Promised Neverland 4
Norman is going to die helping the rest of them escape, isn't he. :/ Also I noticed something that may be the single hint to this ending up a battle shonen; the little girl was impaled with a rose? Could be something related to the 'food' aspect or the shonen-y power of Mom.
Red Sprite 1
Too fast. I feel like there's nothing left for mystery, world building and character-driven plot by the end of this chapter. Can't see it lasting more than a year without devolving into generic garbage. I did like the overall style and concept though, but the chapter content was more fit for a one-shot.
Norman is going to die helping the rest of them escape, isn't he. :/ Also I noticed something that may be the single hint to this ending up a battle shonen; the little girl was impaled with a rose? Could be something related to the 'food' aspect or the shonen-y power of Mom.
Red Sprite 1
Too fast. I feel like there's nothing left for mystery, world building and character-driven plot by the end of this chapter. Can't see it lasting more than a year without devolving into generic garbage. I did like the overall style and concept though, but the chapter content was more fit for a one-shot.