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[Funky Papa]

When you are ready to crow with a slice of humble pie.

I mean, the movie still feels like a mistake, but at least they got that right.

 

[Jobbs]

When you are ready to crow with a slice of humble pie.

I mean, the movie still feels like a mistake, but at least they got that right.

I don't have any great affinity for Ghost in the Shell, the author already ruined it by turning it into little more than jerk off books for little boys. I'd be embarrassed to have the latter one on my shelf.

I'll probably watch this just out of curiosity.

 

[Deleted member 10571]

I never watched or read anything Ghost in the Shell before >_>

 

[ThoseDeafMutes]

GITS is a solid anime film. The TV show was also good but a bit different from the film's tone.

 

[FloatOn]

I liked the first ghost in the shell cartoon movie

 

[CrudeDiatribe]

Really enjoyed the Stand Alone Complex series— with the exception of the major's lack of pants.

 

[Ceallach]

I'll be the hipster who says she likes the manga. I love Masamune Shirow in general though.

NSFW
No, seriously-really NSFW

 

[Jobbs]

I'll be the hipster who says she likes the manga. I love Masamune Shirow in general though.

NSFW
No, seriously-really NSFW

Yeah, Masamune's horny desperation overtook his creative spark at some point. Appleseed was cool.

As an illustrator though he's a god.

 

[Deleted member 10571]

I had an Appleseed book as a teen and adored the artstyle. The design of the robot guy is still one of the coolest things I've ever seen, in terms of character design.

 

[Jobbs]

I had an Appleseed book as a teen and adored the artstyle. The design of the robot guy is still one of the coolest things I've ever seen, in terms of character design.

Appleseed and especially Battle Angel Alita were hugely influential on me as I developed my art skills and art style. I used to draw comics/graphic novels.

 

[Deleted member 10571]

Appleseed and especially Battle Angel Alita were hugely influential on me as I developed my art skills and art style. I used to draw comics/graphic novels.

I can totally see that in some of your artwork Sadly I made way too many pauses and now all I can draw is shitty webcomics, which I would totally continue but I'm struggling with ideas for over a year now ;_;

 

[Misha]

I can totally see that in some of your artwork Sadly I made way too many pauses and now all I can draw is shitty webcomics, which I would totally continue but I'm struggling with ideas for over a year now ;_;

Did you draw your avatar?

 

[Jobbs]

I can totally see that in some of your artwork Sadly I made way too many pauses and now all I can draw is shitty webcomics, which I would totally continue but I'm struggling with ideas for over a year now ;_;

if you're really bored and want to look at something shitty, this is a sci fi comic pitch I created in 2008. The pacing was a bit rushed because I had to format the pitch to a specific orientation and number of pages + I wanted to cover a certain amount of story ground.

it sounded like something was going to happen with it, but the publisher (which was a subsidiary of DC comics) folded suddenly. DC shut it down.

I lifted several of the characters and put them in Ghost Song as NPCs

edit: some of it's kinda shit, haha, I was an even worse writer in 2008, apparently

 

[ThoseDeafMutes]

if you're really bored and want to look at something shitty, this is a sci fi comic pitch I created in 2008. The pacing was a bit rushed because I had to format the pitch to a specific orientation and number of pages + I wanted to cover a certain amount of story ground.

it sounded like something was going to happen with it, but the publisher (which was a subsidiary of DC comics) folded suddenly. DC shut it down.

I lifted several of the characters and put them in Ghost Song as NPCs

edit: some of it's kinda shit, haha, I was an even worse writer in 2008, apparently

I detached the clipboard and read it in portrait mode just for you jobbs

A bit expositioney but I mean there's much worse writing in comics

 

[Jobbs]

I detached the clipboard and read it in portrait mode just for you jobbs

A bit expositioney but I mean there's much worse writing in comics

yeah.

some of that was because it was purpose made as a pitch formatted to this specific publisher, and I wanted to get these ideas across quickly.

had I really made the comic it would have been spaced out more. What happened over 8 pages would probably happen over 20+.

