The Vision of Escaflowne (1996, Sunrise) – Episodes 1 to 14
Love triangles, amazing artwork, hot* guys, fantastical locations, robot-knights, great action scenes, cat girls and awesome music.
When I say “Escaflowne” those are probably some of the ideas that spring to your mind (not necessarily in that order). If I told you an anime contained all of the above elements then you’d probably conclude that the end result would be a pretty fun show. And you wouldn’t be wrong. Escaflowne, taken purely as a piece of gloriously indulgent escapist entertainment, is an entertaining series composed of lots of really cool elements.
Unfortunately, the underlying story that weaves all these pieces together into a coherent story just doesn’t work. In other words, the script it a mess and this undermines everything which is built ontop of that script.
Now, I don’t want to sit around and pick this show to pieces. Nitpicking for the sake of nitpicking can be a very tiresome exercise which often fails to illuminate anything important. You can quite easily miss the forest for the trees if you go down that route. I’m honestly not too fussed about the small stuff when there are so many bigger issues which I feel that writers completely bungle.
Overall Story (Episodes 1 – 14)
So I’m roughly half way through this series and I can honestly say I have no idea what is going on or why. I don’t really know who the protagonist of the story is. I don’t know what the stakes are. I have no idea why characters are doing what they’re doing or why they’re going where they are going.
Don’t get me wrong, I know there are bad guys and good guys in the story. The bag guys are bad because they use flamethrowers on civilians, just like in Vietnam. The good guys are good because they’re potential romantic interests for Hitomi, the protagonist. This much is clear. I’m just not clear on how any of these elements work together, on a mechanical level, to create a narrative.
This isn’t a joke. I’m honestly trying to sum up the plot of the 1st half of the series and it’s really difficult. I can tell you that we meet a bunch of characters and I can tell you that the characters visit a lot of locations, but I can’t honestly explain why they’re doing what they’re doing or what their plans are. I vaguely understand what the bad guys are up to, but I don’t really care because I feel like the stakes have been poorly developed.
Still, I promised to stay away from focusing on minor details so I’m just going to move onto my next major issue with the show.
Hitomi, our ostensible protagonist
Hitomi is a normal highschool girl who gets transplanted to a fantasy land where she gets caught up in this war thing between the evil Zaibach Empire and some other people. But who is Hitomi? What are her hopes and dreams? What defines her character? What are her flaws?
I don’t know the answers to any of those questions and that’s one my biggest problems with the series as a whole. For a protagonist, she’s extremely bland and poorly defined. I can’t describe her personality because she doesn’t have one.
What do we know about Hitomi? Well let’s examine how she’s introduced in the first episode:
- Athletic. Note how this isn’t a character trait, it’s just a skill that she has.
- In love with the captain of her Track Team, but she’s too shy to tell him her feelings. Well, now we’re starting to get a character with a goal that needs to be achieved but who can’t achieve it because she isn’t brave enough. Great! Maybe she’ll go on some kind of magical adventure and along the way develop and grow as a person to the point where she can come right out and express her feelings!
- Or not. Surprisingly, for a shoujo protagonist, she actually musters the courage to confess to her crush minutes after we learn that she even has a crush. Which neatly completes this very brief arc for Hitomi. Unfortunately, as a character, that’s basically all we learn about her within this episode. Which basically leaves her a blank slate for the rest of the show. Whoops.
- To be fair, we also learn that she has some ability to predict the future. Again, not a character trait, just a skill.
It doesn’t really get any better for Hitomi’s character. From the end of the first episode Hitomi witnesses a man fight a dragon and is then transported into a magical world. You’d normally expect a human being to have some reaction to these events. You know:
- Disbelief
- Fear
- Curiosity
- Excitement
How does Hitomi react? She doesn’t. She doesn’t react like a human being. She doesn’t ask anyone questions about the new world she’s in, or how she got there or why. She doesn’t freak out, either about being in another world, or to the fact that another world exists, or that it’s populated with talking giant animals*. She doesn’t wonder how she’ll get home. She doesn’t even bring it up – one of the other characters makes an offhand remark about getting her home, eventually, but it’s literally just a line with no further explanation given. We see a brief scene of her daydreaming about her love interest but that’s it.
Now, I’m not saying I want to see scene after scene of Hitomi freaking out about the magical world with tons of characters dropping exposition all over the place – but you need to address the issue. In what normal “Characters gets sucked to another world” story do you see a character apparently not care that they got sucked to another world? It takes about 8 episodes for Hitomi to even briefly discuss the fact that she’s away from home.
There are other problems with Hitomi, too. Apart from being a bland protagonist she also does very little to actually drive the story forward in any meaningful way. This is because she has no goals. You might think that her goal is to get home but she barely even mentions it and she never takes any steps to help her achieve that objective. At heart, Hitomi is a reactionary character. She reacts to things other people do. She reacts to her visions of the future. She has no agency.
I can see someone saying, “But Hitomi is clearly an important character! How often has she saved Van’s life? Or used her powers to find and rescues Van? Or used her powers to work out how to help Van?” The problem here, is that Hitomi exists largely as a tool that lets other characters achieve their goals.
You’ll remember earlier that I said Hitomi is athletic and that she has the ability to predict the future? She largely uses these two powers not to further any goal of her own, but to keep Van from getting horribly killed. This reduces her to less of a person and more of a tool because all she does with her powers is let other characters keep living so that they can have their own stories. Because Van is saved by Hitomi, Van can continue on his story which, presumably, is to get revenge for his people. If Van was less useless, or had some kind of newtype-esque power, Hitomi would serve literally no purpose in the story but to tag along with the gang.
I could go on and on (and on), but hopefully you get the picture. There are serious, fundamental problems with the core elements of the story. I haven’t even had time to get to any of the other characters, or the dialogue itself. It’s a deeply flawed show.
*Several episodes later Hitomi is freaked out by giant talking animals when she goes to visit a market. However this doesn’t make any sense because she already saw them in the second episode. And why is this the ONE thing that freaks her out? She’s been hanging out with a cat girl for ages!