CJ's Garfield room is hilarious.
I think future episodes would benefit from tighter editing. there's a lot of time devoted to characters randomly walking around or fighting battles - a bit boring to watch. if you were to show this gameplay but talk over it, I think the show would be a lot better. also, you introduce each game with a graphic and a bunch of text and give the viewer 10 - 15 seconds to read that. why not integrate this information into your voiceover to make for a more seamless and better-paced experience? finally, there is often a disconnect between what you're discussing and what is occuring in the game. if a character in the english version gives male party members a discount because they're "smart," you should show that while you are doing the voiceover. anyway, I think the core content is good. obviously a lot of research and time has gone into this. hopefully, you can keep some of my suggestions in mind as you move forward and can implement them without too much sweat.