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Doctor Who Series 2011 |OT| Wibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey Stuff

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isny

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brucewaynegretzky said:
Umm I don't think it's been removed. We saw River fixing everything he did in a really recent episode didn't we?

She says she knows how to pilot it. He's also has been doing it himself lately. Him sending out those letters and making it to the specific time in 1969 showed that. (Yes he had trouble back in episode one of series five, but since then he's worked it out, probably thanks to the time with River)
 

stupei

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"Remember what I told you when you were seven" and "something old, something new, something borrowed, something blue" are light years beyond Bad Wolf's made up totally out of nowhere meaning or everyone wishing the Doctor's power back into existence by all loving hard enough all at once. Journey's End is a little bit closer, but everything good in its resolution is ret-conned out of existence along with a character's entire arc. When I watch RTD's arcs, it feels much more like I see the hand of the writer moving things into interesting predicaments that he doesn't quite know how to solve without scattering all his previous work to the wind. But when I watch Moffat's, it feels like the world he's evolving has so many rules and concepts already in place that the story's direction is almost inevitable. It feels much more organic.

DrForester said:
That's because Eccleston had the best scene in all of new Who (yes I'm posting it again)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eYy5a7lzFjY#t=3m

His farewell also shit all over Tennants.

All that being said, you're definitely right, that scene is incredible.
 

Tremas

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Ok, i've watched Day of the Moon twice now. On the first viewing, I found it fairly difficult to digest. I didn't think it was a bad episode, but the pace was so frenetic and so many ideas were being thrown around, that I literally had to pause iplayer on several occasions to process in my head what i'd just seen. I felt as though I was spending the majority of the episode waiting for scenes near the beginning to be answered and not paying much attention throughout the rest of the episode until they were resolved. I suspect this probably has more to do with me being dim and struggling to grapple with the extreme non linear timey wimeyness of it all (in my defence, I was drunk and exhausted).

I found it significantly better on my second viewing though, seeing how all the pieces cleverly fit together. I imagine it will be one of those episodes i'll revisit a number of times for its importance in the story arc.
 

DrForester

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Think my biggest problem was them not resolving the Doctor being killed.

We know they're not going to kill the doctor, It may work as a 1 or 2 part episode, but as a long term plot device it's totally useless because no one buys it, we know it's not going to happen.

And it's still stupid that the Doctor doesn't realize they met a Future him and that's who sent that card. I have to think if he knew, he'd drop the subject.
 

isny

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Couple things as well I keep forgetting to mention.

First off, I'm missing commentaries. RTD was great to the "faithful viewer" and had a commentary for every episode I do believe, at least all the ones from the later seasons. (These could be downloaded by anyone from any region from the BBC website and were often different than the ones on the DVD's)

Secondly, the girl/astronaut is Impossible...the Impossible Astronaut. She's a Timelord?!? But that's impossible!?! (Yes this could also mean it's impossible that it's The Rani, River, etc., but a Timelord does seem more of a wow factor, especially if the doctor kills himself)
 

isny

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BackwardsSuggestions said:
So the Doctor played a hologram of the Silent that Amy took a photo of with her phone, right? Wish they'd shown her finding that after forgetting about it.

It's what's known in Smallville as "offscreenville". =D
 

maharg

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isny said:
The doctor not being able to pilot the TARDIS correctly has been such a big theme throughout the series. Removing that really took away a lot from the series, as now all we get is the doctor taking us where he wants to go. (Which always ends up in trouble and running down corridors, as opposed to, previously, it ended up in trouble due to going to random places and after meeting and getting attached to new characters)

The show, historically, has done it both ways. This way works better for Moffat's more deliberate plotting, imo.
 

jdogmoney

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brucewaynegretzky said:
I know this has been brought up before but this just doesn't make any freaking sense. The Doctor could just pop in and out in his timeline to see her. Just because this is his first should not mean that it's her last.

Bolded for truth.

This concept bugs me, too. I'm okay with a general trend of back-to-front for the Doctor and River, but things happening in perfect reverse order really doesn't make sense. When River was introduced, she implied that she was familiar with multiple incarnations of the Doctor, meaning they've known each other through several regenerations. And maybe it's just me, but I always imagined the Doctor that shows up for their last "date" was a regeneration of a much older Doctor...

Also, this:
Jintor said:
Holy fucking holy fuck what the fuck
 
jdogmoney said:
Bolded for truth.

This concept bugs me, too. I'm okay with a general trend of back-to-front for the Doctor and River, but things happening in perfect reverse order really doesn't make sense. When River was introduced, she implied that she was familiar with multiple incarnations of the Doctor, meaning they've known each other through several regenerations. And maybe it's just me, but I always imagined the Doctor that shows up for their last "date" was a regeneration of a much older Doctor...

