Lets talk about
Gundam Build Fighters Try.Ive wanted to get this off my chest because Ive had a lot of ideas swirling around in my head the past few weeks. because Im a great fan of
Gundam Build Fighters and this show has been such non-stop disappointment .Its a show thats been mishandled all around with a saving grace here or there but overall resulting in a less than desirable product. I initially said Id be fine with
Try so long as it was half as good as
GBF was but even that bar has yet to be cleared.
I suppose the best place to begin would be with the main cast. All around theyre just sort of lacking with in development and motivation.. Sei was chasing his father with his pursuit of gunpla and Reijis friendship with Sei and his rivalry with Tatsuya Yuuki drove him in his pursuit to be the best. Theres nothing of the sort present in
Try as Fuminas goals dont posses the same emotional resonance as Seis, Sekai is more or less going along with the flow, and Yuumas impetus is the promise made to Fumina that he no longer had any intention to follow through on after having his soul stolen by a nameless bogeyman early on. I think this is largely due to the format of the show as theres simply no time to maintain such a large cast effectively n 26 24 minute episodes. Every scrub team introduced eats up into this precious time as some sort of base motivation has to be given for scrub teams participation. This was easier to handle in
GBF due to the recurring nature of the secondary cast building into a larger whole. Resolution of conflict came quicker due to the nature of the 1v1 format and the battles themselves did not have to be as drawn out in order to give all of a team some screentime. Yeah, its not much typically but it adds up.
A part of me wishes the show was longer so the characters could be better defined. Without such time constraints, Fumina could be more than a gunpla girl and Yuuma could be something other than useless. There could be something more to Sekai than bog standard shounen protag. Their growth as a team could be seen as natural and believable rather than being met with about fucking time whenever it did happen in the show proper. Im not going to pretend
GBF was some bastion of deep characterization but the main cast did grow and had time to interact with one another in more natural ways.
Try never seems to manage this, either by everything feeling like a series of loosely related events or, on the occasion it does manage to set the foundation for something meaningful, its cut terribly short. I was originally going to delve into each area a bit deeper but I think an examination of the previous two episodes will suffice.
Id like to say I dont know where to start with episode 21 but yeah, I do. It all gets back to the mishandling of the characters that were presented a fight that actually scratches the team battle itch what with a degree of teamwork and tactics on display but theres no stakes to it. At all.
Were left to wonder if the Gunpla Academy can overcome the might of Lucas Nemesis but the problem becomes: Who gives a shit? I certainly didnt. On one side we have a team thats supposed to be the best of the best, a nigh untouchable team thats so far above its competition that the national tournament feels like a formality. On the other, we have an unstoppable force, a champion from Europe that apparently overpowered any challenger with ease, a mysterious stranger that has come to interrupt the natural order of things in the tournament.
This gets back to the general mishandling of any and all characters in the show. For the life of me, I dont understand why Lucas wasnt put on the same trajectory Aila was in presentation. Hes effectively a successor to her in and, in fact, she was the one that put him on this course to begin with. We get glimpses of how strong he is but then we find out hes reliant on refueling? Where did that come from? All it would have taken was the same sort of hushed whispers where one wondered what sort of trick there was to him that let him overpower his opponents so readily. The viewer could have entered episode 21 wondering what the secret of Lucas Nemesis was and to see how that mystery would unfold.
The Gunpla Academy is equally bothersome in this regard. Each member is effectively a rival to a member of Try Fighters but it never really feels that way, does it? Yuumas rival has given him nightmares and Shia is apparently rival of Fumina by decree of Lady Meijin alone (and a little bit of shipping nonsense with Sekai). Wilfrid and Sekais little rivalry is almost effective due to how simplistic it is. Simplicity isnt a criticism either as it fits the characters well and making it needlessly over-complex would just be snore inducing.
If these rivalries were built correctly, we could start grasping at the sort of tension we experienced during each of Meijin Kawaguchi IIIs battles in
GBF. Like the Gunpla Academy now, it was a foregone conclusion hed be in the finals but the difference is we wanted him there. One would cheer for Meijin Kawaguchi because of the unfulfilled promise of his match with Reiji so many episodes ago. In fact, the viewer would have felt cheated if that promise was never delivered upon and the show itself would have suffered. Were it handled right here, episode 21 would have some gravitas to it and a little bit of ambiguity would have went a long way. Would Try Fighters get to fully realize the burgeoning rivalry between then and the Gunpla Academy or would they be forced to square off against the invincible Lucas Nemesis? One could take a side and root for their team of choice but leave satisfied regardless of the outcome and entry to the finals would have been appropriately earned.
