Much of the action in this section is driven by Fhureks anti-alien prejudice the athletic directors dislike for Hench Sina and Frid Kelio is obvious from the beginning, and he goes from insisting that they be kicked off the team to arranging their transfer to other schools.
Anti-alien prejudice was a hallmark of the Expanded Universe; my inclusion of it in the treatment for Edge of the Galaxy led to a discussion with Story Group and the Rebels creative team. Where we ended up was that the Empire might not be openly and uniformly anti-alien, but people who felt that way about aliens were probably rah-rah Imperial supporters.
On the other hand, some readers took Leo Leoniss dismissal of Fhurek as a suggestion that anti-alien prejudice is more of an Outer Rim mindset. Thats not what I had in mind: Leos a snob, and dismissing Fhurek as an Outer Rim rube is an easy out that keeps him from having to ask himself tougher questions about the Empire. (To be fair, we all go through life struggling with our own blind spots and falling prey to this kind of self-deception.)
Fhureks prejudice and Zares reaction to it got complicated, though. As I wrote earlier, my inspiration for writing a Star Wars sports novel began with two ideas: Lothal as a frontier ag planet and a city kid trying to fit in with farm boys. It was Friday Night Lights meets Footloose, essentially.
Im pretty sure I was already developing my plans for Edge of the Galaxy when I found out Zare was black. Now, theres no intra-human racism in the Empire Fhureks a bigot, but he doesnt care that Zares skin is darker than his. But unavoidably, real-world readers will be aware of that difference, and I realized that would change the dynamic of their scenes together. And suddenly my sports story had veered close to the real-world history of institutionalized bigotry and prejudice in sports.
That gave me pause. Was this part of the plot a little too on the nose? After some debating, I decided that having arrived there by accident, Id run towards those parallels instead of away from them. And so Fhureks suggestion that Hench and Frid may lack the necessary capabilities closely tracks something Dodger executive (and supporter of Jackie Robinson) Al Campanis infamously said on Nightline.
I also realized there was an ironic twist to the grouping of Fhurek, Zare, Hench and Frid. Im old enough to remember when racists said (or more often sneakily implied) that African-Americans couldnt be quarterbacks because the position was too intellectually demanding. Well, Zare Leonis is a black quarterback which may not matter in-universe, but still has real-world reverberations. I didnt do that on purpose, but came to see it as a happy accident.
A counterpoint to that, though, is the scene between Zare and Merei which is about class privilege, not prejudice. Zare is furious at the other SaberCats for hemming and hawing when he proposes boycotting the title game, but Merei sees what he doesnt: Zares going to a good school and will probably wind up as a highly-paid research scientist or perhaps an Imperial officer, but the best that the other SaberCats can hope for is a job as a field technician for one of the ministries. A junior grav-ball title could help them get into a better school and give them brighter prospects; it means a lot more to them than it does to Zare. As Merei asks Zare, arent they his teammates too?
(I like that scene, but it would have been stronger if Id made it clear that the other SaberCats are old Lothal like Beck, not newcomers like Zare and Merei. Missed opportunity!)