JJDinomite
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Creepypasta: The Thread
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the mother duh
Compsiox
Banned
That was pretty odd.
MisterGrey3000
Member
Hehehe
No kiddin'?
I liked that pasta.
It really captured the odd, and eerie feeling of stumbling into the darker parts of the internet.
Compsiox
Banned
Hehehe
No kiddin'?
I liked that pasta.
It really captured the odd, and eerie feeling of stumbling into the darker parts of the internet.
That is so true!
I really enjoyed the NES Godzilla creepypasta, it was good but I also played that game a lot as a kid so it was nostalgic in a creepy way.
spawnsniper
Member
Are these creepy pasta stories real?
Compsiox
Banned
As stated by the party pooper above. They are not real.
/r/nosleep has some that may be real but no way to prove it.
"THIS IS THE STORY OF A DAY WHERE THERE WAS ALL THIS BLOOD. A MAN WAS WALKING AROUND AND BLOOD STARTED COMING OUT OF HIM EVERYWHERE. THERE WAS SO MUCH BLOOD THAT IT FILLED UP AN ELEVATOR. HE WENT TO THE STORE AND THERE WAS JUST BLOOD ALL OVER THE PLACE! PEOPLE WERE SLIPPING IN IT AND THEY WERE ALL GROSSED OUT. HE TRIED TO GO SWIMMING AND ALL OF THE SHARKS WENT NUTS AND BITTENED EVERYBODY. HE GOT CHASED BY ALL THE VAMPIRES EVER. ONE TIME THE BLOOD GOT A KID AND A DOG. AT THE END OF THE DAY EVERYONE DECIDED THEY WOULD SEND HIM TO SPACE SO THAT HE WOULD STOP GETTING BLOOD EVERY WHERE. THE SCARIEST PART IS THAT THE MAN WAS YOU!!! (OR HE WAS A LADY IF YOU ARE A LADY) AND YOU FORGOT THAT THIS HAPPENED"
BrightEyedPanic
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That story from Reddit's NoSleep "Holes" was pretty good.
Collete
Member
I stopped at part two...I can't tell if it's staged or not but that was really terrifying...
Compsiox
Banned
amaze
I... didn't get it that much.
Surface of Me
I'm not an NPC. And neither are we.
friggin skinwalkers, one of my favorite things the internet has latched onto
This is terrifying. Especially with the picture on the bottom
There's no twist. It's just a wonderfully creepy story with great writing.
Khalifa Jayy
Banned
Subbing. Never really been into creepypasta, but some of these are starting to pique my interest. That, and I have been meaning to read more. Why not start here?
So no one commented since the 22/10 update on part 4 ? Damn, someone needs to revive this !
nah, they're saying they can't post comments under part 5 in posts that are 3 months oldOr the comments were deleted like in Part 5
Proving The Watcher can prevent posts? Maybe he/she decided to shut the comments down in Part 4 and toy with people a bit more.
Why am I actually playing along with this?
Higgins113
Banned
Scary as fuck.
I love "Squidward's Suicide" http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Squidward's_Suicide
TheJollyCorner
Member
There's a lot about "Penpal" to like... however the part I have the biggest problem with is the main character's Kindergarten age adventures; i.e. building functional rafts, making detailed area maps, etc, at the age of 5 or 6 just killed the immersion for me. If he would have aged himself (and his buddy Josh) at 9 or 10 those elements of the stories would have been a lot more believable to me. You still nail home the nostalgia and joys of being a young boy, but at 9, 10, 11 it's much easier to accept a couple of buddies getting into those kinds of adventures
Kindergarteners and 1st graders are very young.
The actual creepy parts are really good, though. I've only made it about half-way through MAPS.
This is one of the best.
I don't really get the "Expressionless" story. The image is creepy as fuck, but the twist is lame and cheesy. The Russian Sleep Experiment falls into those same holes, but manages to be much better in its delivery.
TheJollyCorner
Member
'The Expressionless' is kind of over-the-top for me.
