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Revo

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Freesia Overall Thoughts

Was the feels part when
Yo-ko gets shot in the throat?
Otherwise I'm unsure what the feels part is.

And, um, well that was certainly interesting. The heavy use of hallucinations makes knowing when things happen a bit confusing which helps keep you in the mindset of the guy who experiences them.

Freesia was most certainly different than nearly everything else I've read I think.
 

upandaway

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Flying Witch ch1

Oh man, that was so nice. The atmosphere is really neat. It gave me a Yotsuba& feel, somehow... man I like this one a lot. This is where I'd rush to the author's page to see his other works too, but apparently this is his first one?

So yeah I like this. Too early to say where it's going but that was a good first impression.
 
Pokemon Adventures: D/P/P Vol.11

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Never expected Viz to actually get this far and finish up the D/P/P arc. This arc was pretty great especially since in the end, they really used pretty much every character in the region as well as every legendary in the region too, lol
 
Another Shonen Advice

Last time we mentioned about developing and introducing villains in series with with some tips like early mentions and for shadowing to name a few

Another thing that is very important in the world of ACTION Shonen is world building


World Building most have 4 unique points


  • Scale
  • Creating the Unknown
  • A Sense of Travel
  • A Sense of an Living Space/Atmosphere which is interconnected with each other when a significant event occurs




Scale could easily be made but without the sense of unknown wonders and diversity it leaves it quite flat... These two points need to support each other

Having the unknown present allows the user to be intrigued with the series world and excited for future arcs in which the unknown could be further explored

A Shonen could rely on its good characters but a nicely developed world adds to that fact....


Another thing is creating a connected living space and or atmosphere

You don't need the world to be thriving with life but instead create scenarios where an event in one place is connected with the other place...

OP newspapers are a good example of the world being connected

If you do create a mostly lifeless post apocalyptic place adding a sense of unknown landscapes and or secret location spices the world up with the like of life


(Bleach's Hollow world was a lack of the above point)


A sense of travel/ voyage through the world is the least important of the points but could still add to the overall world building


If the said characters embark to their new locations they leave behind what they are familiar with... hang out with new allies and fight new enemies

Readers usually don't want to see the same old place appearing over and over again

It could be avoided with occasionally visiting the "hub" for only a few times throughout the series but a better way is to leave it entirely by not visiting the same place more then twice


One Piece and HXH do this well with HXH even leaving some main characters behind for awhile before meeting up for good times sake

This creates the illusion that the other characters also have goals and live their lives without the protagonist

Toriko finally left behind there "HUB" areas and also begin this journey/voyage scenario which is great



Bonus Tips

  • Civilization and Open Landscape Panoramas are great to show scale
  • A new language + culture + economy + politics adds to the worlds believability
  • Giving the enemy their own culture is a great idea too



More tips will come soon... Usually at random when I feel like it
 
great points.

Bleach's world absolutely flounders

thanks

and yes that is one of the main complaints with Bleach


Everything is lifeless in a world sense
Edit: But they do have some excellent characters like Rukia (now that Kubo gave her some shine time) and Renji
Man, Talker-man, you.. use enter a lot.

I don't mean much by it but those are kind of a lot.

got to give out sometimes :p

Pressing enter is sooooo satisfying
 

Charade

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Danna ga Nani o Itte Iru ka Wakaranai Ken 1

I felt like only half of these really worked, but still pretty funny regardless, if only for the premise.
 

thesaucetastic

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Flying Witch ch2-3

I'm loving every panel. This is great.
I'm a fan. Slow updates though.

Petit Petit Tantan Petit Tantan 1-10
Cute. Not super funny, but still enjoyable. It does get a little spicy with the jokes sometimes though. Didn't cure me of my shitty feelings, so I'll save the rest for when I can appreciate it better.
 

remz

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Just subscribed to Viz's WSJ now that Hunter x Hunter is back because I'm sick of translations that make no Fucking X Sense. Is there anyway to read the manga from a PC though? I don't mind using my phone but sometimes my eyes aren't so good. :(
 

upandaway

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Hajiotsu

Freaking adorable! Haha. Definitely going to keep reading this.
Not much to say about it, but I really like everyone's attitudes. It's still pretty standard but I initially expected it to be more... trashy... or dramatic... I guess, so being a fluffy baby steps relationship is really nice. I hope it can stay like this, the fact it's only 5 volumes keeps me optimistic.
 

kasane

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new LN from shakugan no shana author

could be interesting

edit: checking for new chapters of mashiro no oto and ballroom e youkoso is sad

also based on ballroom e youkoso's cover in mu he will get a partner himself, i like that.
 

thesaucetastic

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Gakuen Babysitters 43
omg omg omg

:DTL :DTL :DTL

also how can you look at this face and think she's not an angel

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don't worry, she can be my angel if she wants

okay, I am healed and not on the verge of tears anymore. Now I just feel embarrassed for crying over nothing in the first place. I blame the moon phases and the tides and hormones
 
I enjoyed it too. Just that it doesn't really do anything special besides just kind of be cute and fluffy. Only thing I really wanted more of was more unexpected pairings (or, at the very least, more pairings that wouldn't seem to work out at first glance).

I re-read it when I want fluffy feelings.

Honestly, I'm not too critical on what I read in general. If I read it all the way, I probably enjoyed it. At least enough to read it all. Not much else to it than that, really.

Yea that first pairing was a doozy lol. The last pairing had some similarities but its effect was way less.

If i had to be critical it would be the MMO story mostly due to the length and not showing his reaction to her being that character (funnily enough there wasn't even an epilogue chapter with those 2). Also in the last story the dude's "running away" was sudden tbh.
 
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