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[BDGAME]

I am creating this fanzine and wanted some opinion.

Read and see if you like the ideas and if I am going in the right way.

I used only paint of windows as tool and for that, the drawing has some defects.

But to each page, my ability and coordination are increasing and the drawing tends to improve.

Another problem is my English. It is very poor and goes to need aid to continue in next editions. If somebody were able to help me, I would be very grateful.

This first history is only a prologue to evaluate.

LOOK AND READ LIKE A MANGA!

From right to the left.


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[bjork]

I'm interested to see where the story goes, but I have a feeling some of the art will be used in "bail out"-ish photoshops around here.

 

[BDGAME]

Thanks bjork…

The story is a mix of the 80's cartoon + Mario brothers games (with many references).

I think that Mario fans will enjoy it very much.

And I don't care of Photoshop jokes and others things. It's a little funny to say the truth.

I still need help for someone to make the text corrections for the English version!

 

[Spencerr]

Thanks bjork…

The story is a mix of the 80's cartoon + Mario brothers games (with many references).

I think that Mario fans will enjoy it very much.

And I don't care of Photoshop jokes and others things. It's a little funny to say the truth.

I still need help for someone to make the text corrections for the English version!

Boy do you.

 

[BDGAME]

Boy do you.

What this mean?

 

[shuri]

It's like Reirom the comic book