First, lets take the story on it's own. It doesn't work, in more ways than I can spent describing. But for simplicity sake, I don't really understand what Dante's character arc is suppose to be here.
If it's that he's suppose to 'awaken to justice' like OG Dante did in DMC3, I don't see why he did or whats different from what he was at the beginning of the game, except that he had more of a defeatist attitude about over throwing the demons. But if he supposedly found value in humanity, he did it through Kat. But how did this happen? What was so special about this girl? You tell me, because I have no idea. She was just some random chick. The closest they come to having a moment is that they vaguely relate to each other by having been hurt by demons in the past, which is like pretty much everyone on the planet.
To be honest, I like Kat. She's probably the best character in the game. The best acted and she shows just the right amount of vulnerability by being physically the weakest person there and strength of character by willingly risking her life time and again for a cause she completely believed in. But, if she was suppose to fall in love with Dante at the end, I certainly didn't feel it because there were 3 characters and Vergil just treated her as a tool while dante atleast cared about her. It'd reflect badly on her if she didn't side with the guy who atleast treated her like a person as opposed to a tool. But I digress.
Despite Dante being the more gentlemanly of the pair, their relationship fails to resonate because she just doesn't have any reason to care about dante (and it honestly seems that she doesn't, besides as a friend and comrade) and Dante is strangely and pointlessly entranced by her. Why? Well, I honestly don't know. Yet he does care about her. And only her. Vergil, his long lost brother is inconsequential. Just consider that he learned Kat's backstory as early as he could, but he didn't even bother learning how his brother survived all these years until he's right outside Mundus' door, as an afterthought. And when the Order's headquarters was being attacked, he gave NO shit whatsoever about anyone except Kat being alright (in fairness, he was helplessly stuck in limbo and that forced him to focus on his priorities, but still...). I think it can be argued that the entire game is just Dante trying to impress her, adopting her goals as his own as a way of winning her affections, in addition to getting his own personal revenge on Mundus. If you think that this is too unbelievable, consider at the end where he was about to kill Vergil, as a way of protecting the world from his rule. Now, I am willing to accept that Dante's desire to protect humanity is genuine, and if it is inline with the punk philosophy that NT has tried to capture, then it makes sense that he is against ALL authority, whether it's the malicious Mundus or the benevolent Vergil. Still, he is willing to drop it when Kat asked him to spare him. "For me.", she said. And so he did. So we can assume then that Kat's desires are what is driving Dante's actions above all else. And I don't understand why, because the extent of their relationship is that he has a crush and they had a moment where they talked about similar childhoods. Despite everything, there is no real reason that either should be attached to the other beyond in terms of being general comrades. I'm sure that every single person in Vergil's Order had been hurt by demons at some point. Otherwise, why would they be there? And Dante gets sex whenever he wants, according to what he says. Yet she seems to be positioned by NT as THE reason that Dante had his awakening to justice...?
When the component that is suppose to be driving dante's character development fails, then the arc fails, if there is suppose to even be an arc. Was there suppose to be? He seems to be, to me, the same character he was at the beginning, he's just less defeatist because...well, he won. It's not so much character development as much as a mood change. And if NT was going for a static character, that'd be fine, but I really don't think that's what they were going for.
But moving on from that, if we can acknowledge that Kat is the driving force of Dante's character 'arc' then even if it had succeeded, then it revealed another problem and NT's biggest sin: They didn't do DMC justice. Let me mark this as the place where I stop looking at DmC as it's own game and look at it as an addition to the DMC franchise. What they were suppose to do is use DMC as a template to start an alternate universe with the same essential characteristics, but interpreted differently. I think it's best to use DmC's Dante as an example of this done right. I feel they succeeded in capturing him. He has all the defining characteristics: He's conflicted about his demonic side, son of sparda, has a twin brother, a joker and badass in a fight, wields guns and melee weapons together....white hair, if you really care that damn much. Even if you don't like the new Dante, I think NT captured all the essential dante characteristics and put their own spin on them. He is Dante because he has all the required Danteness. He is not Dante In Name Only, he's Dante in Essence. Vino, Sino, and Mino were not as fortunate.
