ZealousD said:
Gonna be working on some of the Official Thread stuff during the downtime myself. Still slowly but surely banging it out, gonna be a really nice and big OT when it's done.
After seeing Husky record some of his super-newb walkthrough videos, decided to give it a go myself. His was super-super-basic and he jumped around a lot, so I thought I might be able to do it a bit better.
Uploaded my Terran walkthrough to YouTube. I've already got my Zerg and Protoss walkthroughs done too, but I wanna hear your guys' thoughts on what I have. Am I terrible? Is my voice annoying? Am I easy to follow?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OQZVu5Z2YXo
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pnK0Kdae6Oc
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FVxFbGlO-dw
The videos were pretty good, I watched them because I was bored. The quality at 480p was fine, you can see everything that you need to see, HD would be nice, but its still more than adaquete.
One complaint is that it may just be my audio, but your actual game audio was perhaps too loud. Near the middle and especially the end, you started to mumble more and you started speaking lower, and many times, in the middle of one of your explanations, the game audio would drown out your voice. Like, you'd be saying, "Now I'm going to build a *O(#$, which is great for detection", but the game audio would say "Need more supply depots" at that exact moment, and you couldn't hear what you just said.
Also, perhaps have more of a concise idea what your going to talk about. At the beginning, you seemed to be more precise in what you wanted to discuss/show, but near the end, you sorta seemed to just grab random ideas as you say them. Ala, Oh Yea, Yamato Cannon upgrade, lets get that as well. Would be easier to follow if you broke things up in sections or something. You seemed to spend alot of time on the earlier units/structures, but seemed to lose steam near the end.
Since you were going to do Protoss/Zerg ones in the future, the biggest thing may also be to just create an excess of pylons/overlords, so you dont constantly have the 'downtime' where your wanting to create/showcase units but your getting supply blocked and theirs those awkward moments where your just waiting for supply.
Its cool that your doing these vids, obviously geared towards the complete newbie, but streamlining things would probably make it more enjoyable and easier to follow for viewers.
EDIT - reading that again, it sounded a little harsh, and I didn't mean for that at all. Its awesome that your making these, just trying to give some comments that I had while watching the vids. Dont wanna sound like I'm being too critical or anything. PS - that ending line sorta made me cringe lol, I always groan when Husky does that