I'd drop the Big Sean mannerisms (raising your pitch at the end of some lines and the 'uhs').
I like the sample you picked btw, sounds pretty unique.
I really have no idea where that inflection comes from. It's something I picked up way before I started listening to FF Vol. 2 and shit. I'll try to stop all that, though.
'preciate the listen, though. I fell in love with this instrumental.