Vergil is the one who hurts the most. He is suppose to be Dante's opposite but equal, brothers who both love each other deep down, but have conflicting philosophies and lifestyles. I already went over how Dante doesn't really care about anyone but Kat in this game above, so I'll focus on their failure to capture the second (and arguably more important) essential element of Vergil. In their reinterpretation, they turned Vergil into the smart guy constrasted to Dante's brute strength. This could have worked perfectly, you know, if they had written Vergil as a legitimately smart character. This is a classic example of telling, not showing. The only real display of Vergil's intelligence is his hacking, which is honestly just technobabble combined with plot device. This isn't intelligence in an organic form. There is nothing really showing that Vergil is smarter than dante when you put them in a room together. Not only that, but he is entirely dependent on Dante. How shit out of luck would he be if Dante just said "Well, okay, I now know my past....still don't care. Kat, if your ever in the mood for a good fuck, come by my place." and walked away? Vergil is goddamn helpless without Dante, while Dante could probably just move and take out whatever demons he needed to to stay safe. And even in the fight with Mundus, where he and Dante worked side by side, he had to constantly have his ass saved by his brother. He is obviously Dante's inferior. If he is supposedly smarter, it's not in any way that matters. And he's so outclassed in fighting ability that it's pathetic. What Vergil should have been is far more calculating have Dante join cause by some form of manipulation. Here's an easy example, and you wouldn't have to change much of the actual exchange.
What happened:
"Dante, please please please please join my group. Give me a chance. I promise, once I show you who you are, you'll definitely, truly want to stay."
What should have happened:
"Hello, Dante. I am Vergil. You want to join my organization and I am here to let you. Oh? You don't want to? Very well. I'll be sure to leave a blue rose at your funeral. You realize the only reason you are still alive is that you only ever had to fight the most minor of demons. That's changed now. Mundus knows who you are and will track you. Not here of course, we have systems of protection. Shame you're not staying. Mundus will send the armies of hell after you once your gone, you know. Why? Well, because of your father. Oh, you don't know who your father is? What about your mother Eva? No? Hmm. Oh, sorry, classified order information. I have to keep my secrets, you know. In any case, you go ahead and run along now, I don't want to keep you. My time is precious as well, and if it doesn't have to do with the Order, then I'm afraid I can't waste it. Enjoy the rest of your very short life outside this complex."
See how much more power he has here? Even if he is weaker than dante physically, he'd have total dominance, holding the secrets and his safety over his head. Intelligence vs strength, conflicting on equal grounds. And this could easily go on the entire game, him manipulating Dante by exploiting his desire to know more about himself, his relationship with Kat, etc, right up to the very end where Vergil just has to fight, and (again, while physically weaker), he can demonstrate greater battle tactics (perhaps using the environment to help him with the fight). It doesn't necessarily have to be mean like I suggested with my text, but he should never have been begging like a dog for scraps.
Sparda and Mundus suffer more in the translation however, probably due to their vagueness in the original DMC. The essence of Sparda was that he was a demon, a monsterous entity, that awakened to justice, kicked Mundus and the ENTIRETY OF HIS DEMON ARMY back to Hell, and placed several seals throughout the world that made. He was such a force to be reckoned with, essentially a god greater than even mundus, and yet he fought for what was right, and settled to have a family, which is a very human desire. In fairness, a lot of the depth of Sparda comes from vagueness and how the lore was set up for the fans to fill in the blanks (more on that later). But the essence of Sparda was that he had all the power in the world and was set to do great evil....and didn't. He did the opposite. Like the inverse of Lucifer. DmC's Sparda, at best, vaguely suggest his importance and power by being related to mundus and seemingly having a servant in phineas. But as soon as Mundus found out about Eva, he came down and manhandled him pretty easily. And that's where he's left, suffering for a thousand years, with Mundus not even bothering to pick out his replacement and not showing himself to be any worse for it. He didn't seem to do any great deeds or have a dramatic change of character or anything like that. He just happened to fall in love with Eva (for seemingly no reason, much like with Dante and Kat) and...that's it. But worse is how Dante and Vergil react to him. In DMC, his legacy wasn't merely the power that left the twins, but it was the effect that both parents had on both the twin's character. Both were taught that Sparda was a great demon/man by their mother, but then she was killed, and the twins reacted differently to both, with some truly effective dramatic and tragic irony involved in their character development. In Dmc, Sparda's contribution to the story is his sperm. He himself isn't important. It could have been any demons sperm, really. A lesser stygian could have screwed some random angel, and given birth to Dante and Vergil and everything would have been the same, because the important thing is that it's a demon/angel hybrid and....that's all. Sparda here is so much less meaningful than he was in DMC. Again, I stress that I am not simply bitching that Sparda has been changed, but because the essence of his character hasn't been kept intact. If they wanted to put more emphasis on Sparda being in love with Eva and show him as weaker, that would be perfectly fine, but they still need to include his awakening to justice, and his rebellion against demonkind. So, what I would do is have Eva be out on a mission to seduce Sparda into justice, and she does, falling in love with him in the process, to which they have a family. His newly awakened sense of justice and unique position in Mundus' army allows him to get closer than anyone else would be able to. However, he fails, but manages to make Mundus impotent, justifying Mundus' irrational desire to have a child. Sparda awakens to justice and rebels, while NT still put their own spin on the story, and it helps explain a plot element that otherwise makes no sense in the game.