Yeah, that certainly seemed like the intention there. Not to mention that if they were truly meeting in reverse order there would be no need for them to sync up via diary whenever they meet. River would just know that the Doctor hasn't experienced any of the things she has yet.
 
isny said:
The doctor not being able to pilot the TARDIS correctly has been such a big theme throughout the series. Removing that really took away a lot from the series, as now all we get is the doctor taking us where he wants to go. (Which always ends up in trouble and running down corridors, as opposed to, previously, it ended up in trouble due to going to random places and after meeting and getting attached to new characters)

As a novice Who fan, I kind of agree. I kind of wish they'd get over this everything is connected stuff. I like old Who stuff a lot because you never knew where you were going to go. It could be the distant future or 1795. And there was never ZOMG everything is connected kind of stuff.
 

DrForester

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Speaking of the diary synch. Was this the first time we saw the Doctor keeping one? Or was him keeping one seen before? It's an awesome idea.
 
GillianSeed79 said:
As a novice Who fan, I kind of agree. I kind of wish they'd get over this everything is connected stuff. I like old Who stuff a lot because you never knew where you were going to go. It could be the distant future or 1795. And there was never ZOMG everything is connected kind of stuff.

Yeah, this is a big issue I have.

Just look at Season 1. You have cavemen fighting over fire, space fascists on a planet devastated by war, a bottle story with everyone freaking out, an epic journey across ancient China, an adventure across a hugely diverse planet (say what you will, but Marinus is probably the most well imagined and diverse alien world the show has ever created), political scheming Aztecs, a legal drama with a race so alien they don't even understand the concept of secrets, and you wrap it all up with the Reign of Terror.

That's what Doctor Who can be at its best. You never know exactly what you're getting into, and every story is completely different.
 

WanderingWind

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DrForester said:
Think my biggest problem was them not resolving the Doctor being killed.

We know they're not going to kill the doctor, It may work as a 1 or 2 part episode, but as a long term plot device it's totally useless because no one buys it, we know it's not going to happen.

Not to nitpick an absolutely fantastic show too much, but this is another pet peeve (unnecessary pregnancies are another, in case you couldn't tell) of mine. It never works. We know you're not going to kill a character that has been around for 40 years in the middle of a resurgence of popularity for the show. It's not shocking, clever or interesting.

Bah. Not to whine or anything, again. I've rewatching the entire show for the third time and I've only been a fan for what, 6-7 months? It's fantastic. But there are some malaise induced cliches beginning to creep in.

EDIT: As above, the 2nd episode of the Eccleston series 1. Perfect example.
 

ramyeon

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Loved these first 2 episodes; definitely an interesting way to start the series but it means that I'm not looking forward to the next few episodes as much... there was such a buildup that the preview for next week seems like such a let down. DW usually doesn't disappoint though so I'll probably like next week's show regardless.
 
DrForester said:
Speaking of the diary synch. Was this the first time we saw the Doctor keeping one? Or was him keeping one seen before? It's an awesome idea.

The Doctor has had a journal for a long long time.
 
I had some issues with the pacing of both episodes - especially the abrupt beginning of this one. Overall, though, i loved it and like The Impossible Astronaut it will no doubt get better on repeat viewings. The production values are simply stunning now and, thankfully, it's backed up by engaging plotting and consistently funny dialogue. I'm looking forward to seeing how Moffat tackles some of the threads he's left up in the air.

I'm thrilled by Amy/Rory's dynamic as a couple and i found their scenes towards the end kind of heartwarming. I'm glad they have all but cemented that Amy only sees The Doctor as her best friend now.

River backflipping off the building into the Tardis' pool was a giant LOL WTF?! moment. It was hilariously silly, but not the infantile RTD-patented kind of silly.

Holy shit, KuwabaraTheMan, your posts are boggling my mind. Literally every single sentence you wrote has something i disagree with. I don't even know how to reply to that.

RTD wrote a much a more mature version of Doctor Who? WHAT?!! Okay... i guess maybe i can understand how farting aliens or The Master dancing to pop music could be considered mature...
 

WanderingWind

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Spotless Mind said:
RTD wrote a much a more mature version of Doctor Who? WHAT?!! Okay... i guess maybe i can understand how farting aliens or The Master dancing to pop music could be considered mature...

Moaning Myrtle. Pavement blowjobs.
 

Jintor

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DrForester said:
Think my biggest problem was them not resolving the Doctor being killed.

We know they're not going to kill the doctor, It may work as a 1 or 2 part episode, but as a long term plot device it's totally useless because no one buys it, we know it's not going to happen.

And it's still stupid that the Doctor doesn't realize they met a Future him and that's who sent that card. I have to think if he knew, he'd drop the subject.

It's clearly a long-term arc, and it works in the same way that 'entire universe is going to be destroyed' works - you know it's not going to happen, but you watch because you want to see the trick resolved.

