I mean the entire Peter arc in the second game is that he gets infected, sleeps instead of reads an article (which completely defames him anyway for literally no reason) and then he's sorry and gives up the webs
Miles went from youthful innocent trying to reach his mentor to bloodlust insane revenge murder, for a character that wasn't even his opposition. Then became the greatest super hero of all time and made Peter a bitch because of... reasons I guess.
The whole kraven story was dumb as shit, without even mentioning the random off screen killings of major villains.
Your summaries are a bit off, especially for Miles, but I agree about Peter’s arc feeling incomplete/rushed and about the off screen deaths for Kraven’s arc.
Again this felt like quite a large chunk of the story hit the cutting room floor and it really needs a director’s cut to even things out, especially the pacing.
I don’t mind the idea of Miles finally succeeding at one of the key final lessons that Peter instilled onto him about being a hero. The arc of his need for revenge over the man who killed his dad made enough sense to me. I also liked that he could not forgive him in the end. However, Kraven’s involvement with that plot thread did not make enough sense. Thus, Kraven was the problem.
I don’t mind an older Peter wanting a break and feeling the immense amount of pressure of heroics taking over his life to the point where he can’t even hold a stable job, because he’s too busy constantly saving people and feeling like he is the only one that can. That was hinted at multiple times in Spiderman PS4 and Miles Morales’ game and it’s been a consistent theme in the comics and movies.
Being Spiderman slowly ruins his life. It is like a constant within multiple timelines. I have not read every comic (I repeat I have not read every one), but from what I remember the only version of middle aged Peter that felt like he got things right (for a limited time) was the Superior Spiderman, and that technically wasn’t even him. Even the real Peter was shocked and impressed at how much better Superior Spiderman was at managing his life and being efficient for a while.
Also, I don’t get how some of you guys suddenly think apologetic Peter doesn’t represent him all of a sudden and call him a bitch. In every version of Spiderman Peter has cried and/or apologized for his actions, blames himself constantly, and tries to talk people out of doing harm with inspiration and being friendly. Even one of the worst Spiderman movies, Amazing Spiderman 2, got this aspect right when Peter tried to talk down Max and relate to him, to stop him from harming anyone right after he became Electro.
However, from saying all of this, you’re right about the venom stuff and him falling asleep, suddenly being proto-venom quite quickly. Kraven is the problem here too, because there wasn’t enough involvement during this pivotal time to justify such a whiplash of change, when Kraven should have been front and center to spark these changes.
The writing around Kraven and how they utilized him are more of the problem to me than anything else, as he is what the plot depends on to be cohesive. It all breaks apart in the second half because he was underused and absent for a large amount of the game, only to show up whenever a big story moment happens between two main characters and bring more goons for gameplay sake.