And Mundus...well, it's not mundus so much as demons in general. Mundus and his army of demons were Evil, not evil as in the moral action as we understand it, but as a metaphysical concept. They wanted to kill and take over the human world because it was in their nature. Not the deepest of motivations, I'll grant you, but what I like about it is that it is truly alien. It's not about getting stuff because they need it or anything comprehensible by humans. I was perfectly willing to accept DmC's system of demons...but it falls apart because there is no point to this silly masquerade they put up. Before, it was assumed that demons could only affect limbo, but at the end, the Hellgate is closed, something Mundus could have done at any time, and limbo collapsed into the real world where the demons were seen. Why did they just not do that? Why not enslave us the normal, physical way, which would be much easier for them. Instead, they try to get at us with these soft drinks and crappy news reporters. They go through the trouble of keeping a society fully functional, yet on the brink of decadence and for what? Why? I honestly can't think of any reason except maybe that they're bored and decided to challenge themselves. It doesn't help that Mundus was made so much more human. I won't argue that he was some deep character in the original, but he was definitely alien like the rest of the demons were, not really able to comprehend why dante is so upset when "I can just make more artificial demons, just like Trish". Mundus of DmC doesn't have that excuse. He's very human in comparison. He has sexual urges, he lusts after human attention (evidence by his photo with all sorts of famous people), he is greedy, prideful....and he wants a kid for some reason (more on that later). Here, NT kept his sociopathy, but made him too human in the process, when he and the rest of the demons are suppose to be alien beings. It results in this contradiction of characteristics that make make him not a demon at all, but just a particularly dickish guy who is going through this silliness with limbo, when he could easily just openly rule humans like Mundus of old would do.
And then they, bizarrely, missed the one chance they had to expand on a DMC character that didn't have much characterization. They made Eva into an Angel and gave her a greater presense, but in the end, she is a copy of Eva. Her being an angel is, again, a plot device for Dante to be speshul and also get a new weapon, but her status as an angel isn't really commented upon. Here was a very good opportunity to turn the tables a bit. If Mundus can only be killed by a nephilim, it'd make more sense for Eva to have been the one who seduced Sparda (maybe fallen in love with him legitimately, but that's irrelevant) in order to breed a child that could kill Mundus. This would break away from her DMC characterization, but Eva was such a blank character there that they have plenty of foundation to build upon it. The essence of Eva was that she loved her sons and her death serves to motivate the twins in some way. NT do that here, in fact they establish this more than the DMC games by giving her her own character model and sequences in Mission 2, but don't do anything more with her when they could have done so much, especially with her new identity as an angel.
Vergil, Sparda, Mundus, NT failed all these characters. Dante and Kat alone stand up as realized characters the way they should be (if you see the essentials of the aforementioned DMC characters as I do, atleast), and it is their relationship that clearly has the most effort put into being realized. No, not just the character relationship, it's the single most important story element in the game, at the expense of nearly everything else, which is why the story ultimately fails to have any hold on the audience.
I don't predict that this story is gonna stay with people very long, unless you really, really liked the characters here for some reason. To make a story stay with an audience after the credits have rolled, you need some hooks to speculate on what is beyond that which is shown. This doesn't necessarily have to be something for a sequel, but just some mystery that provokes the audiences mind to wonder at it. Part of the reason that DMC had a huge story fanbase was also because of all the blanks that fans were left to fill because the lore suggested certain things, but didn't expand on them, allowing fans to assume a lot and make the universe feel bigger than merely what was happening in the story that was shown. Even DMC2 contributed to this. We had untold tales we could contemplate. What was the relationship between Mundus and Argosax (since they were both demon rulers), what awakened Sparda to justice, how did that war proceed exactly, what was Sparda's relationship with all the demons that mention knowing him personally, what happened to Dante after he rode into Hell in DMC2, etc. Lots of good hooks that fans were left with to speculate on.