Personally I think he does realise.
 
Spotless Mind said:
Holy shit, KuwabaraTheMan, your posts are boggling my mind. Literally every single sentence you wrote has something i disagree with. I don't even know how to reply to that.

RTD wrote a much a more mature version of Doctor Who? WHAT?!! Okay... i guess maybe i can understand how farting aliens or The Master dancing to pop music could be considered mature...

Blame the farting aliens on Keith Boak. There's a reason he hasn't been asked to direct the show again since then.

I also find it interesting how everyone remembers "farting aliens" and not how those same aliens were killing people, wearing there skin, and trying to cause a nuclear war in order to sell a scorched Earth to the highest bidder. That's way darker than anything Moffat has written.

I think I outlined many of the reasons I think RTD's vision of Who (as well as that of Hinchcliffe/Holmes and many of the other people in charge of the show in the past) were a lot more mature than Moffat's in my original post.
 

Blader

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KuwabaraTheMan said:
Blame the farting aliens on Keith Boak. There's a reason he hasn't been asked to direct the show again since then.

I also find it interesting how everyone remembers "farting aliens" and not how those same aliens were killing people, wearing there skin, and trying to cause a nuclear war in order to sell a scorched Earth to the highest bidder. That's way darker than anything Moffat has written.


I think I outlined many of the reasons I think RTD's vision of Who (as well as that of Hinchcliffe/Holmes and many of the other people in charge of the show in the past) were a lot more mature than Moffat's in my original post.

It sounds dark on paper, but the lame execution undermines any kind of intended seriousness.
 
Blader5489 said:
It sounds dark on paper, but the lame execution undermines any kind of intended seriousness.

It certainly suffers from poor execution, much of which is on the hands of the directing. I think that story could have been really brilliant in the hands of a competent director. As it is, I find the story so-so, but it's through no fault of RTD.
 

stupei

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jdogmoney said:
Bolded for truth.

This concept bugs me, too. I'm okay with a general trend of back-to-front for the Doctor and River, but things happening in perfect reverse order really doesn't make sense. When River was introduced, she implied that she was familiar with multiple incarnations of the Doctor, meaning they've known each other through several regenerations. And maybe it's just me, but I always imagined the Doctor that shows up for their last "date" was a regeneration of a much older Doctor...

Also, this:

This bothered me a lot on first viewing but after watching it a second time I notice that the way River phrases it is "his firsts are my last" (or something like that), which fits with her first appearance on the show in the library being her last meeting with the Doctor. So maybe not everything lines up but the key moments (the firsts) are some of those fixed points in time that the Doctor's talked about before that can't be altered. If her big bad secret (whatever it is) has something to do with the Doctor and their fates are so intwined in such a very important way, it might make sense for parts of their histories together to be set in stone.
 

isny

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KuwabaraTheMan said:
It certainly suffers from poor execution, much of which is on the hands of the directing. I think that story could have been really brilliant in the hands of a competent director. As it is, I find the story so-so, but it's through no fault of RTD.

They were good enough to bring back in the SJA. I don't remember the SJA episode clearly, but it was much better than the usual SJA filler episodes.
 
Moaning Myrtle. Pavement blowjobs.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! I had successfully repressed that from my memory! :(

Blader5489 said:
It sounds dark on paper, but the lame execution undermines any kind of intended seriousness.
Exactly. The underlying social commentary to some of his episodes is undone by the juvenile dialogue, over the top and bombastic execution and general air of silliness. I honestly don't understand how someone could call Moffat's seasons "all flash and no substance" in comparison to the RTD era. More often than not, RTD's episodes were the very definition of that. Moffat's writing at least has some semblance of foreshadowing and continuity.
 

Regulus Tera

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jdogmoney said:
Bolded for truth.

This concept bugs me, too. I'm okay with a general trend of back-to-front for the Doctor and River, but things happening in perfect reverse order really doesn't make sense. When River was introduced, she implied that she was familiar with multiple incarnations of the Doctor, meaning they've known each other through several regenerations. And maybe it's just me, but I always imagined the Doctor that shows up for their last "date" was a regeneration of a much older Doctor...

All she ever said was that she knew all of his faces. He could have just shown her pictures of all his regenerations.
 
So Netflix finally got Voyage of the Damned.

I watched it.

I don't want to go back to the RTD era. It just doesn't age well.

That said, this might be one of the worst promotional pictures I've ever seen.

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Regulus Tera

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WanderingWind said:
Moaning Myrtle. Pavement blowjobs.

This is going to sound stupid but I thought the general idea of that episode -the Doctor's fans grouping together but ultimately finding their demise through the corruption of their obsession by a really socially amoral fan- was absolutely gorgeous. It's just in the small details that he really fumbled it and made it seem like an attack towards fandom, tainting them all as losers whose only method of sexual gratification is through inanimate objects.

