forza 2's graphics?" thread in gaming and migrate across.
 

Gazoinks

Member
We just need to be creative. We can make a "does anybody else think the writing in bioshock is better than forza 2's graphics?" thread in gaming and migrate across.

"When will Tim Shafer start writing in 60fps?"

Anyway, I'm just popping in here to say that, while I'm not participating because I've got other stuff going on, I'm greatly enjoying reading everyone's erotica escapades. :p
 
I don't think you understand just how out there these premises are.

But you're right, I already see a few I can use provided I had the photoshopping skills (which I don't).

Sometimes you can key an image to a book's theme or a motif, rather than its literal premises; though you of course have to make sure not to misrepresent the book.
 
Sometimes you can key an image to a book's theme or a motif, rather than its literal premises; though you of course have to make sure not to misrepresent the book.

Yeah, theme-wise I think I can get most of them figured out without much trouble.

There is one though that I have literally no idea how I'm supposed to represent it. The only thing that MIGHT work would take a far more skilled photoshopper than I'll ever be.
 

Delio

Member
I've had a lot of luck using Canva.com for covers, a lot of the images are free and those that aren't are $1. I don't have any experience with GIMP or Photoshop but their tools are easy to use.
I write under the pen name Cassandra Logan if anyone wants to see the covers. Three of them I paid a professional for and while they are nice it was wasted money, thankfully not too much. Definitely wouldn't advise paying more than a couple dollars for covers.
I've written and published nine ERROMs so far, sadly I have not had the luck that others have, but I don't think it was because of my covers.
My last trilogy was Billionaires and it pretty much bombed, so far my witches series has been the best, with the lesbian one being the highest seller. I wouldn't advise plain old contemporary, you need some kind of gimmick.
I write under the pen name Cassandra Logan if anyone wants to see the covers. Three of them I paid a professional for and while they are nice it was wasted money, thankfully not too much. Definitely wouldn't advise paying more than a couple dollars for covers.

K playing around with this and I love it. Thanks a ton for linking this. (Now to find a good image of two half naked guys )
 
Is everyone pretty much just using Word to write their stuff? I want to make sure if I just start going that I'm not going to have formatting issues later. I figure Word is a safe enough bet, though.
I use Word.

I know when I sent stuff to agents (still dead air on that front), they always ask for word docs, or the ones I sent to did.

If you're looking into self publishing, you can save your Word doc as a .html thing and then upload that into something like Calibre and that works fairly well.

So yeah, I'd go Word :p
 
I write in a text editor (gedit) with syntax highlighting, using markdown(ish) for formatting.

I gave up on Word back in college. Easier to have the computer figure out the indentation at the end.
 
1000 words in. Think I can probably get this to 4k, which should probably be fine at 2.99. I feel there's some actual interest in this fetish, at the very least one that people didn't know they had.
 

Delio

Member
For the moment my only kink seems to be that it's paranormal and gay sex. Other than that nothing extreme ( unless I tie in some BDSM elements). I'm aiming for 4k on the first one for sure.
 

Soulfire

Member
In January, after reading sirap's posts, I decided to try writing short 5k ERROMs to see how quickly I could write them and if I could make money off of them. Mine are about 25%-33% sex and the rest is romance. After researching more (mainly focusing on sales) I got excited and made unrealistic financial projections and decided that spending $150 for 3 covers wasn't a bad deal. In the grand scheme of things it isn't a lot, but I have not yet made that back and have been able to make covers just as nice using canva for $1-$3.
Initially I had a very strict schedule and was able to write the first draft in a week and while writing the next story complete my editing process. I read the story through three to four times and do a pass through using the free version of grammarly. It's not perfect, but it's not horrible so I don't feel bad charging people for what I've published.
Part of my problem, I think, is that I haven't stuck to a release schedule, I'm not following trends, and I have (so far) not found anything helpful regarding keywords.
As soon as I would start a series I would read something new and change my release schedule. I released the first books all at once, the rest I've staggered with no set time frame in between release.
Regarding trends the popular stuff is just not something I feel like I could fake and I'm not interested in putting in the time to learn enough to write something decent.
Currently I'm working on re-editing a longer ERROM (45k) I had published previously. I'm going to republish next week with a new title and under this new pen name. Next month I'll work on the sequel.
I do have a mailing list set up and have since the beginning, but so far I've got only one subscriber. I also have calls to action at the end of every book as well as a list of all my other available works.
After two months of keeping to my writing schedule fairly well and finishing when I wanted to I got burnt out. I don't have a lot of free time so using that writing something I'm not passionate about has been difficult. I took a bit of a break the end of last month and instead of starting a new series just decided to re-edit so that I could work on writing something I'm more interested in, a supernatural cozy mystery. I will need to set that aside soon, though, and work on the sequel to my longer ERROM.

Here's a link to an excel spreadsheet with my sales/keywords

Also, I use Word. I've never had any issues uploading it to Kindle and I've used it so long it's the program I'm most comfortable with. I've got Scrivener downloaded and use it a lot, but mainly with plotting and character sketches.

I hope that's helpful.
 
Depending on how much fun I have doing my own, I could potentially do covers for people. I'm not "world class" at Photoshop but certainly good enough to do what is being done with most of the covers I've seen. I'd need to be compensated at the very least for the stock images themselves. I'm not committing to it just yet, just tossing it out there to see if people are interested in that kind of help.


