I just thought that this would be so much better if it was Adam being the narrator. He would remember the time Samus was young, how she was determined to get to the top but with certain sadness in her, a couple of moments she broke down with him, and then the contrast with the person they find in the station, how cold and aloof she seems, and then give the cutscene with another break down or revelation of Samus with Adam.
It's not exactly what I would like, but it would at least allow Sakamoto to fullfill this "daddy" fantasy he has with Samus, and it wouldn't be as cringe inducing as what we are getting.