Now I'll shut up. I liked that episode, strangely enough.
 
Regulus Tera said:
This is going to sound stupid but I thought the general idea of that episode -the Doctor's fans grouping together but ultimately finding their demise through the corruption of their obsession by a really socially amoral fan- was absolutely gorgeous. It's just in the small details that he really fumbled it and made it seem like an attack towards fandom, tainting them all as losers whose only method of sexual gratification is through inanimate objects.

Now I'll shut up. I liked that episode, strangely enough.

The CONCEPT is fine. EVERYTHING ELSE about that episode is an abomination that I wish I could erase from my memory. The second fingers hit the keys to get that script down things began a downward spiral that never ended.
 

maharg

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KuwabaraTheMan said:
It certainly suffers from poor execution, much of which is on the hands of the directing. I think that story could have been really brilliant in the hands of a competent director. As it is, I find the story so-so, but it's through no fault of RTD.

See, I think this is just a really easy escape to any criticism of RTD's helming of the series. There's nothing at all to indicate that RTD was somehow duped by a poor director into allowing his 'dark, serious concept' to be twisted into a saturday morning cartoon romp with farting aliens.

RTD was the show runner. To a large extent, every failing of the show under his tenure is 'his fault.' Especially given how hands on he's constantly claimed to be by his apologists. You can't have this both ways. Either he single handedly, against all odds, brought Doctor Who back from death with a firm hand on the wheel and an excellent sensibility as a showrunner, he is equally responsible for the utter silliness it devolved into.

It's pretty clear that RTD did not consider Doctor Who to be very serious, or really very dark, from not only his execution as showrunner but also his attitude in interviews for the show's very own Confidential series.

I'd easily argue that Moffat's plots are dark in ways that "omg they kill people" doesn't even come close to matching. Moffat's stories are among the very most memorable of the series because they *genuinely* get under your skin and crawl around. The creepy kid with the gas mask, the Angels, and more recently the Silents all strike at a dark place in people's minds and it shows.

Your posts suggest a focus on incidental and minor characters that I think I just can't relate to. Characters who have only 20 or so minutes of screen time in toto can be interesting, but they can't really have real depth. And even there I find almost all of Moffat's incidental characters far more compelling than any of the ones you listed from other episodes, most of whom I don't remember.

But I do remember the girl/mother in The Empty Child. I remember the Girl in the Fireplace. I remember Sally Sparrow. I instantly caught on to River Song while it still seemed like she was a one-off. I remember Kazran, in both forms.

I'll grant that his incidentals have been less impressive since he took over the showrunner position, but I'd argue that his efforts on that front have been entirely transferred to the companions. And I'd also point out that Moffat has possibly the *richest* set of companions running at the same time as there's been in a very long time. Since long before the old show died. Amy, Rory, and River as supporting have expanded the average cast of the show from maybe like 2.1 (Mickey and Jack's tenures were short and unmemorable) to somewhere around 3.5, and has done it in a way that creates actual relationships between all of them (River and Rory being the most unconnected of the bunch).

No, I think it's just plain ridiculous to accuse Moffat's tenure to date of being less mature than RTD's glam filled tenure. I'd accept an argument that Moffat is targeting a younger age, but I think he gives them far more credit than RTD ever gave his target audience.
 
Regulus Tera said:
This is going to sound stupid but I thought the general idea of that episode -the Doctor's fans grouping together but ultimately finding their demise through the corruption of their obsession by a really socially amoral fan- was absolutely gorgeous. It's just in the small details that he really fumbled it and made it seem like an attack towards fandom, tainting them all as losers whose only method of sexual gratification is through inanimate objects.

Now I'll shut up. I liked that episode, strangely enough.

The episode has a lot of issues (the Absorbaloff being the chief one), but the concept itself is pretty good.

I think it's a great strength of RTD that even when his episodes have problems in execution (Love and Monsters, Boom Town, The Long Game), they still have a lot of substance behind them and tons of great ideas.
 
KuwabaraTheMan said:
The episode has a lot of issues (the Absorbaloff being the chief one), but the concept itself is pretty good.

I think it's a great strength of RTD that even when his episodes have problems in execution (Love and Monsters, Boom Town, The Long Game), they still have a lot of substance behind them and tons of great ideas.

That episode had ONE idea. And it was absolutely destroyed. That's like saying a 2 year old who accidentally says something reasonably intelligent is a genius. No they just happened to say something coherent in between their ramblings.
 

Regulus Tera

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I dislike the implication that the show has to be dark in order to be good. I enjoy the grim stuff, but most of what makes Doctor Who appealing in comparison to the run of the mill American sci-fi is that it takes a light-hearted approach to the concept of travelling across space and time most of the time. It's less focused on the dramatic and more on being just fun.
 