Speaking of which, lets talk about episode 22. Theres so much bullshit in this one that it leaves me flustered. Try Fighters was outgunned, outfought, and straight up outclassed by Team Build Busters but due to plot armor and general contrivance, Yuuma bullshits his way to victory This isnt detrimental to just Yuumas character but to the entire show alone. The best teams certainly arent entering the finals. Yeah, one could argue the win is all that mattered but thats not what Build Busters thought. Did they demonstrate some foolish pride? Absolutely, but Sakai had come to fight Yuuma and fight Yuuma he would.
Ive ran the episode through my head dozens of times trying to figure how it could be fixed and what I eventually settled on wasnt the frantic slapfest we got but a beautiful loss from the Tryon 3. In my head, episode 22 plays out slightly differently than what we were given. Rather than waste time on Lucas Nemesis heart growing three sizes that day or the awkward hallway flirting between Sakai & Yuuma, it goes a little like this:
The entire episode is devoted to the conflict between Sakai & Yuuma. The beginning would play out similarly where the Tryon 3 goes all out and quickly eliminates Fumina and Sekai. This is important as given how the Tryon 3 is effectively piloted by Sakai alone wed be presented with a scenario more analogous to a fight from the original
Gundam Build Fighters, an intimate 1v1 fight to the finish.
The Lady Meijin would declare the fight over and a disappointing showing by Try Fighters but Meijin Kawaguchi himself would chide her because he knows Yuuma better than anyone else after helping him find his gunpla spirit, building off their encounter from episode 12.
Yuuma himself would realize he couldnt rely on the teams ace to carry the fight now nor could he rely on Fuminas tactical prowess. Not only was the chance of confronting the person that put him off of gunpla about to disappear, so would any chance of ever fulfilling the promise he made to Fumina of entering the World Tournament together. Hed briefly entertain the notion of giving up before remembering what the Meijin taught him and desperately striking back at the Tryon 3. Rather than the bullshit close range combat of the actual episode, hed use the Lightnings speed and long range capabilities (I credit this part to strangedopamine who pointed out how much of an oversight this was in the show on twitter).
Being low on particles would remain for a reason Ill get to shortly and force Sakais hand, not letting him run out the clock as a defensive battle against long range attacks would threaten to drain the last of his resources and result in a loss. With the support of his teammates who know why hes in the tournament and recognize they wouldnt have gotten this far without him, hed engage Yuuma at last.
As I said, Id imagine it to be the sort of 1v1 affair thats high on emotion a la Reiji vs Fellini in the World Tournament in
GBF. Rather than some inane boyfriends fighting hallway scene, the truth of Sakais motivation would come out during the fight (think Isamu & Guld) and appeal to Yuumas dormant competitive spirit while Meijin Kawaguchi looked on approvingly. Whether it be due to lack of ammo, damage, or being low on particles himself,Yuuma would be forced into the some sort of close range fight where the Tryon 3 would outclass him once again.
Itd go bad for Yuuma but he wouldnt quit. He has too much to fight for at this point: pride, his rivalries, his promise to Fumina, etc. And then, just as Yuumas on his last legs and both machines are low on particles and down to physical attacks between one another, the Tryon 3 would go in for the kill. Yuuma would close his eyes and silently apologize to Fumina for not being able to keep his promise, not opening them until he heard the familiar refrain of Battle Ended. A dormant Tryon 3 would be standing over the damaged Lightning, having run out of particles as Sakai feared it would, leaving Yuuma the winner.
This is the sort of beautiful loss Im referring to. Yuuma wouldnt have won because hes the best fighter or the best builder because guess what? Hes neither. He won because he refused to quit in the one time he rightfully could have without shame. Hes happy. Sakais happy because he found the Yuuma hed been looking for all this time which was his reason for entering the tournament. More importantly, the viewer is happy because Yuuma didnt manage some terrible asspull to win a fight he had no business winning thanks to plot armor and the needs of a terrible fucking story.
That said, thats enough fanfic for today.