"I....am.... God", followed by eating the security people. It's like the person who wrote it just completely gave up any slow burn and decided "Alright, fuck it, time to get crazy!"
"I....am.... God", followed by eating the security people. It's like the person who wrote it just completely gave up any slow burn and decided "Alright, fuck it, time to get crazy!"
MagnaderAlpha
Member
Slimebeast's stuff is usually top notch!
The Showers is also another great creepy one, as is Broadcast Interruption. Vicious516 has some interesting original creepypasta on his Youtube channel that I like(especially "February 10th 2010"). Others I like are the No End House, Puppetmaster's Regime, and usual stuff like Russian Sleep Experiment, Candle Cove, Abandoned by Disney, 1999, Barbie.avi and the Huntsville Camping Trip. and even The Dionaea House(which was written by the guy who wrote the NOES reboot and The Thing prequel, but as an original story that is straight up creepypasta, it's not bad).
The Showers is also another great creepy one, as is Broadcast Interruption. Vicious516 has some interesting original creepypasta on his Youtube channel that I like(especially "February 10th 2010"). Others I like are the No End House, Puppetmaster's Regime, and usual stuff like Russian Sleep Experiment, Candle Cove, Abandoned by Disney, 1999, Barbie.avi and the Huntsville Camping Trip. and even The Dionaea House(which was written by the guy who wrote the NOES reboot and The Thing prequel, but as an original story that is straight up creepypasta, it's not bad).
The Tails Doll creepypasta's also pretty bad. Though, I find the most famous creepypasta that is actually one of the most shitty stories I've ever read, it has to be Jeff the Killer. If you just seen the picture and knew nothing about him, that's all you really need. Once you read that godawful story, it's just hard to take the character seriously.『Inaba Resident』;138081799 said:
Indrid Cold1
Member
The Portraits, anyone?
There was a hunter in the woods, who, after a long day hunting, was in the middle of an immense forest. It was getting dark, and having lost his bearings, he decided to head in one direction until he was clear of the increasingly oppressive foliage. After what seemed like hours, he came across a cabin in a small clearing. Realizing how dark it had grown, he decided to see if he could stay there for the night. He approached, and found the door ajar. Nobody was inside. The hunter flopped down on the single bed, deciding to explain himself to the owner in the morning.
As he looked around the inside of the cabin, he was surprised to see the walls adorned by several portraits, all painted in incredible detail. Without exception, they appeared to be staring down at him, their features twisted into looks of hatred and malice. Staring back, he grew increasingly uncomfortable. Making a concerted effort to ignore the many hateful faces, he turned to face the wall, and exhausted, he fell into a restless sleep.
The next morning, the hunter awokehe turned, blinking in unexpected sunlight. Looking up, he discovered that the cabin had no portraits, only windows.
There was a hunter in the woods, who, after a long day hunting, was in the middle of an immense forest. It was getting dark, and having lost his bearings, he decided to head in one direction until he was clear of the increasingly oppressive foliage. After what seemed like hours, he came across a cabin in a small clearing. Realizing how dark it had grown, he decided to see if he could stay there for the night. He approached, and found the door ajar. Nobody was inside. The hunter flopped down on the single bed, deciding to explain himself to the owner in the morning.
As he looked around the inside of the cabin, he was surprised to see the walls adorned by several portraits, all painted in incredible detail. Without exception, they appeared to be staring down at him, their features twisted into looks of hatred and malice. Staring back, he grew increasingly uncomfortable. Making a concerted effort to ignore the many hateful faces, he turned to face the wall, and exhausted, he fell into a restless sleep.
The next morning, the hunter awokehe turned, blinking in unexpected sunlight. Looking up, he discovered that the cabin had no portraits, only windows.
Compsiox
Banned
'The Expressionless' is kind of over-the-top for me.
"I....am.... God", followed by eating the security people. It's like the person who wrote it just completely gave up any slow burn and decided "Alright, fuck it, time to get crazy!"