Love and Monsters was simply another case of great premise and botched execution. Something that happened far too often in the first 4 seasons, which i think is entirely the fault of RTD.

KuwabaraTheMan said:
I think it's a great strength of RTD that even when his episodes have problems in execution (Love and Monsters, Boom Town, The Long Game), they still have a lot of substance behind them and tons of great ideas.
The very same could be said of Moffat's less successful episodes, namely The Beast Below, and yet that episode episode was still infinitely more compelling than those 3 you mentioned.

I agree with everything you said maharg.

maharg said:
But I do remember the girl/mother in The Empty Child. I remember the Girl in the Fireplace. I remember Sally Sparrow. I instantly caught on to River Song while it still seemed like she was a one-off. I remember Kazran, in both forms.
I'd add Vincent Van Gogh and The Dream Lord to that list. I also liked Craig and Sophie in The Lodger.
 

Regulus Tera

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Spotless Mind said:
The very same could be said of Moffat's less successful episodes, namely The Beast Below, and yet that episode episode was still infinitely more compelling than those 3 you mentioned.

I would argue that watching Love & Monsters is at least more engaging than The Beast Below. It takes the viewer out of their comfort zone by putting the viewer in the shoes of Elton. Whereas The Beast Below is cut short by the multitude of plot holes (the system is still in place, people will still be devoured by the space whale) and the lack of interesting characterisation beyond the Doctor and Amy.

TBB's nothing more than the duo learning a lesson about friendship to the backdrop of a city in space, whereas L&M creates a small universe and fleshes out the characters living in it. It's just a shame that the fate of those characters had to be so childishly gross.
 
maharg said:
See, I think this is just a really easy escape to any criticism of RTD's helming of the series. There's nothing at all to indicate that RTD was somehow duped by a poor director into allowing his 'dark, serious concept' to be twisted into a saturday morning cartoon romp with farting aliens.

RTD was the show runner. To a large extent, every failing of the show under his tenure is 'his fault.' Especially given how hands on he's constantly claimed to be by his apologists. You can't have this both ways. Either he single handedly, against all odds, brought Doctor Who back from death with a firm hand on the wheel and an excellent sensibility as a showrunner, he is equally responsible for the utter silliness it devolved into.

RTD has to take credit and blame for what happened in his era, but I also think you can't lay every shortcoming in direction on his doorstep. Rose and the Aliens of London were the very first episodes filmed of his era. He mentions in The Writer's Tale how within a day of filming they had managed to get two weeks behind schedule because no one on the staff had worked on a show of that nature before. It was a hugely hectic time, and some bad decisions got made, but they weren't indicative of the era as a whole. I think many of RTD's weakest scripts came in 2005, and it's not really a huge surprise. He wrote 8 of the 13 episodes in that season, and that was in addition to rewriting most of the other ones and overseeing production as a whole.

It's pretty clear that RTD did not consider Doctor Who to be very serious, or really very dark, from not only his execution as showrunner but also his attitude in interviews for the show's very own Confidential series.

I'd hate to see what RTD would consider dark or serious, then, if he really didn't think that Midnight, Turn Left, The Parting of the Ways and Waters of Mars were dark or serious, then.

I'd easily argue that Moffat's plots are dark in ways that "omg they kill people" doesn't even come close to matching. Moffat's stories are among the very most memorable of the series because they *genuinely* get under your skin and crawl around. The creepy kid with the gas mask, the Angels, and more recently the Silents all strike at a dark place in people's minds and it shows.

See, I don't really consider that dark. Moffat does atmosphere extremely well. I don't think that anyone is going to deny that. The Empty Child and Silence in the Library in particular are full of atmosphere and genuinely scary. Silence in the Library is especially strong in that it takes the most basic human fear (being afraid of the dark), and not only contextualizes it, but makes it real even to adult viewers.

But I don't consider that to be dark. Moffat has never really written something that I consider dark. (The Beast Below probably comes the closest in this regard)

Your posts suggest a focus on incidental and minor characters that I think I just can't relate to. Characters who have only 20 or so minutes of screen time in toto can be interesting, but they can't really have real depth. And even there I find almost all of Moffat's incidental characters far more compelling than any of the ones you listed from other episodes, most of whom I don't remember.

But I do remember the girl/mother in The Empty Child. I remember the Girl in the Fireplace. I remember Sally Sparrow. I instantly caught on to River Song while it still seemed like she was a one-off. I remember Kazran, in both forms.

I'll grant that his incidentals have been less impressive since he took over the showrunner position, but I'd argue that his efforts on that front have been entirely transferred to the companions. And I'd also point out that Moffat has possibly the *richest* set of companions running at the same time as there's been in a very long time. Since long before the old show died. Amy, Rory, and River as supporting have expanded the average cast of the show from maybe like 2.1 (Mickey and Jack's tenures were short and unmemorable) to somewhere around 3.5, and has done it in a way that creates actual relationships between all of them (River and Rory being the most unconnected of the bunch).