it also echoes many of the tendencies I have in my stories. e.g., female characters who aren't overly sexualized by the comic and most the male characters are either aliens, robots, or cripples

lol

 

[Misha]

I wrote a script for a cartoon pitch a few years ago. Haven't bothered to story board it but maybe I should if just for the experience

 

[ThoseDeafMutes]

yeah.

some of that was because it was purpose made as a pitch formatted to this specific publisher, and I wanted to get these ideas across quickly.

had I really made the comic it would have been spaced out more. What happened over 8 pages would probably happen over 20+.

it also echoes many of the tendencies I have in my stories. e.g., female characters who aren't overly sexualized by the comic and most the male characters are either aliens, robots, or cripples

lol

The robot reminds me of too human, where the enemies were the self replicating robot army of a society that died out in the war they built them for. Which is also an idea I incorporated into my own internal design document I'll never bother writing down or acting on.

 

[trab pu kcip]

god I slept until 4pm.

 

[Jobbs]

The robot reminds me of too human, where the enemies were the self replicating robot army of a society that died out in the war they built them for. Which is also an idea I incorporated into my own internal design document I'll never bother writing down or acting on.

I was really interested in the idea of having this tall, strange looking, fucked up robot sort of be surrogate father to a little child. An idea I'd like to look into more sometime.

I wrote a script for a cartoon pitch a few years ago. Haven't bothered to story board it but maybe I should if just for the experience

#justdoit I got where I am, for whatever that's worth, by just doing things without necessarily knowing how

god I slept until 4pm.

hi trabble rock =D

 

[trab pu kcip]

holy shit I just read a comment that said my presentation was "on point"
is this opposite day?

 

[Jobbs]

holy shit I just read a comment that said my presentation was "on point"
is this opposite day?

there are two options.

1) it's sarcasm

2) it wasn't nearly the disaster you think it was and that was in your mind bro

my money's on 2

 

[You Know Nothing]

God is real.

 

[Ceallach]

holy shit I just read a comment that said my presentation was "on point"
is this opposite day?

Nah, you're just that good <3

 

[Misha]

#justdoit I got where I am, for whatever that's worth, by just doing things without necessarily knowing how

I might need to rewrite it a bit cause it might be a bit on the "lolrandom" side. It's basically about a detective who's halfway between Sherlock Holmes and don Quixote with a serious sugar addiction. Very much a kid friendly concept and a good excuse to write real whodunnits and parody different mystery and crime tropes

holy shit I just read a comment that said my presentation was "on point"
is this opposite day?

I've learned that what I consider to be a good presentation and what the audience considers good don't seem to usually be a good thing. After failing a bunch of speeches in high school for whatever reason I started doing things in a way that made my college teacher say seemed "confident"

So yeah sounds like you did well. Gratz

 

[Jobbs]

I might need to rewrite it a bit cause it might be a bit on the "lolrandom" side. It's basically about a detective who's halfway between Sherlock Holmes and don Quixote with a serious sugar addiction. Very much a kid friendly concept and a good excuse to write real whodunnits and parody different mystery and crime tropes

could be good (tbh most things COULD be good). would it be a cartoony/kiddie art style?

 

[trab pu kcip]

there are two options.

1) it's sarcasm

2) it wasn't nearly the disaster you think it was and that was in your mind bro

my money's on 2

Nah, you're just that good <3

I might need to rewrite it a bit cause it might be a bit on the "lolrandom" side. It's basically about a detective who's halfway between Sherlock Holmes and don Quixote with a serious sugar addiction. Very much a kid friendly concept and a good excuse to write real whodunnits and parody different mystery and crime tropes

I've learned that what I consider to be a good presentation and what the audience considers good don't seem to usually be a good thing. After failing a bunch of speeches in high school for whatever reason I started doing things in a way that made my college teacher say seemed "confident"

So yeah sounds like you did well. Gratz

<33

also I wanna see that cartoon

 

[Jobbs]

:: proposing intensifies ::

I'm not fucking kidding. I'd go buy a ring

 

[RobotNinjaHornets]

holy shit I just read a comment that said my presentation was "on point"
is this opposite day?