I can see what you mean. Still crazy to think about lol.
Despite the constant barrage of bad videogame-related creepypasta, I've always liked Killswitch. It's not the best written nor particularly clever, but at least it's not a "BELOVED GAME HACKED WITH DEMONIC EYES AND HYPER REALISTIC BLOOD AND HYPER REALISTIC EVIL" type of pasta.
Khalifa Jayy
Banned
Meh. It was a solid 6/10.
depths20XX
Member
I also wonder if Clams Casino - I'm God came out before they made that story. The expressionless masks are similar, and of course the name of the song.
JJDinomite
Banned
'The Expressionless' is kind of over-the-top for me.
"I....am.... God", followed by eating the security people. It's like the person who wrote it just completely gave up any slow burn and decided "Alright, fuck it, time to get crazy!"
Yeah, that's an issue that a lot of creepy pastas have. They'll start off with an idea that is very interesting, but perhaps too far-out to have a realistic conclusion. I think a lot of people start writing the stories without an end in mind, and simply wing it. In reality, the best stories have a well-planned ending, or a solid twist.
Robot Carnival
Member
This is terrifying
This one is freaking me out just because it seems so real:
http://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comments/2lvxlw/wtf_is_going_on_in_pinal_county_arizona/
http://www.reddit.com/r/nosleep/comments/2lvxlw/wtf_is_going_on_in_pinal_county_arizona/
JJDinomite
Banned
There is a video on YouTube named Mereana Mordegard Glesgorv. If you search this, you will find nothing. The few times you find something, all you will see is a 20 second video of a man staring intently at you, expressionless, then grinning for the last 2 seconds. The background is undefined.
This is only part of the actual video.
The full video lasts 2 minutes, and was removed by YouTube after 153 people who viewed the video gouged out their eyes and mailed them to YouTubes main office in San Bruno. Said people had also committed suicide in various ways. It is not yet known how they managed to mail their eyes after gouging them out. The cryptic inscription they carve on their forearms has not yet been deciphered.
YouTube will periodically put up the first 20 seconds of the video to quell suspicions, so that people will not go look for the real thing and upload it. The video itself was only viewed by one YouTube staff member, who started screaming after 45 seconds. This man is now under constant sedation and is apparently unable to recall what he saw. The other people who were in the same room as him while he viewed it and turned off the video for him say that all they heard at the time was a high pitched drilling sound. None of them dared look at the screen.
The person who uploaded the video was never found, the IP address being non-existant. And the man in the video has never been identified.
This is only part of the actual video.
The full video lasts 2 minutes, and was removed by YouTube after 153 people who viewed the video gouged out their eyes and mailed them to YouTubes main office in San Bruno. Said people had also committed suicide in various ways. It is not yet known how they managed to mail their eyes after gouging them out. The cryptic inscription they carve on their forearms has not yet been deciphered.
YouTube will periodically put up the first 20 seconds of the video to quell suspicions, so that people will not go look for the real thing and upload it. The video itself was only viewed by one YouTube staff member, who started screaming after 45 seconds. This man is now under constant sedation and is apparently unable to recall what he saw. The other people who were in the same room as him while he viewed it and turned off the video for him say that all they heard at the time was a high pitched drilling sound. None of them dared look at the screen.
The person who uploaded the video was never found, the IP address being non-existant. And the man in the video has never been identified.
Barajas_201
Member
OMG I just finished reading Ted's Cave but I'm at page 10 and I keep pressing the NEXT but it keeps going to page 10. Did Ted die? I need closure! also what's up with the pop ups on the website? Firefox kept telling me it block pop ups and I didn't allow them so I don't know what that is about...
Admiral Woofington
Member
A Fresh Start
Somewhere in West Philadelphia, you will find an old basketball court with a single ball lying in the middle. Pick it up and start shooting hoops. After a while, a small group of hooligans will approach you and challenge you to a fight, which you must accept.
