the last two episodes undo everything Tomoya's development was building towards over the course of the entire series. He was learning to accept the bad things that had happened in his life, to recognize the blessings that surrounded him in the form of friends and family, to acknowledge his own self-worth and ability to change things around him for the better. And he was learning that his time with Nagisa was well worthwhile, despite the hardship they both had to endure.
This theme goes back to the very, very beginning of the series, to some of the first words Nagisa says. "Do you like this school? I really, really love it.
But nothing can stay unchanged. Fun things... happy things... they can't all possibly stay unchanged. Even so, can you keep on loving this place?" It's a common theme in Japanese culture: good things can't last, and that's what makes them worth caring about. Tomoya's character development, up until the final 15 minutes of the series, could be charted through the move from his former self (who responds to her question with, "Then just find another fun, happy thing.") to someone who can keep loving Nagisa and the city despite the pain he endures because of them.
There were some surprising effects used in this episode. Crazy to think that there's real world reference that matches those locations so closely.
Then, Clannad uses the ambiguous bullshit of Kotomi's parents' research and the ambiguous bullshit of the other-world parallel plot to negate the one moment in the series that truly mattered, eliminating Nagisa's death, five years of time, and some of the most pivotal events in Tomoya's life through the supernatural power of... resolving character arcs? Happy feelings? Whatever it was, just as Tomoya finally realizes that he was right to live with Nagisa, even though she died before her time, he no longer has to ask himself the question because nothing bad happened. The disease that had dogged her for her entire life that nobody understood disappears as conveniently as it appears.
It's stupid. Maintain the parallel with Akio begging for Nagisa's life if you must by saving Ushio, but undoing six episodes of the series to create some contrived happy ending is stupid, and ruins everything that I had liked about the episodes following Tomoya's graduation, back when the world was real and things had consequences. I was really enjoying watching him grow, and now that it was all undone, I feel like I had wasted my time.
If Clannad is typical of what Key represents, they have a very simple formula for how to draw tears from their fans.
- Introduce the male protagonist to some cute, quirky girl.
- Have them spend a bunch of time together doing random things to try to build attachment with the audience.
- Something terrible happens to them!
- Then a miracle occurs...
- Everyone is crying and happy.
Every arc in the series can be represented this way (maybe not the dorm lady, though there are very similar beats), from Fuuko, who gets
five minutes of the last episode, all the way to Ushio and Nagisa. The writing doggedly strives to hit these points no matter how many hoops it has to jump through or random circumstances it has to contrive. In the end, the stories feel hollow. They don't care about cause and effect. Even when I felt like After Story had finally constructed something meaningful, it sacrifices it all to be a vehicle for "feels". It would have been better if it ended at episode 18.