What they really needed was an editor who could have told them their movies was chasing too many targets at once. It's already really compacted (which is good), but it should have removed the Cinderella crap as well.
I mean, this is the genre list I could put Jupiter Ascending in:
Love story / Cinderella story / family survival / space opera / political / fantasy / conspiracy
The list with a proper cut / editor:
love story - family - political - fantasy
Or something similar to that anyway.
Btw: I did like the effort to write some things more towards a female observer, like Tatum's character getting a sanitary towel stuck to him as a band aid (resulting in a great exchange of 'the f' looks), instead of the cliche piece of suddenly available first aid kit.
There is also a strange difference is how fleshed out the Earth sections are compared to the lack thereof in the space parts. I imagine that they could write an excellent 'down back here on Earth' script, but it's the fantasy angle that does this movie in. Also: those family scenes feel very natural, presumably due to Kunis being a child of former Ukrainians. But..... but..
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Oh! and as for the genetics angle I now fully expect Jurassic World to be a turd as well. Hollywood doesn't understand this stuff, apparently.