After the fight, you must go home and relay the events to your mother. She will then inform you that you have an aunt and uncle living in one of the districts of Los Angeles, and out of fear, she will send you to live there for an indefinite period of time.
With your bags packed, go to the street corner, and whistle for a cab. The cab that will pull up will bear the word FRESH on the license plate, and upon closer inspection, novelty fuzzy dice will hang in the mirror. Although you will suddenly realize that cabs like these are extremely hard to find, do not bear any thought to it. At this point you MUST point out in front of the car and say Yo homes to Bel Air. You will stop in front of a mansion, and it will be sometime between 7 and 8 oclock, even though it will feel like you've been traveling mere seconds. Get your luggage out and say Yo homes, smell ya later!, but do NOT turn back to face the cabby. Walk up to the door, look over your shoulder once, and then knock on the door three times.
If you follow these instructions, your life will get flip-turned upside-down.
#2spooky4me
These used to scare the ever living shit out of me. But I tried reading some of the ones you mentioned, including the cave one, and it didn't do it for me. The cave one was especially a whole lot of nothing and it ends abruptly. Unless my "next" link isn't working correctly.
I want to emphasize now that I am not some badass here to make fun of these stories. I am the loudest at screaming within my group of friends and the Pt demo had me screaming at the top of my lungs at points. If somebody finds a really good story I'd love to read it.
Somewhere in West Philadelphia, you will find an old basketball court with a single ball lying in the middle. Pick it up and start shooting hoops. After a while, a small group of hooligans will approach you and challenge you to a fight, which you must accept.
After the fight, you must go home and relay the events to your mother. She will then inform you that you have an aunt and uncle living in one of the districts of Los Angeles, and out of fear, she will send you to live there for an indefinite period of time.
With your bags packed, go to the street corner, and whistle for a cab. The cab that will pull up will bear the word FRESH on the license plate, and upon closer inspection, novelty fuzzy dice will hang in the mirror. Although you will suddenly realize that cabs like these are extremely hard to find, do not bear any thought to it. At this point you MUST point out in front of the car and say Yo homes to Bel Air. You will stop in front of a mansion, and it will be sometime between 7 and 8 oclock, even though it will feel like you've been traveling mere seconds. Get your luggage out and say Yo homes, smell ya later!, but do NOT turn back to face the cabby. Walk up to the door, look over your shoulder once, and then knock on the door three times.
If you follow these instructions, your life will get flip-turned upside-down.
#2spooky4me
These used to scare the ever living shit out of me. But I tried reading some of the ones you mentioned, including the cave one, and it didn't do it for me. The cave one was especially a whole lot of nothing and it ends abruptly. Unless my "next" link isn't working correctly.
I want to emphasize now that I am not some badass here to make fun of these stories. I am the loudest at screaming within my group of friends and the Pt demo had me screaming at the top of my lungs at points. If somebody finds a really good story I'd love to read it.
My friend read this to me a few months ago. Bit of a predictable ending by this point but I always found it a bit chilling to imagine.
Him
I've been lying down for hours now. It's 5:35 AM and there's not much I can do. You know what the worst part about my situation is? I'm in the same room with my parents. They keep looking at me, and I can't help but look back and try not to cry or scream. Their eyes are focused on me and their mouths are wide open. There's the strong scent of blood and I feel paralyzed with fear.
Here's the thing, the second I make any hint that I'm not asleep anymore, I'm completely fucked. I will die and there's nobody around to save me. I've been trying to think of a way out but the only idea I have is to rush for the door and run outside the front door and scream for help, hoping my neighbors hear me. It's risky, but if I stay here, I'll surely die. He's waiting for me to wake up and see his masterpiece.
You're probably wondering what's going on, I get ahead of myself sometimes.
