The Vision of Escaflowne (1996, Sunrise) Episodes 1 to 14
This isnt a joke. Im honestly trying to sum up the plot of the 1st half of the series and its really difficult. I can tell you that we meet a bunch of characters and I can tell you that the characters visit a lot of locations, but I cant honestly explain why theyre doing what theyre doing or what their plans are. I vaguely understand what the bad guys are up to, but I dont really care because I feel like the stakes have been poorly developed.
I don't think the plot's very complicated mechanically. Each stop on the journey is where Van tries to drum up support to help him against the Zaibach Empire in vengeance for the destruction of Fanelia; at the point you're up to he's been to Asturia and Freid, right? The events that play out there are either due to Asturia being in cahoots with Zaibach already or the Power that Freid possesses being a target for Zaibach as well. Of course there are big character details along the way but that's the basic mechanics of it. I don't have scripts to hand to point to individual lines to support the argument, and admittedly I'm biased as a huge fan of the show, but I don't find it all that hard to follow.
It doesnt really get any better for Hitomis character. From the end of the first episode Hitomi witnesses a man fight a dragon and is then transported into a magical world. Youd normally expect a human being to have some reaction to these events. You know:
- Disbelief
What other reaction do you think she shows when she says "first a wolf man, now a cat girl" with a look of total disbelief on her face in episode 2?
I'd also suggests she gets fear out of the way when she's chased by a giant fire breathing dragon in the first episode, or when they're surrounded by the wolf men on arrival on Gaia at the end of the same episode.
She doesnt ask anyone questions about the new world shes in, or how she got there or why.
In episode 2, one of the first things she does is ask "what's the Mystic Moon?". True, she isn't asking endless questions - but does she really need to? Very little exposition is required at this stage in the series, and all the important questions get asked later.
She doesnt freak out, either about being in another world, or to the fact that another world exists, or that its populated with talking giant animals*.
See note above.
Now, Im not saying I want to see scene after scene of Hitomi freaking out about the magical world with tons of characters dropping exposition all over the place but you need to address the issue. In what normal Characters gets sucked to another world story do you see a character apparently not care that they got sucked to another world?
Strange Dawn, where they mostly whinge about doing the laundry and going to the loo instead
I think Hitomi is just resigned to the situation fairly quickly, honestly. Perhaps it's a flaw that she doesn't say it out loud, I don't know, but her attitude in the daydreaming section you don't like very much would suggest that she just thinks she's stuck there.
There are other problems with Hitomi, too. Apart from being a bland protagonist she also does very little to actually drive the story forward in any meaningful way. This is because she has no goals. You might think that her goal is to get home but she barely even mentions it and she never takes any steps to help her achieve that objective. At heart, Hitomi is a reactionary character. She reacts to things other people do. She reacts to her visions of the future. She has no agency.
Absolutely. She's POV without being the protagonist much of the time. Not sure I'd agree she's bland, but then my perception is coloured by my overall viewing of the show so can't really comment there.
Youll remember earlier that I said Hitomi is athletic and that she has the ability to predict the future? She largely uses these two powers not to further any goal of her own, but to keep Van from getting horribly killed. This reduces her to less of a person and more of a tool because all she does with her powers is let other characters keep living so that they can have their own stories.
Do you think the other characters see her this way? I don't mean this as a "you're wrong!" type of comment - I just wonder what you think the other characters think about her.
*Several episodes later Hitomi is freaked out by giant talking animals when she goes to visit a market. However this doesnt make any sense because she already saw them in the second episode. And why is this the ONE thing that freaks her out? Shes been hanging out with a cat girl for ages!
"Humanoid cat girl" is not the same thing as "talking porpoise selling you a Walkman", IMO