In comparison, DmC's lore is so thread bare. To be clear, saying little and saying nothing at all isn't the same thing. A history between Beowulf and Sparda was suggested, and fans can make some assumptions off that. Because of how Beowulf is particularly enraged at the very mention of sparda, more than any other demon thousands of years later, I think it can be assumed that it was't just a betrayal of demon nature, but a personal betrayal of trust to him, and we are intrigued as to what their relationship could have been. Compare that to Mundus saying when he arrived to humanity a millennium ago. Where was he before? Why did he come? What were his goals? Any guess is as good as another. We have no foundation to build off of. Therefore, maybe he was kicked out of hell, or maybe he was just taking a very long nap, or maybe he was just bored, or maybe there was something he wanted. Who knows? It could be anything.
DmC had plenty of opportunities to give the players these kinds of hooks and it squandered all except the incident with phineas. A great example would be Bob. There is so much contradictory about him in comparison to the rest of demon kind. He seems to truly exist as this strange, abstract entity that Dante kills and then gets Aquila from. Why does Bob not have a physical demon body like everyone else? Why is he electronic when everyone else seemed to be made out of some kind of physical material? Why was he carrying around this archaic style angel chakram weapon? NT could have used this to expand on the capabilities of demonkind. Make Bob an artificial demon intelligence, which was made from Angel tech that demons corrupted. Not only do you take an out of place element within the story and make it flow seamlessly into the narrative, but you world build and give fans a hint of angel culture as well and give fans some possibilities to speculate on the next game that can include an expansion of more of these electronic demons as demon technology progresses.
Instead, everything moves along because it's what the plot needs at the moment, not caring whether this element of world building makes sense later. Dante needs some kind of reason to trust kat, so have the otherwise weakling Hunter be completely immune until she throws this random fire grenade thing at him, after which he is vulnerable for some reason. If whatever protection the Hunter had would have made him impervious to Dante's attacks, why don't ALL demons, or atleast important ones like Poison, have that? Why aren't there more Nephilim out there? If Nephilim can kill the demon king, and angels want to do that, and Mundus has political enemies, then both angels and demons should be eager to do the dirty and let their children destroy their common enemy. And Limbo. Goddamn, limbo, what sense do you even make? You might argue that limbo needs to be inexplicable because otherwise there is no reason it can't just crush a building on Dante, but I think it'd be perfect if there were 2 limbo, one operated by the angels like the hellgate is operated by the demons, and they interact. Angels, knowing Dante is their best hope in defeating Mundus, are constantly protecting him and generally keeping demon limbo from simply killing him. But I can't assume that because there is absolutely nothing indicating it in the game. The worst example is Mundus' baby. With Mundus being immortal, why is he even considering the possibility of a successor? If he is as sociopathic as he claims, why does he even want a kid even if he is going somewhere? Why not let it this entire facade that he built fall apart if he's not going to be there to enjoy it? And if he really wants a kid that bad, why doesn't he just fuck another one of his whores? Infact, why doesn't he impregnate a whole harem, so he has several children so if something happens to one of them, he can just shrug and appoint another as a successor?
No, instead, everything in DmC is there to serve the plot from one point to the next and not a tick more. The only exception, which I mentioned before, is when Phineas describes Assiel and their other abilities, but honestly, that just tells me that Dante is gonna visit heaven in the sequel, which I could have guessed. Better would have been to give me what those 'great things' that the nephilim did were.
In terms of characters, world building, and plot, DmC is a colossal failure not just on it's own, but in living up to what was a fairly good universe. All of NT's energy was put into trying to ignite a romance that never got off the ground. I'm very curious to know what happened here. I see two real options. One is that they simply didn't care. Their interest lie in teen romance, evidently, beyond anything else, and if they really focused on that and only used the DMC template out of sheer mandate from Capcom, then that proves beyond any doubt that they were not the studio to reboot the franchise. If Capcom had that much confidence in them, they should have made their own IP, where they could go all out in creating their action-adventure romance and spared DMC fans the disappointment of seeing Vergil, Sparda and Mundus being turned into such parodies of their former selves. The other option is that they are simply incompetent at writing a story, despite their enthusiasm.