See, I feel like the focus on incidental characters has always been a strong point of Doctor Who, though. It's a show that changes the cast and setting each week. To truly get the viewer involved, you need to be able to have characters who the viewer comes to care about over a small course of time, because you'll probably never see them again. Most of the great Doctor Who stories have at least one, and often numerous characters who only exist in that story, but manage to come across as fully realized people. I think this was a great strength for Davies (and for Robert Holmes before him), and is a major weakness for Moffat so far.

As far as companions go, I'm a huge Rory fan, and I think he has been extremely well developed. I give Moffat a ton of credit for his character. He's a fully realized person with numerous aspects to his personality. However, I don't feel like Amy is much of a character at all. She makes quips and does that weird thing with her eyes, but if I tried to describe her as a character, I don't think that I could get very far. She feels very flat. River was much better in this two parter, where I felt like we finally got a real window into her, but up until now she hadn't shown much of that. I hope that we get more of this in the future. Compared to the great arcs that Mickey, Martha and Donna went through, Amy comes up way short in my mind.

No, I think it's just plain ridiculous to accuse Moffat's tenure to date of being less mature than RTD's glam filled tenure. I'd accept an argument that Moffat is targeting a younger age, but I think he gives them far more credit than RTD ever gave his target audience.

I just don't see that. RTD did so much with the show, and he made so many statements. He wrote episodes which explored human nature in great detail, but he did so without jamming it over your head (so much that many people don't seem to pick up on it). He wrote extremely clever resolutions to his plot, but he never stood up and had characters spelling it out for viewers. For my money, the resolution to Last of the Time Lords, with the Doctor turning the Master's weapon for controlling humanity into a force that turns positive thoughts into a conduit is far more clever and inventive than anything Moffat has done, but no one in the story actually comments on that. He leaves that stuff completely beneath the surface rather than having characters say "Look at how clever this is".

He gives his viewers a huge amount of credit, because he doesn't feel the need to spell everything out for them. It's all sitting there beneath the surface.

And he could write such variety. The same man who had the last humans traveling back in time to murder their ancestors and showed the UK becoming a police state wrote Gridlock (which is a hugely triumphant story about the power of hope) and a rollicking adventure with a hospital getting teleported to the moon. He wrote a story about the destruction of Earth, and made it a deeply personal story about a small number of people.

I think Moffat is a good writer, but he just doesn't have the depth and imagination that RTD had.

Regulus Tera said:
I dislike the implication that the show has to be dark in order to be good. I enjoy the grim stuff, but most of what makes Doctor Who appealing in comparison to the run of the mill American sci-fi is that it takes a light-hearted approach to the concept of travelling across space and time most of the time. It's less focused on the dramatic and more on being just fun.

I don't think the show has to be dark in order to be good, but Doctor Who has always had a certain darkness to it. It can be grim and lighthearted even within the same episode at times.

The biggest issue I have is that Moffat's stories don't tell me anything beneath the surface. They don't make any statements about society or the human condition, and when Doctor Who stops being About something, I don't feel like it's Doctor Who anymore.
 
Regulus Tera said:
I would argue that watching Love & Monsters is at least more engaging than The Beast Below. It takes the viewer out of their comfort zone by putting the viewer in the shoes of Elton. Whereas The Beast Below is cut short by the multitude of plot holes (the system is still in place, people will still be devoured by the space whale) and the lack of interesting characterisation beyond the Doctor and Amy.

TBB's nothing more than the duo learning a lesson about friendship to the backdrop of a city in space, whereas L&M creates a small universe and fleshes out the characters living in it. It's just a shame that the fate of those characters had to be so childishly gross.

Ok you've taken these episodes too far out of the context by which they need to be judged. You can't just simply summarize an episode in one in sentence and compare it to another sentence. All of the scripting in L&M is abysmal. TBB is a million times better in that regard. Simply saying I think this concept is "deeper" than another based on a one sentence summary isn't fair.

I want to write an episode where the Doctor examines the relationship he has with his companions and compares it to that of a general and his troops in the context of him serving as an antibody fighting an infection in a gigantic alien. You can now compare my episode to any written by RTD or Moffat.
 

Regulus Tera

Romanes Eunt Domus
KuwabaraTheMan said:
He wrote extremely clever resolutions to his plot, but he never stood up and had characters spelling it out for viewers. For my money, the resolution to Last of the Time Lords, with the Doctor turning the Master's weapon for controlling humanity into a force that turns positive thoughts into a conduit is far more clever and inventive than anything Moffat has done, but no one in the story actually comments on that. He leaves that stuff completely beneath the surface rather than having characters say "Look at how clever this is".

