I haven't read that, but I can assume that was the case, seeing as Nintendo, most of the times are really good with localisation. This feels worse than a fandub. And it's not that the actors aren't talented, because they are, I guess the director was very strict with it.
and jarosh, I said that the story is completely by the numbers, "insert plot twist here, emotional drama here, second plot twist here". It's nothing special, and you can see everything coming from a mile away. But you're definately over reacting.
As for show don't tell, I agree that it's a more powerful and sophisticated tool, but a balance between both is desirable. The game inverts that balance, but the animation in each cutscene is outstanding also, the way Samus' eyes move, her body, everything is crafted beautifully. But most of the exposition dumps ruin it.
Now, I have to say, one of my favourite lines, is in the intro section. "A simple report, almost dull, even.. But it felt momentous to me" Especially coming from the mourn of the baby's death..