New Spartan is wearing a titanium mankini.
I think your link is borked, it kept sending me to my personal soundcloud until I deleted the # in there. FTFY in the quote!
At first blush, I think you have the style down pat. Good choice of instruments and good pace to the music. Having those string notes hold for ~40 seconds is ballsy, and I gotta say it didn't work for me. The notes got on my nerves before they changed. Maybe that's just a problem with the dynamic or octave, I'm not sure. Overall I felt the song could use a little more movement to it, but I definitely heard the 'Halo' in it immediately (which is a big accomplishment!). The little swell at 1min is great. Keep it up yo