Nailed it yo

 

[Misha]

could be good (tbh most things COULD be good). would it be a cartoony/kiddie art style?

A bit similar to professor Layton overall but the styles of each character is a bit different, often dependent on what they're parodying (ex. Phoenix wright) and every background character has a generic smiley face. The background does what some kids shows do and is sorta watercolory and fades to white when it's beyond the focus of the scene (which is partially dependent on where the main character's attention is)

 

[Transhuman]

A bit similar to professor Layton overall but the styles of each character is a bit different, often dependent on what they're parodying (ex. Phoenix wright) and every background character has a generic smiley face. The background does what some kids shows do and is sorta watercolory and fades to white when it's beyond the focus of the scene (which is partially dependent on where the main character's attention is)

 

[Chuckie]

God is real.

The only part I hate about the game

 

[Transhuman]

:: proposing intensifies ::

I'm not fucking kidding. I'd go buy a ring

I found her online for you Hobbs.

http://i.imgur.com/rjJA7uo.png

 

[trab pu kcip]

:: proposing intensifies ::

I'm not fucking kidding. I'd go buy a ring

this is sharp knees but I never understood barbed wire tattoos. also that thing in her nose disgraces one of the most beautiful organs human beings have.
apart from that cute though.

 

[Jobbs]

I found her online for you Hobbs.

http://i.imgur.com/rjJA7uo.png

this is sharp knees but I never understood barbed wire tattoos. also that thing in her nose disgraces one of the most beautiful organs human beings have.
apart from that cute though.

I already know who she is. She's a tattoo artist named Grace Neutral.

Part of her appeal is what an individual she is, so I accept her modifications/accessories/tats as they are. She's a great person

Try not to fall in love

 

[Transhuman]

What trab is saying is that this girl is cute and every decision this girl has ever made concerning her body is wrong.

 

[Jobbs]

What trab is saying is that this girl is cute and every decision this girl has ever made concerning her body is wrong.

and what I'm trying to say is she could burn my house down with me in it and I wouldn't mind

 

[trab pu kcip]

What trab is saying is that this girl is cute and every decision this girl has ever made concerning her body is wrong.

no. I just brought up two little things that I personally don't find appealing. read again. I'm not a square like you other people.

 

[Jobbs]

no. I just brought up two little things that I personally don't find appealing. read again. I'm not a square like you other people.

I'm less square than you. I'm proposing to a woman who removed her belly button for a tattoo and had her ears changed into pointy ears

 

[Misha]

Oh bartholomew

 

[Vazra]

Ugh ai hate wearing jeans but Im going out. Hate the way my butt and bulge show. &#128557;

 

[Ceallach]

Ugh ai hate wearing jeans but Im going out. Hate the way my butt and bulge show. &#128557;

Go oldschool. Get some jncos

 

[trab pu kcip]

I'm less square than you. I'm proposing to a woman who removed her belly button for a tattoo and had her ears changed into pointy ears

I'd date a wolfman

 

[You Know Nothing]

Ugh ai hate wearing jeans but Im going out. Hate the way my butt and bulge show. &#128557;

Stealth brag?

 

[Transhuman]

no. I just brought up two little things that I personally don't find appealing. read again. I'm not a square like you other people.

People will understand my humour someday. And square!? I'll have you know I painted my nails once. Only once though because it was really painful.

 

[Jobbs]

I'd date a wolfman

I'd date the feather duster

 

[Xiao Hu]

:: proposing intensifies ::

I'm not fucking kidding. I'd go buy a ring

Aaaarg, facetattoos....what a shame

 

[Misha]

People will understand my humour someday. And square!? I'll have you know I painted my nails once. Only once though because it was really painful.

I understood it!

 

[You Know Nothing]

The only part I hate about the game

Does not compute.

It's incredible.

 

[trab pu kcip]

People will understand my humour someday. And square!? I'll have you know I painted my nails once. Only once though because it was really painful.

painful?

I'd date the feather duster

lol of course you would. she's hot.

 

[Jobbs]

Aaaarg, facetattoos....what a shame

if it keeps german fuckboys away from my woman it's yet another plus