The Smoking Bun
Banned
I wanted to quote but I think the post would be too long but thank you everyone for your suggestions for improvements. I think my lack of confidence and depressed state is really showing here. A special thank you to stn as well for the detailed critique.
More humour, less games and self loathing, got it.
Well some of the profiles that caught my eye are one of those "smart/nerd" types with a +80% match rating. Still, I get your point.
I kind of hate writing about myself.
More humour, less games and self loathing, got it.
Less negative. Maybe downplay the videogame stuff. The chances of meeting some pixie videogame nerd girl are probably on the low %. I mean be yourself, but people like people who are well rounded.
Well some of the profiles that caught my eye are one of those "smart/nerd" types with a +80% match rating. Still, I get your point.
I kind of hate writing about myself.