We are talking about the man who solved a planetary-wide traffic jam by plugging in some cables and who defeated the devil by smashing a jar?

Regarding the ending of Last of the Time Lords, the problem doesn't come from the magical fairy dust, but from the fact that, while the elements that solve the plot are set up early (the archangel network and the paradox machine), they are never hinted at being the resolution to the problem. I can buy the Doctor harnessing the power of humanity through Martha's gospel to turn the clock back one year, but the events leading to that happen off-screen. We are asked to believe on the Doctor's salvation only on hearsay. As they say, show, don't tell.

Now that I think about it, it's great commentary on religion.

brucewaynegretzky said:
Ok you've taken these episodes too far out of the context by which they need to be judged. You can't just simply summarize an episode in one in sentence and compare it to another sentence. All of the scripting in L&M is abysmal. TBB is a million times better in that regard. Simply saying I think this concept is "deeper" than another based on a one sentence summary isn't fair.

Well, we were talking about concepts, weren't we? I agree the writing in L&M is bad, very bad, but so's the one in TBB. We are never given any reason to care for the future of the space city -for all we are shown, they are a bunch of complacent bastards. When I say I find L&M more interesting is solely through the basic elements and the acting (I don't think the actor who played Elton looked the part of a nerdy nerd, but he did act it well; on the other hand, Liz Ten was such a rogue girl that, well, she was a rogue girl).

I believe RTD had more to play with there than Moffat did through TBB.

brucewaynegretzky said:
I want to write an episode where the Doctor examines the relationship he has with his companions and compares it to that of a general and his troops in the context of him serving as an antibody fighting an infection in a gigantic alien. You can now compare my episode to any written by RTD or Moffat.

I would watch that!
 

isny

napkin dispenser
KuwabaraTheMan said:
The biggest issue I have is that Moffat's stories don't tell me anything beneath the surface. They don't make any statements about society or the human condition, and when Doctor Who stops being About something, I don't feel like it's Doctor Who anymore.

This.

I could see Moffat running the show into the ground and needing someone to come in to reboot it in 5-10 years. I really hope this doesn't happen, but with him being about such huge story archs and such boring stories, it's going to get stale very quick. He'll be out of his depth before you know it. (If you don't already consider him out of his depth. He clearly isn't doing as much hands on polishing of other peoples scripts the way RTD did, and as I mentioned earlier, isn't taking the time to do things like commentaries, etc. and devote himself like RTD)
 
Regulus Tera said:
Regarding the ending of Last of the Time Lords, the problem doesn't come from the magical fairy dust, but from the fact that, while the elements that solve the plot are set up early (the archangel network and the paradox machine), they are never hinted at being the resolution to the problem. I can buy the Doctor harnessing the power of humanity through Martha's gospel to turn the clock back one year, but the events leading to that happen off-screen. We are asked to believe on the Doctor's salvation only on hearsay. As they say, show, don't tell.

But that's just it. We have those things set up, they just don't hint at being the resolution to the problem. Which is good, because then we're surprised (and being surprised is good), and you can go back and note just how intricately it was all woven into the episodes. We don't see most of what Martha was doing, because that would have also destroyed the bluff. Because the bluff of her traveling around the world to assemble the various pieces of a weapon wasn't just a bluff for the Master, it was a bluff for the viewer as well. We expect to see something like that. Hell, it's just the sort of the thing that Doctor Who has done in the past. The story sets us up to expect one resolution, but then subverts that idea and gives us a completely different resolution which initially seems out of nowhere, until you realize that it was there the whole time.
 
isny said:
This.

I could see Moffat running the show into the ground and needing someone to come in to reboot it in 5-10 years. I really hope this doesn't happen, but with him being about such huge story archs and such boring stories, it's going to get stale very quick. He'll be out of his depth before you know it. (If you don't already consider him out of his depth. He clearly isn't doing as much hands on polishing of other peoples scripts the way RTD did, and as I mentioned earlier, isn't taking the time to do things like commentaries, etc. and devote himself like RTD)
Season 5 was far more consistent in terms of quality than any prior season, so i don't see how it's "clear" he isn't doing as much polishing of other peoples scripts. I'd also prefer he devote his time to the actual show, rather than superfluous behind the scenes material. Maybe if RTD hadn't hogged the limelight so much and not write his scripts at the last minute, his seasons wouldn't have been all over the place.
 

maharg

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KuwabaraTheMan said:
But that's just it. We have those things set up, they just don't hint at being the resolution to the problem. Which is good, because then we're surprised (and being surprised is good), and you can go back and note just how intricately it was all woven into the episodes. We don't see most of what Martha was doing, because that would have also destroyed the bluff. Because the bluff of her traveling around the world to assemble the various pieces of a weapon wasn't just a bluff for the Master, it was a bluff for the viewer as well. We expect to see something like that. Hell, it's just the sort of the thing that Doctor Who has done in the past. The story sets us up to expect one resolution, but then subverts that idea and gives us a completely different resolution which initially seems out of nowhere, until you realize that it was there the whole time.

