Posted this in another thread, would like to here KZ gaf's thoughts:
I know this may not be the place, but I know I could have done a better job at showing the utter hopelessness and forsaken feeling that the ISA had. Scenes of them burying their own, coming upon tortured and mutilated comrades, numerous suicides, men breaking. I mean really just flat out breaking. Like the scene where the HGH are messing with that guy with their new gun. He starts crying and yells "Kill me! Just fucking do it already I don't want to live!" They laugh and continue to torment him. At some point through torturing and humiliating him, he grabs one of their guns, and instead of killing them, just shoots himself. That shit is dark and sad and would have made the plot 10x better.