I'm doing Marketing, so marketing positions. The part-time work is that sort of thing too- you know, the kind of work someone my age wouldn't have done before. So I don't really understand how one could have experience...
His one bit of great advice was given my lack of actual real-world experience, I'd be wise to talk about my skills. So, I can use Word without having a panic attack, I use social media, that sort of thing. That seems like a great avenue for bullshit, so I'll get on that.
I'mma re-write this weekend. I'll take up that offer of yours- I definitely need someone else to cast a critical eye over it, besides the guy on my course whose advice boils down to "trim that shit", even if it's already trim.