Are you actually saying that RTD did better at weaving resolutions into the plot to exploit them later in a gotcha moment? Because this is just plain wrong. I don't even know where to begin to point at how wrong this is, because I'd have to point at pretty much every single episode and arc written by either of them.

Saying Wibbley-wobbley in the first act and then calling the ray gun the wibbley-wobbley-kalamazoo in the third act is not sufficient to claim "see? It was there all along!"
 
KuwabaraTheMan said:
But that's just it. We have those things set up, they just don't hint at being the resolution to the problem. Which is good, because then we're surprised (and being surprised is good), and you can go back and note just how intricately it was all woven into the episodes. We don't see most of what Martha was doing, because that would have also destroyed the bluff. Because the bluff of her traveling around the world to assemble the various pieces of a weapon wasn't just a bluff for the Master, it was a bluff for the viewer as well. We expect to see something like that. Hell, it's just the sort of the thing that Doctor Who has done in the past. The story sets us up to expect one resolution, but then subverts that idea and gives us a completely different resolution which initially seems out of nowhere, until you realize that it was there the whole time.

There is NO justification for the travesty that ended series 3. Go ahead and try and rationalize it all you want, but the end of 3 was a fucking horror show. I have said it a few times before, but the way they ended 3 almost made me want to give up on the show permanently. The build up of The Master and everything was so wonderfully done, just to have it all fall apart at the end. Christ, just thinking about the ending of 3 fills me with rage. I don't care how many good stories or episodes RTD ever does again (even the fantastic Children of Earth), I will never forgive him for the ending to series 3.

RTD was a great idea man. His concepts for episodes were great, and he was great at setups, but his follow through was horrid. That was where his major failing was.

As for "The Day of the Moon," does anyone have a gif of The Doctor giving Nixon the shooting gesture after Nixon "rescues" him from NASA security? I loved that little gesture.
 
isny said:
I could see Moffat running the show into the ground and needing someone to come in to reboot it in 5-10 years. I really hope this doesn't happen, but with him being about such huge story archs and such boring stories, it's going to get stale very quick. He'll be out of his depth before you know it.

:lol Are you guys serious?
 
maharg said:
Are you actually saying that RTD did better at weaving resolutions into the plot to exploit them later in a gotcha moment? Because this is just plain wrong. I don't even know where to begin to point at how wrong this is, because I'd have to point at pretty much every single episode and arc written by either of them.

Saying Wibbley-wobbley in the first act and then calling the ray gun the wibbley-wobbley-kalamazoo in the third act is not sufficient to claim "see? It was there all along!"

Yes, I think he does it better, and he never has a 'gotcha moment'. He doesn't flaunt it in your face; it's just there for you to pick up on, or not, as the case may be.

He sets up the Archangel Network in the first act, and not just that it exists, but what it does and how it operates. How both the Master and 99% of the human race are tapped into it at all times. But he doesn't hit you over the head with this fact. It's presented, as is, simply as an explanation for how he was able to take over so easily. Then he has Martha spend an entire year traveling the world and talking to people, and in the final act he reveals that Martha has been spreading the word to people and has them turn the Archangel Network back on the Master. He was hoisted on his petard. It's doubly brilliant when you consider that the Master manipulated the despair of the future of humanity and turned them into the toclafane, and then he's done in by the hope of the present day humanity.
 
KuwabaraTheMan said:
Yes, I think he does it better, and he never has a 'gotcha moment'. He doesn't flaunt it in your face; it's just there for you to pick up on, or not, as the case may be.

He sets up the Archangel Network in the first act, and not just that it exists, but what it does and how it operates. How both the Master and 99% of the human race are tapped into it at all times. But he doesn't hit you over the head with this fact. It's presented, as is, simply as an explanation for how he was able to take over so easily. Then he has Martha spend an entire year traveling the world and talking to people, and in the final act he reveals that Martha has been spreading the word to people and has them turn the Archangel Network back on the Master. He was hoisted on his petard. It's doubly brilliant when you consider that the Master manipulated the despair of the future of humanity and turned them into the toclafane, and then he's done in by the hope of the present day humanity.

The Archangel Network was there all along, but it doesn't change the fact that it converted the Doctor form a shriveled up, big headed lil munchkin into a glowing, floating, laser repelling beacon of forgiveness.

I am glad that you loved it and think it was genius. I am firmly in the camp that RTD has a special place in hell reserved for him for how horribly he ended series 3.
 
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