About three hours ago, I heard screaming from the other side of the house, I got up and went to check on the noise before realizing I had to use the restroom, instead of doing the smart thing and investigating, I used the bathroom first. I could've gotten myself killed right then from my stupid actions. But I actually did my business and took a peek outside the bathroom. There was blood on the carpet. I got very worried and ran back to my room, hiding under my sheets like the pussy I was. I tried to convince myself to go back to sleep, that it was just some really vivid dream or something.
But I heard the bathroom door open. Like the terrified child I was, I peeked from under my blankets to see what was going on. I could see something dragging my dead parents into the room. It was not human, I can tell you that. It was hairless, with no eyes and no clothing, it walked like a caveman, with its back slouched as it dragged my parents. But this thing was much smarter than any caveman. It was aware of what it was doing.
It propped my dad up on the edge of my bed, and made him face me. It then sat my mother down in the chair and positioned her towards me as well. It then started rubbing its hands upon the wall, staining them with blood and then drew a circle with the devil's pentagram on it. This thing had made what it probably would call a masterpiece. To finish it off, it scribbled a message onto the wall that I could not read in the darkness.
It then positioned itself under my bed, waiting to strike.
The scariest thing now, my eyes have adjusted to the darkness since then and I can read the message on the wall. I don't want to look at it, because it's terrifying to think about. But I feel I need to see, before I'm killed.
I peek at the creature's masterpiece.
"I know you're awake."
Him
I've been lying down for hours now. It's 5:35 AM and there's not much I can do. You know what the worst part about my situation is? I'm in the same room with my parents. They keep looking at me, and I can't help but look back and try not to cry or scream. Their eyes are focused on me and their mouths are wide open. There's the strong scent of blood and I feel paralyzed with fear.
Here's the thing, the second I make any hint that I'm not asleep anymore, I'm completely fucked. I will die and there's nobody around to save me. I've been trying to think of a way out but the only idea I have is to rush for the door and run outside the front door and scream for help, hoping my neighbors hear me. It's risky, but if I stay here, I'll surely die. He's waiting for me to wake up and see his masterpiece.
You're probably wondering what's going on, I get ahead of myself sometimes.
About three hours ago, I heard screaming from the other side of the house, I got up and went to check on the noise before realizing I had to use the restroom, instead of doing the smart thing and investigating, I used the bathroom first. I could've gotten myself killed right then from my stupid actions. But I actually did my business and took a peek outside the bathroom. There was blood on the carpet. I got very worried and ran back to my room, hiding under my sheets like the pussy I was. I tried to convince myself to go back to sleep, that it was just some really vivid dream or something.
But I heard the bathroom door open. Like the terrified child I was, I peeked from under my blankets to see what was going on. I could see something dragging my dead parents into the room. It was not human, I can tell you that. It was hairless, with no eyes and no clothing, it walked like a caveman, with its back slouched as it dragged my parents. But this thing was much smarter than any caveman. It was aware of what it was doing.
It propped my dad up on the edge of my bed, and made him face me. It then sat my mother down in the chair and positioned her towards me as well. It then started rubbing its hands upon the wall, staining them with blood and then drew a circle with the devil's pentagram on it. This thing had made what it probably would call a masterpiece. To finish it off, it scribbled a message onto the wall that I could not read in the darkness.
It then positioned itself under my bed, waiting to strike.
The scariest thing now, my eyes have adjusted to the darkness since then and I can read the message on the wall. I don't want to look at it, because it's terrifying to think about. But I feel I need to see, before I'm killed.
I peek at the creature's masterpiece.
"I know you're awake."
SHAFT MASTER
Banned
OMG. Spoilers bro.
Admiral Woofington
Member
Been reading some r/nosleep stories. Not bad.
FlowersisBritish
fleurs n'est pas britannique
1999 is really good. The only downside is that it's kinda ongoing and updates almost never. Good news though! Just got an update!
Well it was pretty good. next time you see him, give him a slap on the bum for me.
Well it was pretty good. next time you see him, give him a slap on the bum for me.
depths20XX
Member
This one kinda loses all creepiness by the fact that it reads like a dude posting it to reddit while it's actually happening.
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