Blackace
if you see me in a fight with a bear, don't help me fool, help the bear!
The piano is a sampleI'm envious of how quick you are improving, I like the drums and the melody is decent not so sure about the string sound. I'm not good with the technical terms but the 'timing' of the drums are good, I think if you get the melody's up to that level then you're good to go. Have you thought about sampling?
The "whistle" I am working on