I use Word.

I know when I sent stuff to agents (still dead air on that front), they always ask for word docs, or the ones I sent to did.

If you're looking into self publishing, you can save your Word doc as a .html thing and then upload that into something like Calibre and that works fairly well.

So yeah, I'd go Word :p

Thanks (and to everyone who responded to that inquiry) -- I'll stick with Word.
 
In January, after reading sirap's posts, I decided to try writing short 5k ERROMs to see how quickly I could write them and if I could make money off of them. Mine are about 25%-33% sex and the rest is romance. After researching more (mainly focusing on sales) I got excited and made unrealistic financial projections and decided that spending $150 for 3 covers wasn't a bad deal. In the grand scheme of things it isn't a lot, but I have not yet made that back and have been able to make covers just as nice using canva for $1-$3.
Initially I had a very strict schedule and was able to write the first draft in a week and while writing the next story complete my editing process. I read the story through three to four times and do a pass through using the free version of grammarly. It's not perfect, but it's not horrible so I don't feel bad charging people for what I've published.
Part of my problem, I think, is that I haven't stuck to a release schedule, I'm not following trends, and I have (so far) not found anything helpful regarding keywords.
As soon as I would start a series I would read something new and change my release schedule. I released the first books all at once, the rest I've staggered with no set time frame in between release.
Regarding trends the popular stuff is just not something I feel like I could fake and I'm not interested in putting in the time to learn enough to write something decent.
Currently I'm working on re-editing a longer ERROM (45k) I had published previously. I'm going to republish next week with a new title and under this new pen name. Next month I'll work on the sequel.
I do have a mailing list set up and have since the beginning, but so far I've got only one subscriber. I also have calls to action at the end of every book as well as a list of all my other available works.
After two months of keeping to my writing schedule fairly well and finishing when I wanted to I got burnt out. I don't have a lot of free time so using that writing something I'm not passionate about has been difficult. I took a bit of a break the end of last month and instead of starting a new series just decided to re-edit so that I could work on writing something I'm more interested in, a supernatural cozy mystery. I will need to set that aside soon, though, and work on the sequel to my longer ERROM.

Here's a link to an excel spreadsheet with my sales/keywords

Also, I use Word. I've never had any issues uploading it to Kindle and I've used it so long it's the program I'm most comfortable with. I've got Scrivener downloaded and use it a lot, but mainly with plotting and character sketches.

I hope that's helpful.

All great info. Thanks for sharing.

I think the keywords might be a potential issue. These are the examples used in the book sirap mentioned.

Book 1

kindle unlimited romance, contemporary urban, cuckold erotica, taboo older man, cuckold housewife,
wife sharing cuckold erotica, cheating spouse ,watching wife have sex with another man erotica

Book 2
alpha erotica kindle unlimited, romance action urban comedy, taboo sex story, older man erotica, male
dominant, dirty sex erotic, submissive women, man of the house

Not a single word in any of them. I don't know though, I don't think yours are awful, just don't have as much variety.

I would say re-release some as a bundle with different keywords that utilize more than one word in each. They'll be easier to find when they're new due to Amazon's algorithm, so it would be like getting another shot at it.

Depending on how much fun I have doing my own, I could potentially do covers for people. I'm not "world class" at Photoshop but certainly good enough to do what is being done with most of the covers I've seen. I'd need to be compensated at the very least for the stock images themselves. I'm not committing to it just yet, just tossing it out there to see if people are interested in that kind of help.

I would absolutely be interested. Would have no problem PMing you the story title/premise/pen-name when I get to that point.
 

besada

Banned
So, regarding erotic fiction. Can someone point me to a (hopefully) free example of the form? I have to admit never having read any, other than classics like Henry Miller/Anais Nin, which I presume isn't exactly what we're talking about here.
 
Yo, why was this moved into community?

I blame Victorian dinosaur smut.

We generally move community-style threads when they've been around at least a month and have hit 1000 posts.

The old writing thread stayed for years in OT...

It was the Victorian dinosaur erotica, wasn't it? ;_;


ITONS OF HELPFUL STUFF

Dang. Thanks for all the info, Soul. Seems you've run the gamut. Your experience is really helpful here, and much appreciation for sharing all the details. That canva.com site is also super useful. I've been toying with potential covers for the last few hours... -_-


. . . my story is about a guy helping his lady friend save her artisan hotdog restaurant.

How did this happen

Dare I ask the title?


So, regarding erotic fiction. Can someone point me to a (hopefully) free example of the form? I have to admit never having read any, other than classics like Henry Miller/Anais Nin, which I presume isn't exactly what we're talking about here.

You have a Kindle right, besada? If so, do the free trial for Kindle Unlimited and there are tons (obscene numbers) of free options there for you to check out. For this kind of challenge you'll want to hit tried and true notes with a focus on PWP. Classy would probably finish last, I'm afraid.


How does "Louise Fetchly" sound for a pen-name?

Memorable! Which is a good thing.


I'm subbed so had no idea we'd been moved until you all mentioned it.

Thanks to H.Pro for keeping everyone moving on the erotica challenge.

Monday is the day everyone ponies up their genre/theme for the first short. Get crackin'. ^_^
 
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